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Nuclear Wonderland #2: Unwelcome Party
Part 2 of my theme's comics.
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2 hours after arrvial...



Helad: Is the coast clear?

Jareroden: Yeah.



Helad: Good. That clawed creature took us by surprise. Anything behind us, Ahpolki?



Ahpolki: Nope.

Helad: Arrocding to our employers, we're suppoused to meet up with another ally of ours.



Helad: Hmm, strange. It's supposed to be here by now.

Jareroden: *Sees something* ....?



Jareroden: Err, sir....





Helad: Wait here.





Helad: Hmmm......



Helad: Both of you, over here!



Rookie Toa: Sir!



Helad: Ahpolki, Help me rebuild this machine.

Ahpolki: Yes sir.



Helad: Jareroden, see if you can find idvidence of any sort. It could tell us what happened.

Jareroden: Got it.





Jareroden: Hmm....



Ahpolki: Just what sort of technolgy is this?



Helad: Something from... both friend and foe.



Jareroden: 'Ello?



Uztamn: *Snarles, tries to slash at the Toa.*

Jareroden: Hey!



Helad: And that should do it.



Jareroden: Uh guys?



Jareroden: I think I just walked into the Nui-Rama's nest.





Uztamn: *Scrach!*

Jareroden: WOAH!



THUMB!

Jareroden: OOF!





Slash!

Uznamt: *Roars in pain*



Thud.



Stab!



Jareroden: Ech. What is this stuff?



Nest: *Roar!*

Jareroden: Ah Karzahni.



Zap!
Bzzt!



Helad: Well, I think that turned out well.



Jareroden: Thank Mata-Nui you guys showed up.

?: Analazing "guys".



Group: ?



Wielder: Scan complete. "guys" confirmed: Ahpolki, Jareroden, and Helad.



Meanwhile...



Aridike: *Sighs* What a day.

Gringat: Tell me about it.



Akara: So what's this Zoldac guy like?

Komart: Well, according to legend, he-



Clank!

Akara: What was that?



Komart: I'll go check it out.



Komart: Hello?



Komart: EEP!



Akara; *Burst into uncontrolible laughter.*

Gringat: Good Lord!

Aridike: What the hazel is that?



Komart: Er, some kinda metal arm.



Aridike: metal arm?



Aridike: Let me see.



Aridike: .....



Aridike: Its okay guys. Just a bit of scrap m-



Metallic bang!



Group: *Screams*



Aridike: Grrr.....



Aridike: RAH!

Thud.



?: *Screech*

Aridike: Now what?



Uzmatn: *Pounces on Aridike.*

Aridike: GAH! Get this thing off-a me!



Komart: I got it!

Zap!



CRITICAL HIT!





*Gas is escaping through hole*

Aridike: *Holds breath.*



Aridike: *Grabs tube.*



*Plugs tube back on.*



Aridike: Takes a deep breath.*


Akara: ....uh, okay.

Gringat: You're an Av-Matoran!?




Komart: ....what's that?



Gringat: Still doesn't explain your fitness, though.



BZZT!

Komart: What was that!?



Aridike: Eh?



Aridike: HOLY GANDUNKA!!!





Gringat: What are they?

Aridike: Qanotik, they absorb all sorts of energy! Use your meele weapons!



Meanwhile...



Zukon: So your world, Izewofk, had a... what were the worlds? "Nuclear War"?



Koluh: Yep. Used to be a might fine place this was. Back 50 years ago, each continent elected their own ruler.



Koluh: "Vote fot us." They shouted. "We'll save the world together!"



Koluh: *Spits* More like set the world on fire.



Zukon: I'm really sory about your unfornatece,-



Zukon: -But I need to find a way back to my world.



Koluh: So you's a alien afder dall? Well, dur used to be dis huge rock-it.



Koluh: But it got turned into a monster-sized Nuke at the last sec.



Zukon: Drat.



? ROAR!

Zukon: What was that!?



Koluh: Eh?





Koluh: SWEET GRANNY OF BELL HILLS!



Mutants: RRRRROOOOOOOOAAAAARRRRR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



Zukon: Wha-WHAT are they!?



Koluh: *Tosses EE Shotgun to Zukon* Mutants! Shoot first, ask later!!!



Zukon: What's that supposed t-



Zukon: *Gasps*

Mutant: RRROOOOOOOAAAAAARRRRRR!!!!!!!!



Comments

 I like it 
  August 23, 2011
Well it's good, but some pictures are blurry. the effects are well done ! I give it a 5/5
Ahpolki Ihu
 I like it 
Peter Crasher the Powerlord
  August 22, 2011
Coolio! BTW, before becoming a Toa, Komart's personality was a little different. He used to be curious, active, and talented.
Ahpolki Ihu
Peter Crasher the Powerlord
  August 22, 2011
Well, Komart did find out that he is Zoldac's son at some time when he was a Toa so he did not know about his father when he was a Matoran.
Ahpolki Ihu
 I like it 
Chaos Master
  August 22, 2011
Zukon is pretty clueless about guns, so good job on getting his character right. As for the story, good job, and the affects are good.
 I made it 
  August 22, 2011
Quoting Peter Crasher the Powerlord Coolio! BTW, before becoming a Toa, Komart's personality was a little different. He used to be curious, active, and talented.
Was he aware of his powers and status as Zoldac's zon?
 I made it 
  August 22, 2011
Quoting Chaos Master Zukon is pretty clueless about guns, so good job on getting his character right. As for the story, good job, and the affects are good.
Is there anything else about his character I should know? Like powers and traits? I'm trying to get each being's personality right.
 I like it 
  August 22, 2011
nice man :D
 
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