Orik: Master, You called?
???: yes Orik, i have a job for you.
Orik: whatever you need sir.
???: Good to see your loyalty is still to me, Anyways, i feel the presence of a new threat, i'm still not sure of the location, so i need you to assemble a team for me.
Orik: Whatever you say master
???: Good... Now get going!!
Orik: Yes sir...
LATER THAT DAY
Orik: ahhh... Drayden, good to see you since your 'accident'.
Drayden: Yes, good to see you as well... what can i do for you?
Orik: our master has called us to assist him with a ppossible new threat to our rule over this land.
Drayden: what does that have to do with us?
Orik: he needs us to help him do to his 'current form'.
Drayden: i believe i can help, my new arm seems to be fitting quite well, it especially helps with my power over earth.
Orik: so, you'll help?
Drayden: Sure why not?
Scrack: Orik, you rang?
Orik: Ah yes scrack, ineed your assistantce.
Scrack: doing what?
Orik: scouting the island for anything suspicous.
Scrack: suspicous how?
Orik: just do as your told!
Scrack: yes sir!!
Orik: Go! go! go!
Scrack; Here i go!
AT A MATORAN TRAINING CAMP
???: Gusta(green arms) you need to work on your punches a little more. Mavy, your form is sloppy!
???: Zom! (brown arms) put more power in it, Benva, put less power into it!!
???: Ajaz, how are you doing to day?
Ajaz: oh i'm doing fine Agete, you?
(not sure what this is :P)
Agete: so, how are the recruits doing?
Ajaz: they've done better.
Agete: Hahahaha. you should go easier on them, they are just matoran you know?
Ajaz: i know but still...
???: time to pounce!!
???:Agete sir, i have a report for you.
Agete: Yes, what is it Zilla?
Zilla: the makuta have not done much activity latley, their camps have grown a bit, but that is it.
Agete: excellent work Zilla.
Zilla: Thank you.
Zilla: should we prepare the troops?
Agete: no, are troops arent quite strong enough(winks at ajaz)
???: what are they talking about?
Evok; what do you think scavenger?
Scavenger: i don't know.
Agete: Zilla, you should see this.
Zilla: what is it?
Agete: well, we arent quite sure Who or WHAT he is, but he crashed here a week ago and has been unconcious ever since.
Evok: Now what?
Agete pulls the cover off a bit
Zilla: Oh my Mata Nui!!!
Stay tuned to next weeks edition of LoCN where questions like, who is the mystery person, whi s he here, and more.
Quoting JPfan65 Studios
Awesomeness! Cool Story Man! I Just Noticed That Scrack Looks Like A Pterosaur, Zilla Looks Like A Species Of Theropod & Agete Looks A Little Bit Like A Capeless Jurassica =P !
I noticed the pterasaur, i tried to add a little prehistoricness for ya, But i just tried to make zilla as much like the godzilla that attacked new york. so maybe thats why he looks dinosaur-ish. so yeah
Quoting Chopperskull (Leader of air)
Well really cool ! I don't like that the villains at the beginning are soo colorful. This first chapter is a little blank and needs more description, but so far, soo good. 4/5 Scavenger looks cool !
thanks for the suggestions, and the reason for why the villans are multicollored is because at the moment for my story i'm short on parts. and i think scavenger looks cool too. Say, do you mind if i can put you in my story in a way, i mean it would have to be like the toa nuva sets but still, could i?