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Man Hunt Part 1: A Mission
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In association with LukeSC, ChrisOtron, and Instant Noodles Photoshopping, Legofreak2444 presents Man Hunt: Part 1.
About this creation
See the Prologue first.


Jordan: Alright guys, Rock…Paper…Scissors!

Bam!
Ossum: Hullo?
Krizan: Ha! I win.
Messenger: I-I’m a-a messenger, f-from a village on the other side of th-the mountains.

Jordan: Whoa now, calm down now, catch your breath.
Messenger: I-I’m fine, we had five Toa come through our village, they spent a few days there, then one sneaked out alone, a-and never came back. Then two of the other four went out to look and they never came back either! The remaining Toa sent me to get help while they went out to look.
Krizan: Where did they go to look?
Messenger: They went through the forest. No one’s ever wanted to go in there before, some say it’s haunted.

Ossum: Then we must be off!
Jordan: But wait, we have to consult the elder before we can go off on a mission.
Ossum: You don’t mean…

Jube: Go away kids!
Jordan: Come on Jube, it’s us! Jordan, Krizan and Ossum. We need to talk!

Jordan: Jube! A Toa’s gone, we need your permission to go and search for her.

Jube: Eh, talk to the wall.

Jordan: I am talking to a wall!

Jordan: Juuube!
Jube: Grumble… What happened to the other elder?
Jordan: What?…He died two months ago!

Jube: Weasel, go throw something over the wall.
Jordan: …She’s a girl!



Jube: Well, let’s get a move on.
Krizan: …Us?…
Jube: Course, I can’t let ya go alone, you’d probably shoot yourself in the foot if I wasn’t there.

Jordan: Uh, Jube. I don’t think—
Jube: Lumpy! My bag!
Ossum: “Lumpy”?

Jordan: Whoa, who’s that?
Jube: My Lumpy.
Krizan: He…he’s a robot?

Jube: Yeah, when I was young and crazy…about two weeks ago, I was out riding on my dune buggy when I came across this Lumpy. I came to him and he addressed me master. So now he’s my Lumpy.
Jordan: Uh…

Jube: Alright. Lumpy, my bag, Possum, you carry Weasel and Jordan, me.

Weasel: Ochywawa!
Ossum: Shut up.
Jube: Forward!
Jordan: Ungh!

Jube: Hang a right.

Krizan: Uh, Jube, the village is that way.

Jube: I knew that, you skinky little--

Later.
Jordan: Hmm, well, we should be there by sometime tomorrow.
Jube: Might as well bed down here for the night.

Jordan: Yeah, sun’s down.

Krizan: Grumble…Forgot my sleep pack.
Jube: Lumpy, next time make sure the bag is packed.
Lumpy: [Sorry Master.]

Jube: Night, ninnies.
Jordan: Ugh...great start eh?
Ossum: You said it.

Meanwhile.

????: The Toa are coming.

????: They're coming for you.

????: And you'll be waiting for them.

To be continued...

I hope you enjoyed chapter one. Stay tuned!
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  November 2, 2011
Oooh!Intriguing!
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  September 8, 2011
super awesome i cant wait for the next one!
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  September 7, 2011
Wow, still can't get over how buffed up Jordan is... Oh, my belaC v2 is posted!
  September 7, 2011
Are you still on? If you are can you get in MOCing Battle? ,Shadow
Legofreak2444 ~
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S.E.D. (Being of Insanity)
  September 6, 2011
WWWWWUUUUUZZZZZ UUUUUPPPPP?????!!!!! Howst going man? I miss all you, guys but maybe i will post a creation soon(just to let you know i'm not dead)!
Legofreak2444 ~
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S.E.D. (Being of Insanity)
  September 6, 2011
Great! Good luck on school. Its nice to be back for a visit!
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Commander Firefight
  September 6, 2011
Is it cool if you some how stick my self moc Quoggles in the man hunt! You don't have to just asking.
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  September 6, 2011
Quoting S.E.D. (Being of Insanity)
Thanks, nice to hear from you. :)
 I made it 
  September 6, 2011
Quoting S.E.D. (Being of Insanity)
Great man, just started school today. Glad to hear from you. :) How's the movie making going?
  September 5, 2011
I cant' see the photos, but I have to comment since I did the promote your MOC thing.
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  September 5, 2011
Awesome! I love the cliffhangers on this!
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  September 5, 2011
Quoting Ware wolf The White Knight!
I guess.
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  September 5, 2011
Great work,great plot ,great newspaper,all is good!
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  September 5, 2011
EPIC! Gotta love that Jube! Great work mate ;) This should be awesome! Can't wait to see more :D
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Chaos Master
  September 4, 2011
Jube is so my favorite character! Great story so far!
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  September 4, 2011
haha, funny stuff :) im glad Jube came along, he makes it funny, great chapter!
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  September 4, 2011
hey legofreak, jpfan65 and shadow falcon are having a moc-off, do you maybe wanna be a judge? ill ask jpfan65 and shadow falcon is there okay with that but only if you want to ;)
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  September 4, 2011
BWHAHAHAHA!!! "Yeah, when I was young and crazy…about two weeks ago..." That make me lol. Great Job! I love it!
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  September 4, 2011
Kewl!
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  September 4, 2011
Awesome story!
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  September 4, 2011
LOVE IT! YAY JUBE! Oh please keep it going 'till we meet again! I SO want to get in on it!
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  September 4, 2011
That was entertaining! Anything with Jube is awesome! I can't wait for the next chapter!
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  September 4, 2011
This story is funny (Jube) and exciting! The photos were very well made, and the story is fantastic!
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  September 4, 2011
EPIC!
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  September 4, 2011
Great!
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  September 4, 2011
awesome! i see lots of new mocs in this! BTW i'm starting a new series part 1 should be up today, so if your interested, have a look!
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  September 4, 2011
nice outdoors. Going great so far! So the pics you want me to do are the fighting scenes?
Legofreak2444 ~
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Toa Oblivious ,Master of Earth
  September 3, 2011
epicness!
Legofreak2444 ~
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Commander Firefight
  September 3, 2011
Funny! "Lumpy" hahahaha! Nice man!
Legofreak2444 ~
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JPfan65 Studios
  September 3, 2011
Epic Story Man =D !
Legofreak2444 ~
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Soap M.
  September 3, 2011
I love Jube, and Weasel. :)
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  September 3, 2011
OOoh, I have a feeling this is gonna be a great series/story!
  September 3, 2011
So, as we were discussing in The Private Chat Group Of Friends (:P) Could Destrin be in it? He is Neutral. So he could do something Good or Evil.
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  September 3, 2011
I sense eeevviiilllll.
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  September 3, 2011
Awesome. I must know who that mysterious black figure is!
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  September 3, 2011
ooh! First LOL... then suspense! :P can't wait for the next part!
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  September 3, 2011
Awesome story!!!! Its a nail biter!!!!
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  September 3, 2011
Awesome Story!
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  September 3, 2011
Argh! Epicness! And now I must wait in suspense for the next episode.
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  September 3, 2011
CANT WAIT FOR EPISODE TWO!!!!! SO AWESOME
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  September 3, 2011
Epic job! It was funny! ,Shadow
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  September 3, 2011
NICE story! keep it up! :D
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  September 3, 2011
KOOL :D
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  September 3, 2011
Nice Comic so far Bro! ;D
 
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