Episode 02.
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Jones dove for his gun the second he heard the gun shot.
The other survivors charged the building.
Jones opened the door.
The three people charged in.
The man was still in the same place.
He shot the first one in.
Jones followed the others in.
Jones pointed the gun at the man and pulled the trigger.
Several of the survivors, now dead, where laying on the floor.
Jones left the room followed by Joseph.
There was blood on the ground where Ken had been shot, but no body.
A zombie came running around the building.
Ashely was sitting in the truck waiting.
She floored the gas peddle, crushing the zombie into the wall
The action made the back of the truck tip over.
"We should run!" Joseph shouted.
Joseph got his son off the truck and urged him forward.
Joseph heard a noise from behind the truck.
Several zombies came around the corner.
The survivors hid behind the truck, watching the zombies.
The zombies charged into the room.
"Guys, run, the zombies are distracted, I'll catch up!" Jones said.
Jones climbed back on the truck.
He pulled the plug on the back of the truck, letting oil leak out.
Soon Jones was standing in oil.
He heard a noise from the small house.
Soon, all of the zombies where charging at him.
He waited till they got closer.
Hr waited until the last moment.
Then pulled the trigger.
Episode 3 coming soon.
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September 14, 2011 |
Quoting The Timinater !
NP? what does that mean?
no problem, lol |
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September 14, 2011 |
NP? what does that mean? |
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September 14, 2011 |
Quoting The Timinater !
@ Owl, Popcorn, and Mr. Viking- no probs guys! all in the line of duty! well, great ep, and thanks for making my guy a hero!!! yay!
NP! |
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Nate Bott September 13, 2011 |
Wow! Once again, you made the episode awesome! |
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September 13, 2011 |
@ Owl, Popcorn, and Mr. Viking- no probs guys! all in the line of duty! well, great ep, and thanks for making my guy a hero!!! yay! |
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September 13, 2011 |
Nice. |
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September 13, 2011 |
Amazing. Jones is a hero. |
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September 13, 2011 |
Quoting Deus Otiosus
He... Could have shot it from afar? Or is there an unexpected concept in the working of a gun?
-_- it was in an enclosed space (surrounded by the cars) |
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September 13, 2011 |
He... Could have shot it from afar? Or is there an unexpected concept in the working of a gun? |
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September 13, 2011 |
This is a very nice episode. |
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September 13, 2011 |
oh, and i would have liked to see the tanker as a whole in a pic, with the stuff, the other vehicle too, we don t get to see them much, a pic of all elements once in awhile is a good thing to situate. |
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September 13, 2011 |
a good trick is to picture them from behind when they talk if the facial expression is nt right, it works nicely most of the time, i was nt distracted by that, but, it s a trick, i loved the concept of packing stuff over the tanker, and the oil on the ground too, just a detail, it should nt be 'crude oil' in these tanker, once in there, it s supposed to be already refined, so it should be yellow, but, black adds to the drama, and we know what you mean, i like that the context and locations are different, it s refreshing! good work cal!!! |
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September 13, 2011 |
Quoting Christian Collins
Very nice but I am not a big fan of you trying to make it look like their mouths are moving, it looks a little cheesy.
much better than them daftly smiling |
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September 13, 2011 |
Very nice but I am not a big fan of you trying to make it look like their mouths are moving, it looks a little cheesy. |
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September 13, 2011 |
Nice episode my friend!!! I really liked the thrilling action. Jone's sacrifice will be remembered. He was pretty awesome till the end. And yays about me surviving in a CYOA farther than three episodes! It's a new record for me.:D Again I'll say that this is a really great episode. Nice job!!! |
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September 13, 2011 |
Thank you Jones! Whew, i thought i was a goner! Great episode! |
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