This is Saria. She is a Toa of Water. She was recently a toa in training, but has been promoted into a Guard. she is doing a nightshift, which will be more sinister than she'd imagine...
About this creation
Saria: Man, this shift is so boring! wait, who are those guys over there?
Thunder: when's that "assosiate" coming wiv us?
XPlode: thunder, you idiot! he 'aint commin' wiv us, he will just set up camp here, and we hav to greet him, ennit?
Saria: Freeze! what are you doing in these private area?
XPlode: i don't like this person. she don't look on of them heroes. Thunder, how 'bout we take her out?
Thunder: heh heh, sure!
Saria: i think i'll be a lot more tricky to deal wi...
???: leave her to me, gentlemen....
Saria: halt! W-what are you!?
AAAAAAAAAAAAHH!
(meanwhile)
Galika: so Nebulus said he was summoned by someone of Godlike power to kill us.
Trokan: thank you, Galika.
Trokan: this doesn't sound right. the only creatures who hate Toa are Gostoks, but they are not of "Godlike power". i will research more into this.
Onika: we thank you for your help, turaga.
Benu: Wait... who's that?
Parah: what?
Destrin: do not fear, i am an ally of toa, since i am one myself
Korapa: so who are you?
Destrin: My name is Toa Destrin. but i'm not important....
... A toa by the name of Saria has dissapeared. Matoran have sighted a "Giant Monster" walking towards the area where Saria was...
Leka: say no more, we will help you find her!
(so later)
Destrin: Benu, Galika, you check out those hills over there. Leka, Onika, you find evidence in that pit, and Parah, Korapa, your with me.
Parah: man, its dark in here!
Destrin: A perfect place for a monster to hide.
Korapa: shhh.
???: help.... help me.....
Destrin: it's her.
Parah: so that mean she's alive....
Korapa: What happened!?
CRASH
Parah: aaaaah!
(half an hour later)
Leka: half an hour. and no sign of them.
Onika: So this person must not like toa...
Galika: wait... A thing that hates toa.... and is a "massive monster"....
Benu: The guy who hired Nebulus!
Leka: it all seemes to be going on in that cave.... i think we'll find the answers in there...
Onika: lets go.
Saria: someone.... please....help....
Galika: i guess that's her.
Benu: then you were right!
Leka: ONIKA!
(Later)
Leka: >Groan<
Leka: i'm... tied up?
Sobek: i'm glad you have awakened. thats all of you, right?
Leka: your the one who kidnapped Saria
Sobek: so what, Toa?
Saria was just something to lure you here!
Sobek: and i got an extra toa. oh well, my employer wouldn't mind an extra head or two...
Korapa: Why are you so desparate to have us killed?
Sobek: oh apperantly, you'll get in the way of my employer's great plan to make the world a better place...
Benu: is this the same guy who hired Nebulus?
Sobek: yes.
(leka manages to flip his blade into the air with his foot and catches the blade)
Leka: let me tell you something...
(leka uses his blade to cut the rope)
You talk too much!
(Leka starts cutting the bounds of his fellow toa)
Leka: and you shouldn't leave our blades so close to our feet!
Sobek: WHAT!? NO!!!
(soon all the toa have surrounded Sobek)
Sobek: well, this is my escape!
Onika: thank you Destrin for helping us. and Saria, we apologise for you suffering because of us.
Saria: that's okay.
Destrin: i'm thinking of getting promotion for you.
Saria: W-What?
Destrin: after all, you deserve it.
NEXT ISSUE: The Assassin
WERTMAN'S NOTES
Well, this took me 2 days to get all the pictures uploaded. hope you liked this episode. And Saria will be upgraded before she becomes an official MOC of mine. so not much action in this one, but a lot of build up. see ya next time ;D
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August 28, 2012 |
Quoting Red-Eyes Rider
2 days to get this uploaded? I'm sorry man. You did a nice job with all the effects! :D Alright, this is convincing me to post Chapter 3 of my story. I'll do it!
It's okay. The photo's are a bit of a pain in the butt for me :P |
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August 27, 2012 |
2 days to get this uploaded? I'm sorry man. You did a nice job with all the effects! :D Alright, this is convincing me to post Chapter 3 of my story. I'll do it! |
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November 20, 2011 |
Quoting S.T.S The Forgotten
OHHHHH! Okay, I understand now :P
are you sure? XD |
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OHHHHH! Okay, I understand now :P |
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September 18, 2011 |
Quoting The PURE *___*
when will i be in this series?!
i do not know, but if your desparate... you'll be roughly about ep 8, 9..... |
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September 18, 2011 |
Quoting Eathuis 305
I still like it!
ok then :D |
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when will i be in this series?! |
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Eathuis 305 September 15, 2011 |
I still like it! |
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September 15, 2011 |
Quoting LegoBob 123
Yes I did! The shadows were a really nice touch... So cool! BTW, I love the edits at the end! :D Is Morack gonna be in this, just out of interest...?
glad u like. i don't know if i am going to put Morack in there. hopefully! |
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September 15, 2011 |
Quoting S.T.S The Forgotten
Awesome chapter! Especially since Destrin was in their :P I really like how you made Destrin a Toa General person :D And for a awkward reason, I feel somethingis gonna happen between Saria and Destrin -_- A inapropiate thing lol JK, kinda.
Thats what ARCHANGEL TYREAL . said, but no. i'm using her to develop a new character |
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September 15, 2011 |
Quoting The PURE *___*
is the assasin (and chick magnet) me?
nah (but she is a "chick") |
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September 15, 2011 |
is the assasin (and chick magnet) me? |
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September 14, 2011 |
Awesome chapter! Especially since Destrin was in their :P I really like how you made Destrin a Toa General person :D And for a awkward reason, I feel somethingis gonna happen between Saria and Destrin -_- A inapropiate thing lol JK, kinda. |
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Yes I did! The shadows were a really nice touch... So cool! BTW, I love the edits at the end! :D Is Morack gonna be in this, just out of interest...? |
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September 14, 2011 |
did anyone notice Sobek's shadow in picture 23? |
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September 14, 2011 |
Quoting LegoBob 123
Well, there are Australian and American, they don't understand how we speak ;) Innit bruv?
yea blad :D |
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Well, there are Australian and American, they don't understand how we speak ;) Innit bruv? |
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September 14, 2011 |
DUN... DUN... DUUUUUNNNNN!!!!! |
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September 14, 2011 |
Quoting Chopperskull (Leader of air)
Agree with Ben Cossy. Why? But yes, it was a really good chapter. I'm sorry I don't check out you mocs often, but this team of toa is really cool ! I like how you added Destrin in there :)Awesome chapter. 5/5
thank you XD and i don't mind that you don't check out my mocs often, and Thunder and XPlode were talking in slang (but i really fail at it XD) |
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September 14, 2011 |
Quoting Ben Cossy
An awesome chapter! Lovely work! Just one question though, why were Thunder and Xplode talking all weird? Anyway, a brilliant chapter mate! Can't wait for more ;)
thank you, and Thunder and XPlode were talking in slang (but i really fail at it XD) |
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September 14, 2011 |
Quoting Toa Oblivious ,Master of Earth
very cool!
thanks :D |
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September 14, 2011 |
Quoting ARCHANGEL TYREAL .
nic chapter im definitely going to follow this! and i think i know whats going on with destrin and the girl that was kidnapped lol!
i see where your coming from, but no |
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September 14, 2011 |
Quoting Demontile the Demon god of Darkness and ?
Cool .I wonder who the god like toa hater is.Demonon can be evil.lol
sorry. it's not Demonon |
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September 14, 2011 |
Quoting sniperray213 ???
kool :D
thanks :D |
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September 14, 2011 |
Quoting Eathuis 305
Love it, and i love Korapa hahahahaa!
brill mate!
hows that funny? |
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September 14, 2011 |
Quoting JPfan65 Studios
Nice Story =D !
thanks |
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September 14, 2011 |
Agree with Ben Cossy. Why? But yes, it was a really good chapter. I'm sorry I don't check out you mocs often, but this team of toa is really cool ! I like how you added Destrin in there :)Awesome chapter. 5/5 |
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September 14, 2011 |
An awesome chapter! Lovely work! Just one question though, why were Thunder and Xplode talking all weird? Anyway, a brilliant chapter mate! Can't wait for more ;) |
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JPfan65 Studios September 13, 2011 |
Nice Story =D ! |
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Eathuis 305 September 13, 2011 |
Love it, and i love Korapa hahahahaa!
brill mate! |
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September 13, 2011 |
very cool! |
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September 13, 2011 |
nic chapter im definitely going to follow this! and i think i know whats going on with destrin and the girl that was kidnapped lol! |
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September 13, 2011 |
Cool .I wonder who the god like toa hater is.Demonon can be evil.lol |
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September 13, 2011 |
kool :D |
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