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Hunt For "God" #2: The Dissapearance
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This is Saria. She is a Toa of Water. She was recently a toa in training, but has been promoted into a Guard. she is doing a nightshift, which will be more sinister than she'd imagine...
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Saria: Man, this shift is so boring! wait, who are those guys over there?

Thunder: when's that "assosiate" coming wiv us?
XPlode: thunder, you idiot! he 'aint commin' wiv us, he will just set up camp here, and we hav to greet him, ennit?

Saria: Freeze! what are you doing in these private area?

XPlode: i don't like this person. she don't look on of them heroes. Thunder, how 'bout we take her out?

Thunder: heh heh, sure!
Saria: i think i'll be a lot more tricky to deal wi...

???: leave her to me, gentlemen....

Saria: halt! W-what are you!?

AAAAAAAAAAAAHH!

(meanwhile)

Galika: so Nebulus said he was summoned by someone of Godlike power to kill us.
Trokan: thank you, Galika.

Trokan: this doesn't sound right. the only creatures who hate Toa are Gostoks, but they are not of "Godlike power". i will research more into this.

Onika: we thank you for your help, turaga.

Benu: Wait... who's that?
Parah: what?

Destrin: do not fear, i am an ally of toa, since i am one myself

Korapa: so who are you?
Destrin: My name is Toa Destrin. but i'm not important....

... A toa by the name of Saria has dissapeared. Matoran have sighted a "Giant Monster" walking towards the area where Saria was...

Leka: say no more, we will help you find her!

(so later)
Destrin: Benu, Galika, you check out those hills over there. Leka, Onika, you find evidence in that pit, and Parah, Korapa, your with me.



Parah: man, its dark in here!

Destrin: A perfect place for a monster to hide.

Korapa: shhh.

???: help.... help me.....

Destrin: it's her.

Parah: so that mean she's alive....

Korapa: What happened!?
CRASH
Parah: aaaaah!

(half an hour later)
Leka: half an hour. and no sign of them.

Onika: So this person must not like toa...

Galika: wait... A thing that hates toa.... and is a "massive monster"....
Benu: The guy who hired Nebulus!

Leka: it all seemes to be going on in that cave.... i think we'll find the answers in there...
Onika: lets go.



Saria: someone.... please....help....
Galika: i guess that's her.

Benu: then you were right!
Leka: ONIKA!



(Later)
Leka: >Groan<

Leka: i'm... tied up?

Sobek: i'm glad you have awakened. thats all of you, right?

Leka: your the one who kidnapped Saria
Sobek: so what, Toa?

Saria was just something to lure you here!

Sobek: and i got an extra toa. oh well, my employer wouldn't mind an extra head or two...

Korapa: Why are you so desparate to have us killed?
Sobek: oh apperantly, you'll get in the way of my employer's great plan to make the world a better place...

Benu: is this the same guy who hired Nebulus?
Sobek: yes.

(leka manages to flip his blade into the air with his foot and catches the blade)
Leka: let me tell you something...

(leka uses his blade to cut the rope)
You talk too much!

(Leka starts cutting the bounds of his fellow toa)
Leka: and you shouldn't leave our blades so close to our feet!

Sobek: WHAT!? NO!!!

(soon all the toa have surrounded Sobek)

Sobek: well, this is my escape!

Onika: thank you Destrin for helping us. and Saria, we apologise for you suffering because of us.
Saria: that's okay.

Destrin: i'm thinking of getting promotion for you.
Saria: W-What?

Destrin: after all, you deserve it.
NEXT ISSUE: The Assassin
WERTMAN'S NOTES


Well, this took me 2 days to get all the pictures uploaded. hope you liked this episode. And Saria will be upgraded before she becomes an official MOC of mine. so not much action in this one, but a lot of build up. see ya next time ;D



Comments

 I made it 
  August 28, 2012
Quoting Red-Eyes Rider 2 days to get this uploaded? I'm sorry man. You did a nice job with all the effects! :D Alright, this is convincing me to post Chapter 3 of my story. I'll do it!
It's okay. The photo's are a bit of a pain in the butt for me :P
 I like it 
  August 27, 2012
2 days to get this uploaded? I'm sorry man. You did a nice job with all the effects! :D Alright, this is convincing me to post Chapter 3 of my story. I'll do it!
 I made it 
  November 20, 2011
Quoting S.T.S The Forgotten OHHHHH! Okay, I understand now :P
are you sure? XD
  October 3, 2011
OHHHHH! Okay, I understand now :P
  September 20, 2011
yay!
 I made it 
  September 18, 2011
Quoting The PURE *___* when will i be in this series?!
i do not know, but if your desparate... you'll be roughly about ep 8, 9.....
 I made it 
  September 18, 2011
Quoting Eathuis 305 I still like it!
ok then :D
  September 16, 2011
when will i be in this series?!
Wertman 8
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Eathuis 305
  September 15, 2011
I still like it!
 I made it 
  September 15, 2011
Quoting LegoBob 123 Yes I did! The shadows were a really nice touch... So cool! BTW, I love the edits at the end! :D Is Morack gonna be in this, just out of interest...?
glad u like. i don't know if i am going to put Morack in there. hopefully!
 I made it 
  September 15, 2011
Quoting S.T.S The Forgotten Awesome chapter! Especially since Destrin was in their :P I really like how you made Destrin a Toa General person :D And for a awkward reason, I feel somethingis gonna happen between Saria and Destrin -_- A inapropiate thing lol JK, kinda.
Thats what ARCHANGEL TYREAL . said, but no. i'm using her to develop a new character
 I made it 
  September 15, 2011
Quoting The PURE *___* is the assasin (and chick magnet) me?
nah (but she is a "chick")
 I like it 
  September 15, 2011
is the assasin (and chick magnet) me?
 I like it 
  September 14, 2011
Awesome chapter! Especially since Destrin was in their :P I really like how you made Destrin a Toa General person :D And for a awkward reason, I feel somethingis gonna happen between Saria and Destrin -_- A inapropiate thing lol JK, kinda.
  September 14, 2011
Yes I did! The shadows were a really nice touch... So cool! BTW, I love the edits at the end! :D Is Morack gonna be in this, just out of interest...?
 I made it 
  September 14, 2011
did anyone notice Sobek's shadow in picture 23?
 I made it 
  September 14, 2011
Quoting LegoBob 123 Well, there are Australian and American, they don't understand how we speak ;) Innit bruv?
yea blad :D
  September 14, 2011
Well, there are Australian and American, they don't understand how we speak ;) Innit bruv?
 I like it 
  September 14, 2011
DUN... DUN... DUUUUUNNNNN!!!!!
 I made it 
  September 14, 2011
Quoting Chopperskull (Leader of air) Agree with Ben Cossy. Why? But yes, it was a really good chapter. I'm sorry I don't check out you mocs often, but this team of toa is really cool ! I like how you added Destrin in there :)Awesome chapter. 5/5
thank you XD and i don't mind that you don't check out my mocs often, and Thunder and XPlode were talking in slang (but i really fail at it XD)
 I made it 
  September 14, 2011
Quoting Ben Cossy An awesome chapter! Lovely work! Just one question though, why were Thunder and Xplode talking all weird? Anyway, a brilliant chapter mate! Can't wait for more ;)
thank you, and Thunder and XPlode were talking in slang (but i really fail at it XD)
 I made it 
  September 14, 2011
Quoting Toa Oblivious ,Master of Earth very cool!
thanks :D
 I made it 
  September 14, 2011
Quoting ARCHANGEL TYREAL . nic chapter im definitely going to follow this! and i think i know whats going on with destrin and the girl that was kidnapped lol!
i see where your coming from, but no
 I made it 
  September 14, 2011
Quoting Demontile the Demon god of Darkness and ? Cool .I wonder who the god like toa hater is.Demonon can be evil.lol
sorry. it's not Demonon
 I made it 
  September 14, 2011
Quoting sniperray213 ??? kool :D
thanks :D
 I made it 
  September 14, 2011
Quoting Eathuis 305 Love it, and i love Korapa hahahahaa! brill mate!
hows that funny?
 I made it 
  September 14, 2011
Quoting JPfan65 Studios Nice Story =D !
thanks
 I like it 
  September 14, 2011
Agree with Ben Cossy. Why? But yes, it was a really good chapter. I'm sorry I don't check out you mocs often, but this team of toa is really cool ! I like how you added Destrin in there :)Awesome chapter. 5/5
 I like it 
  September 14, 2011
An awesome chapter! Lovely work! Just one question though, why were Thunder and Xplode talking all weird? Anyway, a brilliant chapter mate! Can't wait for more ;)
Wertman 8
 I like it 
Toa Oblivious ,Master of Earth
  September 13, 2011
very cool!
Wertman 8
 I like it 
JPfan65 Studios
  September 13, 2011
Nice Story =D !
Wertman 8
 I like it 
Eathuis 305
  September 13, 2011
Love it, and i love Korapa hahahahaa! brill mate!
 I like it 
  September 13, 2011
nic chapter im definitely going to follow this! and i think i know whats going on with destrin and the girl that was kidnapped lol!
 I like it 
  September 13, 2011
Cool .I wonder who the god like toa hater is.Demonon can be evil.lol
 I like it 
  September 13, 2011
kool :D
 
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