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Cyberstory 16 ; tough n nuff
episode 16 ; tough n nuff and...action!
About this creation
WILL;
i won t hold him long guys,
i hear the joints twist!

ZAK;
i m getting up!



DEUS;
i m hitting, but, only small greebles fall;
it will take long before we finish this!

WILL;
huungh, right into abandonned traffic!!!



ZAK;
i don t have arms, but, i can quick!
take that!



DEUS;
he s giving me the station s tourist tour!
IN DEPTH!!!

WILL;
i m working on it deus!




WILL;
they used to sell food here?
mmmm, it smells good!

ZAK;
i m having moderate succes here!
a few bits here and there!



WILL;
he s really into it!
can you do something please?

ZAK;
I M KICKING! I M KICKING!!!



ZAK;
FINALLY!
i had to ram him, but, i got him off!




ZAK;
OUPS!!!
he got up before i could!



ZAK;
i m kind of knocked out now!

DEUS;
it s ok zak!
i m on top of the situation...for now!



DEUS;
i m on the roof if you need me!

WILL;
i have a feeling it won t be long before we do!

ZAK;
oh, i feel so cumbersome in that suit!
i m so sorry for this mess,
i keep steping on everything!




WILL;
SOOOO, IT S RAMMING THAT IT TAKES TO GET YOU DOWN???

DEUS;
WAY TO GO WILL!



DEUS;
alright!
you ve got him!

WILL;
how do YOU like it in traffic?

ZAK;
it works real good, some chunks are flying!



DEUS;
oh, well...

ZAK;
we talked a little too soon it seem!




DEUS;
ah nooo!
i had the tour before!

WILL;
hey, could you check the menu for me?
i m getting hungry here!




ZAK;
he s after me!
catch me if you can!



ZAK;
looks like a locomotive ain t much of an obstacle for him!

DEUS;
he s getting lighter!
keep pounding!!!




DEUS;
i had it with the roof!!!

ZAK;
i m squeezed! ... stuck here!

WILL;
stay there! i ll try something!



WILL;
well, that failed! i m on my rear again!



PILOT;
here we are in Cybercity!
hey! what s that?

CALEB;
what s what?...




PILOT;
there is some serious problems here!
we better find another place to land!

CALEB;
we wanted to come to Cybercity, problems or not!
head strait for that tower!!!

PILOT;
are you insane?...




CREATOR S LOG;

another part done!
lots of action next episode too!
see you there!
thanks for your critics and comments!


Cyberstory 16



Comments

 I made it 
  October 1, 2011
thanks a lot guys!!!
 I like it 
  October 1, 2011
all you need now is everything attacking at once, every faction in an even bigger battle
 I like it 
  September 27, 2011
This black mech is definitely my favourite! =)
 I like it 
  September 26, 2011
nice um if you dont mind please try to check into my group little legoton fire department every day if possible and the fist contest is started
 I like it 
  September 26, 2011
Seriously, when will the carnage end? Never mind, keep going ... XD
 I like it 
  September 26, 2011
Lets Get Ready To RUMMMBBBBLLLEE!!!!! Awesome job Frank.
 I like it 
  September 26, 2011
Caleb is indeed insane. What a mess! Great stuff...
 I like it 
  September 26, 2011
This is like the longest epic fight scene I've ever seen in a comic. It's amazing!
 I like it 
  September 25, 2011
I like the brown building in the background :P But the mech action is nice too ;p
 I made it 
  September 25, 2011
thanks a lot guys!!!
 I made it 
  September 25, 2011
Quoting Deus Otiosus thanks deus! i know what you mean, but, i wanted 2 things most, 1, keep it at 20 frames, 2, make it as short a story as i can, but, without too much time distance between the individual shots in the fight, i allowed the helicopter sequence, only because it was vital, but i ll spice it up structurally speaking in the next episode, [16] wich is already partially done.
 I like it 
  September 25, 2011
You know, when you go to a city to visit, and you end up in the middle of a mech fight? I hate it when that happens! Cool episode!
 I like it 
  September 25, 2011
I haven't seen so many consecutive actions in a comic yet. It's good and still keeping original, wich is the good part, but still more could happen.
 I like it 
  September 25, 2011
nice!
 I like it 
  September 25, 2011
What a great chapter! I think what makes your comic so good is that your not affraid to destroy stuff! I would be :P Great work mate ;)
 I like it 
  September 24, 2011
sweet! can't wait to see what happens!
 
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