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Instilling Obedience
Chapter 1: Instilling Obedience
About this creation
The Tower of the Arcane rises in the Western Provinces of the Kingdom of Leon: the seat of power of the great mage. Having just succeeded his former mentor Edrin the Wise, the young Mage Kaloyan has not been able to convince the local villagers that they are subjugated to him. Having been insulted and threatened, Kaloyan has found an ancient spell in the recesses of the tower, and now moves to unleash it on the village of Pliska.

In the early morning Kaloyan and his servant Roger arrive on the outskirts of Pliska and the Mage unleashes a burst of of Earth Magic. Vines creep out of the ground and low tremors rumble and echo through the main square where the town's pride and joy rises; the Cathedral of the Crown of Thorns. ...

The Mage shouts out: "In the name of Gaya and the sacred flesh of the earth, I command you! Golem, awaken!"

A massive conglomerate emerges from the ground; a rock Golem, a dormant vestige of the ancient schools of magic. As the peasants attempt to defend their homes they quickly learn that fighting off this monster is beyond them...







Kaloyan: "Why they are running scared Roger! This demonstration will be over in a minute!"
(Shouting): "You hear that you insolent peasants! First I'll crush your homes, then your precious Cathdral!"



Villager: "Ahhh!!!!"



"Help!!"



Fleeting villagers: "Run for your lives! Get away!!"



Woman: "Dear Lord somebody do something!"
Town Eldar: "Enough! Enough! Spare this man, spare the Cathedral and spare the town, Lord Kaloyan!!! We submit! We submit to your will for goodness sake; please stop that thing!"



Kaloyan raises his staff and the Golem drops the villager who scuttles to shelter, the monster disappears beneath the ground and the square is eerily quiet with the calm of morning once again.

Later on in the Tower of the Arcane:



Roger: "Milord the elder is respectfully awaiting audience with you."
Kaloyan: "Excellent, lead him in Roger"



Elder: "I'm here at your request milord"
Kaloyan: "My, my such respect! tell me do you still think your lord is a young cockerel who has his nose buried in the tomes?"
Elder: "No milord, I respectfully submit my will to you"
Kaloyan: "There there dear elder, we have important work to do! Head on down to the village and tell your people the following things: They are from this day forth to serve and obey me as their master and their lord."
Elder: "Yes milord"
Kaloyan: "You are to destroy any vestige of your former alliance with Leon; in its place you are to hang the symbol that you see on these shields; the symbol of Elemental Magic; this is your new coat of arms."
Elder: "Yes milord"
Kaloyan: "Lastly, I am in need of a goat"
Elder: "A ... goat milord?"
Kaloyan: "Indeed, do this now. You are dismissed."

Later Roger arrives with the requested goat



Roger: "The villagers are burning all images of Leon in a massive fire ser. They sent this goat. Er... ser, why do we need a goat?"
Kaloyan: "It's part of a dark ritual my dear servant"
Roger: "You won't hurt it will you ser?"
Kaloyan: "I'm not planning on it; it is merely a vessel to serve as a conduit for my trip"
Roger: "Trip ser?"
Kaloyan: "Roger these peasants are no good at fighting and may swear their allegiance to any threat that looms over them as long as they get to live their little miserable lives. That will not do, in the long run, I need more than mere men, I need dark creatures from beyond. I have read some of Edrin's texts and it appears our benevolent friend experimented with Forbidden Magic in his youth, he may have found a way to get accross the divide and seek the aid of demons."
Roger: "I'm afraid I don't follow you ser."
Kaloyan: (Laughing) "Dear Roger, have you ever heard of the Underworld?"

To be continued...



Comments

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  July 21, 2014
This is great! Good building and the story is interesting, I have to read more!
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  July 7, 2013
This is awesome! Great story and these builds are simply stunning!
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  March 20, 2013
dang man this is pretty awesome!
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  August 24, 2012
hey Eben! i use the 3ds too! i have an endless list of complaints about the browser tho. no vids, limited pics, etc. anyway, sorry for going off track, great MOC
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  June 6, 2012
Great storyline - I'll be following it. Keep up the good work!
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  April 7, 2012
Great! You have me hooked.
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  January 15, 2012
Its great!
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  January 15, 2012
Its great!
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  January 8, 2012
Intriguing...
  December 15, 2011
An excellent start to an excellent series! Need i say more?
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  November 18, 2011
Best!!
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  October 28, 2011
Wow! Great story and moc!
  October 25, 2011
Amazing MOC.
A P
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White Knight
  October 24, 2011
Love the stained glass windows !.....a very neat little model....well done.....
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  October 24, 2011
Great work! Love the rock monster and that stained glass window, too!
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  October 24, 2011
Really some great builds here ! I love your technique for the pine trees.
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  October 14, 2011
cool
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  October 12, 2011
im writing this comment from 3ds for the first time ohh and an amazing moc its so detailed and i love the rock monster
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  October 11, 2011
Thank you all for the wonderful comments! ;) More to come soon
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  October 11, 2011
Great story - keep em coming! Love the cathedral.
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  October 9, 2011
This story is way better than many TV shows, and the MOC is amazing, as usual. Extremely well done!
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  October 9, 2011
This story is way better than many TV shows, and the MOC is amazing, as usual. Extremely well done!
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  October 9, 2011
Those poor peasants!
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  October 9, 2011
More AP magic!
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  October 9, 2011
More AP magic!
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  October 9, 2011
Fantastic! Good story, great MOC. 5/5! Keep up the amazing work! :)
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  October 9, 2011
Over and over you blow me away with your fantastic prowess, and then dog-pile onto it with a great story. Thus, you have now earned favorite builder-ness. I really love all the stained glass in this, and the summoned creature is incredible. Excellent work!
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  October 9, 2011
This is really good! 5/5 But why is the villager helping him? Could you look at my creations plz :)
  October 8, 2011
Raaaaahhhhh!!!!!You used that floor desighn on your ambush at the mousileum.
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  October 8, 2011
I can't wait for the next part of this story. The builds are out of this world and story really leaves you wanting more. Excellent work
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  October 8, 2011
Wow.
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  October 8, 2011
Great stuff again! Love the golem
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  October 8, 2011
I've been waiting for this sequel. Story is excellent but Golem, overall details and action are even better!
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  October 7, 2011
Very nice.
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  October 7, 2011
Excellent build, I hope to see more from you later!
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  October 7, 2011
Thank you all for the nice comments, I'm happy you like it, stay tuned for Chapter 2 within the month ;)
A P
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Billy Bob
  October 6, 2011
The golem was well-made!
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  October 6, 2011
Very cool stuff, can't wait for more!!
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  October 6, 2011
Wow! Really interesting. The way you've made each scene in a single moc form but made an episode out of it. Brilliant detail on both sets too. Nice work.
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  October 6, 2011
Amazing MOC, excellent writeup!
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  October 6, 2011
Congratulations, you are my favorite builder! Your work is whimsical, detailed, colorful, well-built, and I love your use of fantasy. Congrats on another winner!
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  October 6, 2011
Your interiors are superb! And your attention to detail is spot on. Great MOC!
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  October 6, 2011
brilliant design for that monster! great episode!
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  October 6, 2011
Well Done AP!!
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  October 6, 2011
Very nicely done! That golem was a really nice touch. I enjoyed how the cathedral details really pop out at you.
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  October 6, 2011
Quoting BobaFett 2 Amazing... Note: it's spelled "Sir", with an "i"
I'm glad you like it; I know that sir is spelled wrong but that's my attempt to mimic the actual pronunciation and accent. ;) (It's a Terry Pratchett trick)
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  October 6, 2011
The rock monster is perfect! Anaother great build, AP. Can't wait for more!
  October 6, 2011
Amazing... Note: it's spelled "Sir", with an "i"
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  October 6, 2011
Fantastic scene. The story is amazing!
 
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