This is a one chapter comic which shows how Nitro went through transformation into a Toa. no more chapters will follow unless you guys REALLY like it and want more. I added a few parts in his history which have yet to be explained so don't be confused.... be really confused.
About this creation
3 years before the Toa Mata arrive, on the island of Kebran.

Matoran Nitro: got to get to the forges! Garal will have my hide!

Nitro: Wait. who's that?

Toa: *huff*huff* you there!
Nitro: me?

Toa: *pant*pant* take this!
Nitro: umm, A rock. No thanks, sir.

Toa: take it!
Nitro: okay, okay!

Toa: keep it safe! Hide it!
Nitro: oookay.

Nitro: I wonder what’s got his armor in a twist.

Nitro: screw the forges; I think I need a nap. I knew that I would go crazy taking the late shift for a week. Maybe Garal will understand.

Unknown: is TP-718 in place?
Toa: game, set, match.

(one week later)
Nitro (thinking): jeez, can't believe Garal fired me. The stupid... Oh, This thing is still lying around. Well, guess I’ll just throw it away; it’s not doing me any good.

Nitro (thinking): does look a little cool though. I thiAUGH!

AUGH!

Nitro: that’s weird! Wonder what that was supposed to d... hey, I don’t remember my hut being this small. Wait a minute!

Nitro: whoa! But what’s with the black bits?

Nitro:I don't look like a regular Toa of Fire. Too much Black.

Dau: Nitro, I was wondering if i could..Nitro… Nitro? Is that you? But what...
Nitro: Dau! You‘re a scholar, Tell me what happened!
Dau: well, that’s obvious. You’re a toa! Every matoran’s dream!
Nitro: I know that! But haven’t you noticed anything out of the ordinary!
Dau: well, the colors are off, but nothing a little paint can’t fix!

Dau: we need to show the elders right away!
Nitro: okay, guess it’s just my vanity.

Matoran #1: … is that?
Matoran #2: …. Different.
Matoran #3: …Nitro?

Dau: sir, one of the Matoran was transformed today.
Turaga Kenaz: and what is his Name?

Nitro: Nitro… sir.
Turaga Magma Bane: and how did this transformation occur?

Nitro: a toa of Ice, at least he looked like he was a toa of ice, came up to me while I was on my way to work, He acted as though the hounds of Makuta were after him, and He gave me the stone and insisted that I keep it safe. Then he ran off. I assumed he was crazy

Magma: strange, this is not the usual fashion of transformation.
Kenaz: indeed.

Kenaz: let us confer.
Magma: yes.

Kenaz: I sense much dark in him.
Magma: not me, I know him personally. He is one of the best people I know!

Kenaz: if you say so.
Magma: then it is settled.

Kenaz: Nitro, we have decided to grant you the Toa status! We will contact the other villages to find a team for you.

Magma: For now just wait and try not to break anything.

Nitro: (thinking) I have a feeling this is my destiny, and that I will fall defending it.
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remember this is a single chapter story and there will be no more chapters after this. But yo may be Wondering. "what's TP-718" and other stuff. That will be revealed at a later date.
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July 18, 2012 |
Looks Epic Dude |
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July 18, 2012 |
When are you gonna come back? |
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February 5, 2012 |
Quoting Kyle Peckham
Hey Nick, is your grounding over yet? I want to see some new mocs of yours! - KP
don't worry dude I'll be back in the summer with a whole load of em, spread the word. :D |
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January 16, 2012 |
Hey Nick, is your grounding over yet? I want to see some new mocs of yours! - KP |
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Hey man, sorry for being so mean. I've got issues. I wasn't acting like a Christian. Cool story btw. Also, are you a Christian(or do you believe in some religion?). |
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October 13, 2011 |
Cool!
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October 12, 2011 |
Quoting Owl .T Owl
Simple. The Stone is corrupted. The "Toa" gave Nitro it to get a stronger Toa to destroy stuff and rule the world. Nah, she stays away. If she does get close to my Lego, she licks them once and i tell her to get lost. :)
that's good because I lost my mask of life to my dog :( |
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Simple. The Stone is corrupted. The "Toa" gave Nitro it to get a stronger Toa to destroy stuff and rule the world. Nah, she stays away. If she does get close to my Lego, she licks them once and i tell her to get lost. :) |
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October 12, 2011 |
Quoting Owl .T Owl
I sense that White Toa = Evil. And that guy with all the oddities in his name is also evil. Sounds like a robot. Like in Wall-E. I will follow this if you make more! Great Job! (I gots a puppy)
yeah, white guy is evil. but then why would he give a toa stone to Nitro? (cool, but make sure to keep all LEGO away from them. they like to chew) |
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October 12, 2011 |
Very, very nice! What a great little story :D Loved the Turaga too XD Anyway, great story! Hope you do more in the future! (Even though you said you wouldn't, I'd love to see more!) |
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October 11, 2011 |
I sense that White Toa = Evil. And that guy with all the oddities in his name is also evil. Sounds like a robot. Like in Wall-E. I will follow this if you make more! Great Job! (I gots a puppy) |
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October 11, 2011 |
Quoting Cody G
One more thing, do the ball joints on his back have any significance? Because if they don't, I know what would look very good there: jet pack.
I used to have wings there. but they got edited off for the final version. good idea, maybe I will. |
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October 11, 2011 |
One more thing, do the ball joints on his back have any significance? Because if they don't, I know what would look very good there: jet pack. |
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October 11, 2011 |
Quoting S.T.S The Forgotten
Awesome chapter! :D BTW did you know that Genesis is a mathematical term for "flat land" :D Is that awesome or WHAT?!
cool, did you know that goldfish only have a memory span of three seconds? funny huh? |
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October 11, 2011 |
Awesome chapter! :D BTW did you know that Genesis is a mathematical term for "flat land" :D Is that awesome or WHAT?! |
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Chaos Master October 10, 2011 |
Not trying to convince you to make more or anything, but this is pretty good. I would read the rest if you ever felt like making it. |
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October 10, 2011 |
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October 10, 2011 |
well, I guess I need to start working on a the rest of the chapters. |
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October 10, 2011 |
Kenaz as a turaga, nice :D I'd love to see more of this, and you know what? I think I'll add you to my faves now, because what you do is awesome. |
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October 10, 2011 |
Nice! I'll definitely follow this if you continue! |
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October 10, 2011 |
Cool! Keep it up! |
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October 10, 2011 |
Awesome! Love the new Nitro! MAKE MORE MAKE MORE MAKE MORE!!!!! |
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October 10, 2011 |
Sweet! You must make more, you should put something about how he turned into a Earth Shatterer. :D |
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October 10, 2011 |
Awesome Chapter ! BTW, in my next Chapter of Terror of Darkness, Nitro fight and there will be a stop motion part with him in it ! You might not want to miss it. I like how this chapter was made, and yes, you should make more ! |
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