First Aid
The 3rd part of Lightning Squad comic series is OUT!!Enjoy the show!
About this creation
Tom Kane narrating-Previously on Lightning Squad...
Sentinel-Prepare to say "Adios!"to this galaxy,as well as your little squad!
He is about to kill the great leader himself,only to-
 -BAM!Wraith tackled him!
Sentinel-Ooof!
 And fell.
No he is bursting with ANGER!
 And he goes to strike down the one who saved Hawk!
Sentinel-You will pay for that!!!
 Suddenly-BOOM!!!!
Most mandos you see there-Aaaagh!!!
 The reinforcements ARRIVE!!
Evo-Yeah,just when we mostly needed cha!!!
Arf trooper-Take em DOWN!!
Windu Squad commander-Go go go!!!
Windu-Hey,dis I miss anything?!!!
*SSSSLAAAAAASH*
Mando-Aaaak!
*BAM*
Mando-Arrrgh!
Trooper on walker-Yeah,beat that you_you_anyone got a good insult here?!
*Zzzap*
Mando-Unnnhg!
Sentinel-No!This cannot be!This cannot BE!!!Fall back!Curse you Jedi!Remember,THIS ISN'T OVER!!!
They fall back...
 ...While Viceroy Gunray cowardly tries to escape.
Windu-Gotta use the bathroom,don't worry.We'll get you to a bathroom once we reach the ship.
Nute-Good,I really can't hold!
Windu-Oh,I didn't mean the shuttle.I meant the CRUISER!
Viceroy-Noooooooooo!!!
Longshot-Oh! This is getting gross!
Nute-Don't blame me,blame my cowardly ways!
 3 hours later(Viceroy still holding)!
Inside Windu's flagship...
Windu-Well Viceroy,tell us of your plans for the conquering of Devaron.
Viceroy(Arrogantly)-No!Never will I say anyhing to you,JEDI SCUM!
Hawk-Well then,I guess we'll have to make you hold 3 hours more!
Viceroy-Noooooooooooooooo!This is worse than a nightmare!I'll talk.
 Meanwhile.Back at Devaron....
Sentinel(on comlink)-I am truly sorry mistress.We failed again.
Mysterious Woman voice through comlink-Grrrr,I'm sick of you!All along I thought you guys were useful.Useless!I'm giving you one last chance to fix this mess you've made.
Sentinel(on cominlk)-Why yes,of course.Thank,my lord.We won't fail again.We already have a plan.
Mysterious Woman voice through comlink-Grrr,well get to it.Otherwise you'll strongly suffer so much you'll regret you were ever BORN!!!
Sentinel-*Gulp* Don't worry.This will work.
She shuts off.
To Be Continued....
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October 16, 2011 |
Story: Excellent
Caracters: Excellent
Personalitys: Not so excellent, Nute gunray is a little bit childish and so is Windu! But, anyway good story! |
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October 15, 2011 |
Quoting LegoBoy 12
Wow, great episode! You know what now I add you one of my fav. builders! (ps. whens next one coming?)
Thanks for adding me.You're already one of mine. |
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October 15, 2011 |
Quoting Timo van Abswoude
Great story! I love your 'special effects' from the guns!
Thanks. |
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October 15, 2011 |
Great story! I love your 'special effects' from the guns! |
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October 13, 2011 |
Quoting LegoBoy 12
Can't wait to see them! (let me guess. You got that Han Solo idea from Padawan Menace! =D)
Yeahahaha!You bet!I love that movie,so while watching it,I came up with that.I'm almost done with episode 1!Stay tunned! |
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October 13, 2011 |
Can't wait to see them! (let me guess. You got that Han Solo idea from Padawan Menace! =D) |
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October 12, 2011 |
Quoting LegoBoy 12
Wow, great episode! You know what now I add you one of my fav. builders! (ps. whens next one coming?)
Probably,at the end of this month or at the beginning of November.I release one every moth,only this time I released two becuase they're both supposed to be in one.I'm also planning on making another release.It's gonna be awesome!it's called "The Further Misadventures of the Young Han Solo" . |
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October 12, 2011 |
Wow, great episode! You know what now I add you one of my fav. builders! (ps. whens next one coming?) |
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October 11, 2011 |
Quoting Tony Lin
Nice! Like how you included the mysterious woman again. Will she appear in the next comic?
She might appear.As your advice said,I shall show only a glimpse of her,probably on the next issue.I tell you,this issue 3 is gonna be very action packed!!! |
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October 11, 2011 |
Nice! Like how you included the mysterious woman again. Will she appear in the next comic? |
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