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MocOlympics-Round 3: LukeClarenceVan The Revanchist Vs. Dave Sterling
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For Round Three of the MocOlympics I have built in the category "Don't cross the streams!" My opponent is the worthy Dave Sterling.



They always told us never to cross the streams. What more could we want? Our city was perfect, wasn't it?



But I was curious.



What lay beyond? Soaring mountains? Rolling valleys? Ancient oceans?



I couldn't stand it anymore.



As I waded through the streams adrenalin coursed through my veins, my heart beat faster than ever before.



I stepped triumphantly upon the opposite shore, I felt truly free.



I walked forward, yet my legs felt strange, weak.



I stumbled to the ground, all strength gone.



It was like I passed through an invisible barrier, suddenly the environment shifted and morphed around me.



I looked back and fear seeped into my pores.



Pollution was not a myth, not a fairytale. Indeed, my life had been more a fairytale. Hidden by illusion the world died around us, with only the elite knowing the truth.



I looked down at my legs, the toxins I had so carelessly waded through now ate at my clothes, my flesh.



My life fled me, but I was satisfied.



I knew the truth.










Comments

 I like it 
  August 20, 2012
I noticed this too. He is going to brick-con in Seattle, Wa, or at least someone named Dave Sterling is. I hope he's all right!
 I made it 
  August 20, 2012
Quoting Raviel Ze MOCist! I was just looking at this MOC when I realized... where's Dave? :(
That's a good question, thanks for pointing out his disappearance. I hope that he's well, and it's too bad that his account's gone.
  August 20, 2012
I was just looking at this MOC when I realized... where's Dave? :(
 I like it 
  May 31, 2012
Wow, such a touching story. Nice job.
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  January 2, 2012
great story again and an unexpected end... COngrats for having gone so far on MOC-O. It's quite a challenge!
 I like it 
  November 13, 2011
I really like the building...5/5;D
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  October 28, 2011
love the story. this reminds me of the book, "the giver". there is always a catch for a eutopian society, and you got it on the dot, congrats! -Spencer Silbey
 I like it 
  October 21, 2011
Great story! The building was fantastic!
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  October 21, 2011
great work on the details of this MOC!
LukeClarenceVan The Revanchist
LEGO Lord
  October 20, 2011
I like how it focuses on the story but solely for realism, you added a base. Nice.
 I like it 
  October 20, 2011
This is wonderful and has a great story.
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  October 18, 2011
This really is excellent work and a great story to boot. But I'm afraid I have to give the edge to Mr. Sterling for a slightly higher level of execution. You've really been spectacular in this competition and I'm sure I'm not the only one who wishes your return for next year.
 I like it 
  October 18, 2011
Both builds were sweet and both stories were expertly told. This is another of those 51/49% splits for me. Gonna have to leave it to Matty for the final call. Sterling got my vote. Good luck! ~ Chris.
 I like it 
  October 18, 2011
First thanks for the comment, more importantly though this is a great build. I though the story line was very good and your building was spot on. Overall nice job and good luck.
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  October 18, 2011
It's fun to see the landscape change in a Moc. Keep working on adding texture and variety, and nice job with an intriguing idea.
 I like it 
  October 17, 2011
Quite intriguing! Very nice!
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  October 17, 2011
Very well done, and best of luck with the judges. Lee.
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  October 17, 2011
This is not easy, Luke. Okay, the landscape in the first pics could have used more details, but your design of the real landscape and the real stream, in addition to a clever story and a brilliant storytelling, got you my vote.
 I like it 
  October 17, 2011
great work dude! Good to see you sensitive to ecology stuffs!
  October 17, 2011
Nice work!
 I like it 
  October 17, 2011
Nice twist on the quote and a solid build to back it up. Good luck~H
LukeClarenceVan The Revanchist
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Dave Sterling
  October 16, 2011
Love the story and overall concept. Like others, I would have liked to have seen a little more detail in the landscaping. But the building is fantastic. Lots of nice small details to break up the walls. Great work and good luck!
 I like it 
  October 16, 2011
I won't say you have a chance, but I'm rooting for you!
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  October 16, 2011
Nice work, but seeing who your opponent is, I don't think you'll win.
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  October 16, 2011
This is awesome! Very great. The water scene is very cool. Keep up the great work!
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  October 16, 2011
This is awesome! Very great. The water scene is very cool. Keep up the great work!
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  October 16, 2011
Very nice build and great story. Good luck!
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  October 16, 2011
Wow, not the most 'light' story you've put in there :-) Good luck in the contest!
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  October 16, 2011
Nice take on the subject. Good luck!
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  October 16, 2011
wow, a very intense and powerful take on the quote. It works really well. Best of luck :)
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  October 16, 2011
Great take on the quote! Good luck!
LukeClarenceVan The Revanchist
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Espen .
  October 15, 2011
Hmm, I have the same category but a totally different take. However, yours looks great! Good luck!
 I like it 
  October 15, 2011
Your take on the category is great! It may win you enough points to progress, although you're up against a very tough opponent. Good luck!
 I like it 
  October 15, 2011
Awesome take on the category, you're going to need that creativity to beat a Sterling! Good luck!
 I like it 
  October 15, 2011
Wow, awesome MOC! Very interesting take on the category. And sir, where in the world did this talent come from all of a sudden? Before the MO's your builds were, to be harsh, bad. But now? Whole 'nother story!
 I like it 
  October 15, 2011
Some more details would be nice, but I can really appreciate your take on the category. Great work and best of luck mate!
 I like it 
  October 15, 2011
*whimper* I'm gonna go back to my illusions now...
 
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