Whats-his-name below is a good dude.I'm in agreement with him and will keep an eye on your progress.Fav button,I'm coming.I mean,seriously,I didn't start off as the best builder but got better after each build.(I'm sure what's-his-name can testify!XD)Keep MOCcing bud.
Nice, if I may give some advice, you might makethe rocks more rocky with that, I mean you should bring some texture in it. It's very good for your first MOC.
You'll be a great builder soon, I just know it. Why don't you give yourself a fancy icon and decorate your page a little? Can you miss a comment to my sig-fig?: http://www.mocpages.com/moc.php/292059