This is my entry to the second round of the MIT. My category is "I'll be back".
About this creation
Link to the MIT Contest.
Link to Adam L and his entry.
A Proffessor Snah lived in a modern house. He had heard many times that there was once a castle right where his house stands. That castle was destroyed in 1346 by the "Rainbow Warriors" though. He wanted to see if that was true or not, so he decided to build a timemachine so he could get back to 1346 and see if there really was a castle there.
After ten years of hard work, the time machine was finally done!
Professor Snah: Yes! It's finally done! Now I'll be back to the time when there was a castle here!
He went in and typed "1346". Then he pressed "Go!"...
Then he was back at 1346!
Proffessor Snah: Wow, there was really a castle here!
Proffessor Snah: it's not as big as I expected, but it's still cool that there really was a castle here back in 1346!
However, the "Onecolorwarriors" who lived in the castle wasn't happy about their unexpected guest though.
Onecolorwarrior 1: where did that guy come from? And what is that weird thing he has there?
Onecolorwarrior 2: I don't know. We should go down and get him away from here, and destroy that weird thing!
Proffessor Snah then heard that someone was walking downstairs in the tower.
He decided to use his control to make the machine disappear, incase they would destroy it. If it got destroyed, he would then be stuck at 1346!
Onecolorwarrior 1: Who are you? And what are you doing here?
Proffessor Snah: I'm from the future, 2011 to be exact. I'm not here to kill you or destroy your castle. In 2011, my house stands right where this castle stands.
Onecolorwarrior 2: but what about our castle?
Proffessor Snah: this castle was destroyed by the Rainbowwarriors in 1346.
Onecolorwarrior 1 and 2: What!?! 1346 is this year!
Proffessor Snah: Yes, I know. They can attack the castle at any minute.
Onecolorwarrior 1: Then we will have be ready at any minute. Don't let the Rainbowwarriors destroy us!
In the background: Come on, men! Let's attack the castle!
Onecolorwarrior 1: oh no, they are here!
Onecolorwarrior 1: It's time for us to get our weapons!
Then the battle began!
Proffessor Snah: Oh no! The Rainbowwarriors seems to be too strong for them! I guess I should attack them with the Lightsaber I made a while ago, which I made to easier cut things made out of metal. I just hope I don't die.
He then went out of the castle.
Proffessor Snah: Rainbowwarriors, escape or I'll kill you with my Lightsaber!
Rainbowwarrior 1: Did you all see that? That blue guy has a sword with something blue on it! I think it's a good idea to escape now...
All Rainbowwarriors: Run or you'll get killed by his sword!
Onecolorwarrior 1: did you see that? They escaped because that guy from the future had a weird, futuristic sword!
Onecolorwarrior 1 and 2: Thank you very much. You saved our castle with your futuristic sword!
Proffessor Snah: Yeah, I know. But I'll have to leave now, my wife comes home in ten minutes, or a few hundred years to you!
Proffessor Snah: Goodbye! I'll maybe visit sometime again!
Then he went back to 2011. However, he didn't put in mind that anything you do when you are time travelling back in time may change the future!
Then he got back But...
Proffessor Snah: What?!?!!
Professor Snah: How did the castle get here?!
Proffesor Snah: My house is supposed to stand here! I don't get why the castle got here, when it was destroyed in 1346.
Tourist: what are you talking about? This castle has been here for hundreds of years, and it's now a big tourist attraction in this town!
The end!
I hope you liked the story! When I first got the category "I'll be back", I didn't know what to build. But I then though of doing a time travelling story.
Here's some pics of the set ups for this entry:
The room, with lamps, and the greebled timemachine.
Some pics of the house. The house was inspired by some houses where I live.
The castle. It was hard to build, but I did my best with the amount of dark grey I had. The 2x2 pieces with a cross were added on purpose.
I hope you liked this. This took a while to upload as Mocpages would only let me upload 2 pics at time. I'm not sure if I'll win this round, but I can always use the Timemachine and travel to the future and find out! :P
Please rate and comment.
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November 7, 2011 |
nice job! that time machine has some serious greebling! |
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November 1, 2011 |
I can't believe I never commented on this! It really made my day, great work! I especially like the time machine, and the rainbow warrior idea is brilliant! |
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November 1, 2011 |
I can't believe I never commented on this! It really made my day, great work! I especially like the time machine, and the rainbow warrior idea is brilliant! |
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October 31, 2011 |
Ha! Hilarious ending! ~Ryan |
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October 30, 2011 |
That's really a clever story, but I saw the end coming. |
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October 29, 2011 |
The house and time machine particularly look great! |
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October 27, 2011 |
Great entry! Congrats on knocking off a #1 seed. |
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I made it |
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October 24, 2011 |
Quoting Adam L.
Congratulations! Best of luck to you in the next round! :D
Thanks! You did very well too. I'm actually surprised I won against you. |
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October 24, 2011 |
Quoting Space Gypsy .
Good work E.K.O and congratulations. I'm not to sure on the story though :P
Why are you not sure on the story? Confusing? Boring? Was it just OK? |
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October 23, 2011 |
Congratulations! Best of luck to you in the next round! :D |
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October 23, 2011 |
Good work E.K.O and congratulations. I'm not to sure on the story though :P |
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October 23, 2011 |
Thanks all judges for voting for me! I'm very happy right now, because I thought Adam L would win. |
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October 23, 2011 |
A tough decision to say the least, but you get my vote for the sweep. Clean build with just enough detail and the greebily time-machine put you over the top. Good luck in Round 3!~H |
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Why do both people build so well? Both builds were great, however, I had to vote to whoever had the most 'outside the box', and that was you |
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October 21, 2011 |
Both builds are excellent and well-presented. Another tough call for me. Urgh! The take on the category ultimately decided the score. You got my vote. |
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October 21, 2011 |
Excellent story E.K.O, I like the twist to it at the end. |
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Paperweight . October 20, 2011 |
I must sy, I love this! Great build, great storyline, and a great amount of EPICNESS! I'd vote for you. :D |
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October 20, 2011 |
The average day of an inventor... |
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October 20, 2011 |
Pretty funny. Nice build too. I love the time machine, lighting could be better though. |
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October 20, 2011 |
Quoting George G.
His name is "Hans" spelt backwards :) I love the house!
You figured it out, congrats! :D |
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October 20, 2011 |
LOL!!!! nice! |
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October 20, 2011 |
His name is "Hans" spelt backwards :) I love the house! |
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October 20, 2011 |
Thanks for the comments. Can anybody figure out why I named him "Snah"? |
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October 20, 2011 |
Wow I love the house and the castle.I especially like the style and colour of the house |
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October 20, 2011 |
Cool time machine! :) |
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October 20, 2011 |
Ooh, I got quite the challenge! This is very nice! |
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October 20, 2011 |
Very nice, I love the modern house you made, great story on how a change in the past affects the future, love it. Good luck with the judges. |
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October 20, 2011 |
Awesome! I love that greebling on the time machine! |
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