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ORDER 66: THE REBELLION OF KASHYYYK (part 3 comic)
(comments appreciated) if you haven't seen the first comics... check them out in the Order 66 comics folder on my page!
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General Jackson (jedi over wounded jedi) is currently seeing if General Carson (fallen jedi) is OK after he was stabbed by a knife thanks to an assassin hired by Emperor Palpetine.

General Jackson: This isn't good. Carson has just lost too much blood already.

General Jackson: We need a medical station. But those attacking clones aren't far behind our position right now.

General Jackson: We can't get to the ship, which has a medical station, very fast either.

Captain Brett: (clone) Sir, we need to get into position for the attack. They're coming.

General Jackson: Got it.
Captain Brett: Whoa! What happened to him?!


Suddenly, Carson wakes up
Carson: *grunt* Wait... Who, who is HE?! (points to Captain Brett)

Jackson: CARSON! YOUR OK!
Carson: Right. But who is that clone!?

Jackson: That is Captain Brett. He has joined us in the rebellion against the emperor.
Captain Brett: general Jackson. I need to speak with you for a minute.

Captain Brett: we need to get in position with the rest of the squad to fight off those clones.
Jackson: I know... but what are we going to do about Carson?

Brett: Hmm...

Captain Brett: Best to just leave him here, sir. I'll ask one of my troops to stay with him.
Jackson: Fine.

Later, when all the troops are ready to fight...
General Jackson: Wow. So that's their attacking force?
Captain Brett: Can't exactly say it's puny...

Captain Brett: ...but I know they're pretty determined to kill us.

Captain Brett: OK MEN! LET'S SHOW THOSE TRAITORS WHO THEIR MESSING WITH!!


. Captain Brett: now, INTO LINE FORMATION!

Brett: OK! Ready..

Brett: ...aim...

Brett: FIRE!!

*shooting noises*

Clone traitor: aAAAcck!!!



Jackson: BRETT! WATCH OUT!

Jackson runs to the speeder...



... and kills the pilot

The speeder veers off course...

... and topples over, spilling the gunner out

Jackson kills the gunner without pausing.

Jackson: Yoda! Did you get any new how Carson's doing?

Yoda: Yes. Not doing well, he is.

Jackson: Oh no. We have to go to the camp!



Later, at the camp...
Jackson: TROOPER! HOW'S HE DOING!?

Clone: Not so well, sir. The bleeding hasn't slowed that much, and he's been having some mild seizures.

Jackson: Not good.

Jackson: It'll take forever to get to a medical station on foot-
Brett: WATCH OUT! ENEMY SPEEDER!

Clone traitor on speeder: FOR THE EMPEROR!

A member of Brett's squad shoots the pilot...

...but the speeder is still shooting toward Jackson at high speed.

The speeder is about to crush Jackson...

... and stops.

Yoda: Lucky you are, to have me use the force just in time.

Jackson: thank you Master Yo- wait... I have an idea.

Jackson: SOMEONE GET THAT DEAD PILOT OFF THE SPEEDER! AND PUT CARSON ON THE FRONT!



Jackson: Now we'll get to our ship (which has a medical station) and stop Carson's bleeding!

Meanwhile... in a patch of dense foliage...
Clone traitor on left: *Psst!* Those Jedi scum are coming!
ARF trooper: hold it...

ARF trooper: Emperor Palpetine... those Jedi are coming!

Palpetine hologram: KILL THEM! I WANT THEM SENT TO ME, DEAD OR ALIVE!!
ARF trooper: THEY WILL DIE, MY LORD!





TO BE CONTINUED...




Comments

 I like it 
  November 10, 2011
Awesome!!!
 I like it 
  November 4, 2011
Nice! This series really caught my attention. :) Better pictures and a bit more scenery would be nice, though.
 I like it 
  October 31, 2011
nice i love it!
 I like it 
  October 29, 2011
Impressive.
 I like it 
  October 27, 2011
Really cool Inika! I definitely read part 4 when it comes out!
inika brick
Lewis Jones
  October 26, 2011
Not bad my friend, I know what you mean with the green baseplate, this is a good comic, I am a fan of comics, and you pulled off the lego comic theme well. Good job, keep it up!
 I made it 
  October 26, 2011
Quoting El Barto ! Pretty cool action, Chief! Okay, so here are some suggestions. See if you can get a tree line and a little mountain range built as backgrounds. It shouldn't take that many bricks to do it, actually. That way you can get some shots from 'eye level', which is more like what you'd see on TV. Then you can just set the camera on the table, making it steady for clearer pictures. Good work on the storyline and dialogue!
Thanks for commenting! It's a little fuzzy because it's a little hard to take a clear photo on a green baseplate.
 I like it 
  October 26, 2011
Pretty cool action, Chief! Okay, so here are some suggestions. See if you can get a tree line and a little mountain range built as backgrounds. It shouldn't take that many bricks to do it, actually. That way you can get some shots from 'eye level', which is more like what you'd see on TV. Then you can just set the camera on the table, making it steady for clearer pictures. Good work on the storyline and dialogue!
 
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