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A Story Retold Main Character Preview!
A preview of the main characters in my upcoming story, A Story Retold. Other minor characters will be featured, but these are just the main characters.
About this creation
Well to start things off, I'd like to bring attention to two awesome builders who haven't been noticed yet and really deserve some publicity! Rasmus Olsen makes really cool mechs, and Evan D is on his way to becoming a bionicle pro! Check them out!

So, I decided to take a few of my favorite builds and make a story around them. The basis of the story takes place right after the final showdown between Mata Nui and Teridax (Makuta). In my version, Teridax wasn't quite killed by the hunk of planet that hit him in the (robot) head. It's told from the point of view of two toa who are traveling bounty hunters out of work, who discover one of the original toa in stasis buried beneath the desert. Together, with Tempus, they must stop Teridax from returning to power.

Every one of these will get (or already has) its own post.



Here's a panoramic of the cast!



These are Vex (Vored) and Vanu (Luja). Thanks to Raviel and Alien Entity for winning the name contest! Now to make your Entity's chibi...



Here's Vanu. He's armed with wrist guns, a rhotuka spinner, and leg rockets.



back.



Here's Vex. He's a toa-cyborg. For those of you following me, I decided that #2 wasn't really an important character and morphed #2 and Vex into one character.



Vex is armed with a machine gun arm, a pistol and some other larger gun (Those of you that know guns can suggest a name for the larger one).





back.



These are the three original toa. They helped the great beings form the universe. After the universe was complete, the great beings realized that they were too powerful, and anybody can be corrupted, so the toa were stripped of most of their power and hidden in three corners of Spherus Magma in stasis.



Tempus, the toa of time. He is the first one to be found, and accompanies Vex and Vanu on their journeys. He has a time blade and a Kanohi disk of time and launcher, both weapons can be mounted on his back. (one at a time)

He is MG's self moc, Dalta.



Back, with launcher.



Back, without launcher.



Yiang, toa of energy. Doesn't play a very important role, the second toa to be found.

Also Archangel, Archangel's self-moc.



Back, with wings.



Mato, toa of Matter. He believed that he was the most important of the three, and was self-absorbed. When the great beings stripped him of his powers, he didn't understand why, and grew resentful. Teridax had an all too easy time corrupting him.

He was really fun to build. Thanks to Denontile for the ideas! Demontile gets extra kudos for all his participation!



Back. I had fun using all my new Witch Doctor pieces. Speaking of Doctor, I'm going as the doctor (11th) for halloween!



The bad guys! Namely, Makuta Teridax and Makuta Destrin.



Makuta Destrin, obviously a take on STS's self-moc. He is Teridax's best henchman. Hench hench hench.



Back. He haz wingz!



Finally...

Teridax. I had fun making him, because I had to keep the original colors and look (of the first version), but add my own over-techniced look. You'll drop your jaw in stupefied awe of epicness when you find out how I attached the Ignika to his mask of shadow. It's awesome AND purist!



Muahahahahaha!



Back. He has a junkyardish look, you'll find out why soon.



And last but.. wait he IS the shortest...

Demonom! He's a cute little matoran!
For some reason, he came out a lot like the stars Takanuva. I was using my avohkii masks on Zerk, so he got a bley tahu.



He has a tail! I couldn't fit wings. The tail was the hardest part, because I had to blend it into the back really well. It came out so well! :D











4th Story Commentary: If you want to complain about something, look here first!

Q) What? Why does Archangel look like a dude?
A) That's not Archangel, it's Yiang. It's just a bionicle anyway. Stop being sexist.

Q) Why don't people's self-mocs have the right names?
A) It's just for the story. It's just how I roll.

Q) Can I be in the story?
A) No. Unless you do something awesome, like make my self-moc. Otherwise the people who already got in are the only ones.

Q) Why does Teridax have the Ignika / how did you attach it?
A) Wait and see :D

If you want me to make your self-moc, comment first and then click HERE!















Demonom: Bye! Don't forget to rate and comment!






Comments

 I like it 
  October 16, 2012
Silver&turquoise Miru=awesome? :3 These look pretty great Stevie.
 I made it 
  October 14, 2012
Quoting Benjamin Hoffman I like them. But, the 11th doctor WHY?? In my opinion, the 10th is better so i am dressing up as the 10th doctor for Halloween.
Oh, I share your mindset, the new episodes are terrible, but I don't look anything like david tennant, but matt smith was doable. Honestly, eccleston was my favorite.
 I like it 
  October 13, 2012
I like them. But, the 11th doctor WHY?? In my opinion, the 10th is better so i am dressing up as the 10th doctor for Halloween.
 I made it 
  November 17, 2011
Quoting M G - In a creative rut Also can you please add more bulk to the lower legs?
Sorry, I don't really have any good brown left, and my gold is all but used up. Anyway, me and everyone else seems to like him a lot the way he is.
  November 17, 2011
Also can you please add more bulk to the lower legs?
Steve The Squid
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Tivo Scabs
  November 14, 2011
I really like Tempus, his gold tube reminds me of Sentinel Prime, and he looks ancient and emanates power and wisdom. OVER NINE THOUSAND out of ten.
 I like it 
  November 13, 2011
Yes! Another Dalta. Except not Dalta but Tempus but still technically Dalta though not the same... My head hurts
Steve The Squid
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Super Squirtle 97 SQUIRTLE
  November 2, 2011
no problem steve i'm good at naming stuff so if you need any help you can ask me...if you want.
Steve The Squid
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Super Squirtle 97 SQUIRTLE
  November 1, 2011
great characters mate. i got a name for Vex's BIGGER gun the !VEXINATOR! BOOM CHUKA LUKA LUKA.
  November 1, 2011
That is AWESOME! Now I can sleep at night. Good luck with your story!
 I made it 
  November 1, 2011
Quoting Decimator the NukeMaster Great job, I like tempus Heaps! Say, are you still uploading selfMOCs? Everyday I go to the group hopeful, I can't wait!
Sorry about that, with my new story it might be another 1-2 weeks before I get to posting it :( Here's a teaser! http://images.mocpages.com/user_images/70479/1320180156m_SPLASH.jpg
 I made it 
  November 1, 2011
Quoting Xeal of Venom man, i like ur style
Thanks!
 I made it 
  November 1, 2011
Quoting Super Squirtle 97 SQUIRTLE great characters mate. i got a name for Vex's BIGGER gun the !VEXINATOR! BOOM CHUKA LUKA LUKA.
I'll actually use that!
 I like it 
  November 1, 2011
Great job, I like tempus Heaps! Say, are you still uploading selfMOCs? Everyday I go to the group hopeful, I can't wait!
 I like it 
  November 1, 2011
Nice! They all are cool, my favourite one is Tempus. Good job!
 I like it 
  November 1, 2011
Finally there is an overview page to the characters! I Can't wait for your story. And all the characters look so great! And now, I would like to award you being the first one who has build Vored! You make him look different, but still use some things I had on mine too, like the non-cannon-lower arm, the chestplate and the outer upper legs! Thanks a million, he went out so great! Fantastic work on you characters (and Vored :D!), I'm sure your story will be truly amazing :)
Steve The Squid
 I like it 
Chaos Master
  October 31, 2011
The Q@A was pretty fun to read :) I can't wait to see what the story looks like.
 I like it 
  October 31, 2011
Cool characters!
 I like it 
  October 31, 2011
man, i like ur style
  October 31, 2011
My dude is Perfect.He never even had his mask as a Matoran(mato's wearing it(tip)).kinda hoped for a tail but it's not required but nice tail.Mato came out good as well. Vanu and Vex are awesome as well.
 I like it 
  October 31, 2011
looks great can't wait, oh I'm a poet and I didn't know it! I digress, teridax looks awesome, as well as the story behind those original toa I have something similar in my storyline
  October 31, 2011
Thanks. I wanted to make some self mocs but I don't have many masks. so yeah :S
 I made it 
  October 31, 2011
Quoting RICtendo ther Metagross Cool! Can I build your self moc? What? I am NOT doing it just to get in your story! :P
:D Sure, that would be epic! So far only super pikmin has made zerk yet :D
 I like it 
  October 31, 2011
Cool! Can I build your self moc? What? I am NOT doing it just to get in your story! :P
 I made it 
  October 31, 2011
Quoting StoveTop Creator Tempus is my FAVORITE of all the brown bios that have come out recently!!! The Green dude is cool too(I forgot his name)!
Thanks! I used up all my good brown parts making him :)
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  October 31, 2011
Tempus is my FAVORITE of all the brown bios that have come out recently!!! The Green dude is cool too(I forgot his name)!
 I made it 
  October 31, 2011
Quoting Alien Entity YAY I won something! :D I can't wait to see how my self MOC looks as a chibi! (Sorry, but I'd just like to correct you on something: The Makuta who took over Mata Nui's body was Teridax. Icarax was a different character.)
Whoa thanks for the correction! That was embarassing.... I only really just started brushing up on storyline...
 I like it 
  October 31, 2011
Huzzah!This shall be awesome.:)
 I like it 
  October 31, 2011
YAY I won something! :D I can't wait to see how my self MOC looks as a chibi! (Sorry, but I'd just like to correct you on something: The Makuta who took over Mata Nui's body was Teridax. Icarax was a different character.)
 I like it 
  October 31, 2011
truly amazing team ,,,,,great job man,,,,bravo
 I made it 
  October 31, 2011
Quoting Legofreak2444 ~ These new characters look great! :D Can't wait for this story. :) Am I going to be a minor character? I mean, since you already made me. :P
I'll put you in as a chibi, but it's just going to be a small reference because people like entity and demontile had to win contests to get in..
 I like it 
  October 31, 2011
These new characters look great! :D Can't wait for this story. :) Am I going to be a minor character? I mean, since you already made me. :P
 
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