30/35 accuracy to book, the dwarves, like Michael said, are supposed to be in different trees. 23/25 originality, I've only seen this built in lego once or twice before. 15/30 creativity/technique, the forest lacks a forested look, it could use some more small plant life and some more landscaping. It needs to be more overgrown. The trees surrounding the large tree are way too small and the large tree needs some branches. 7/10 minifigs, not all the dwarves look like dwarves. They lack the one thing a dwarf needs, a beard. Total 75/100, the build just needs more detail. Thanks for participating!
Accuracy to the book:29/35: The dwarves were in seprate trees.
Originality:24/30: There isn't a lot of unique techniques, except for the tree, but that's fine.
Creativity:20/30 The tree is pretty tall and the other trees are really small, and they are pretty barren. And the plates have only plants on them.
Minifigs:4/10: Most of the dwarves don't have hair. But the goblins are excellent!
accuracy to the book: 30/35 (Very accurate, but the dwarves are all on different trees, not just at one); originality: 24/25 Great idea; creativity/technique: Some of the trees are too small, and the big one is too big. He has also too short asts. The landscape could be more detailed. I like the lightning, though 15/30; minifigs: 6/10. Many dwarves don't really look like dwarves, but the orcs are great! 75/100