Hmmm, It Has A Nice Clean Design. In all honesty, I really can't say that I have an major issues with this MOC, everything flows with this one, the shaping, proportions, and the coloring. The only actual issue I have is not with the MOC itself, but the gliding section of explanation, when gliding, only natural forces are applied to the unit, so when the unit uses the rockets, it would no longer be considered gliding or soaring, but actual flight. So, besides that, I really see no issue with the design. Nice work on this. Oh, also, did you see my comment on the XX-2?
great work on this, LTE! I love it. awesome design, probably one of your best (and no I'm not saying that just because it's called the Starjumper :P). I love every bit of it. just a couple tips real quick. the color scheme's great, but the transparent orange eye just doesn't look right. it's not always the case, but sometimes complementary colors (colors opposite each other on the color wheel) look really good together. try a blue eye. second, the feet joints might work better if it bended forward and back instead of to the side. and third, and this is actually with your other Mechs, try not to make the weapons too big. this one right here is just perfect. this Mech is excellent, I absolutely love it, and I hope the one lady is wrong about MMWI not having a medical bay. :P