The redeemed swordsman.
About this creation
name: Jaivonn Su'ornad
species: Donrulath
alignment: chaotic good
age: 43 (Donrulath live to be somewhere between 700 and 800)
occupation: Ranger
abilities: Night vision. Good hearing. Shadow traveling (appears as a shadow, this ability is ruined if the other is aware of his position, Jaivonn cannot physically hurt anyone in this state).
weapons: Midnight, a sentient sword. Twilight, a shape-shifting blade.
hair color: Silver (I don't actually give them hair, in fact the closest thing you could resemble the Donrulath to are dark elves. I just could not find a fitting mask, besides Rahkshii own)!
armor: Jaivonn wares white chain mail armor.
eye color: Fiery orange
personality traits: Reserved, kind but not extremely social. Honorable yet not afraid to play a trick or two to win a battle. Honest. Somewhat paranoid (he comes from a race of cut throats).
Blessed be the LORD, my rock,
Who trains my hands for war,
And my fingers for battle;
Psalm 144:1
I thought this pcture made him look like a knight
his first sword Twilight
this is his second sword Midnightnext to Twilight
and here's some concept art
this picture and almost all the others after it are just close ups
a comparison with a random mata
Jaivonn says so loonngg, please rate, comment, and give constructive criticism!
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February 23, 2013 |
Very nice love rakshi heads and the swords plz take a look at my page always looking for feedback myself! |
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Reply to, I heard that you were back, if so, great to have you back! One thing you may want to know, owl and dragonmaster left MP. Thx man, oh, that stinks |
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August 18, 2012 |
Nice bionicle! Love the design! |
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August 8, 2012 |
nice build i really like it the sword is good |
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July 19, 2012 |
.....AWESOME! |
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July 14, 2012 |
This is really quite good. Nice job! |
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July 10, 2012 |
Cool! |
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July 1, 2012 |
Cool self moc! |
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July 1, 2012 |
Wow, this looks epic! |
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June 22, 2012 |
Excellent work! He surely lives by the sword :) Btw, I´m looking forward to see your new dragon in Creatures of fantasy. |
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NoWhereMan . June 19, 2012 |
I can't believe that I never commented. I like the swords. |
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June 19, 2012 |
Thank you all! |
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June 19, 2012 |
I am with Nowhereman on this :) He's just epic! The swords are great and the concept art is too :) Great Job bro! ~12lego |
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June 10, 2012 |
oh and before I forget if you see you are only other member is because the other members are my school friends that own bionicle/hero factory so yeah thats last of it. Also I am a wielder of the shadow blade which is also a sentient blade, and he has telepathy. Movement abilitys would be a good addition to MIDNIGHT.
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June 10, 2012 |
all you have to do is type legion of twilight in the search box, because I don't know how to do that. I was mixed-up on the sword thing, but how did he gain that certain blade the story would make a great pag for you |
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June 10, 2012 |
Quoting shade gant
thank you Jaivonn for joining our ranks are groups but it depends on your battle-type. The large question is are you willing to become a black lotus assassin, but you will have to give-up something important from your moc like I don't TWILGHT'S soul. Again thank you my brother. oh yeah have you really joined yeah i will tell you when I gain info again good-bye my brother Well to clarify something Midnight's the one with the soul, and Jaivonn can't give it up, it's a sentient being in the form of a sword. Also if you could just shoot me a link of your group that would be nice =)
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June 10, 2012 |
thank you Jaivonn for joining our ranks are groups but it depends on your battle-type. The large question is are you willing to become a black lotus assassin, but you will have to give-up something important from your moc like I don't TWILGHT'S soul. Again thank you my brother. oh yeah have you really joined yeah i will tell you when I gain info again good-bye my brother |
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June 8, 2012 |
Quoting shade gant
listen forget the screen name call me eclipse as founder of the legion of twilight I would like you to join our ranks, we have pudding and daemon, demon for the unfamiliar with old english, armor. Your's is very nice in
design did your moc smith it himself? Uuumm if I understand your meaning then here are my answers.
a: I'm guessing your 'ranks' are a group so sure I'll join.
b: No Jaivonn did not smith his armor, he gained it when he patrolled the outskirts of the cities of the Donrulath as a Ranger. It's standard issue, yet still very effective. It's as strong as plate mail but weighs no more then a heavy shirt.
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June 7, 2012 |
listen forget the screen name call me eclipse as founder of the legion of twilight I would like you to join our ranks, we have pudding and daemon, demon for the unfamiliar with old english, armor. Your's is very nice in
design did your moc smith it himself? |
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May 27, 2012 |
Very cool self-MoC! The color sheme is very interesting. I also liked the designs you made, like on the arms and the legs! Great work! |
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May 22, 2012 |
When you make him, do what ever that feels right for you, if you look up Rob B's version of Jacobi, he used a lime green color scheme instead of mata blue. So, I'm not picky, do what ever you want. |
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A reply to your comment about the moc off. Ya man, whichever |
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May 11, 2012 |
Quoting Christopher Baldacci
Nice job! I like the proclamation of your faith in this. Not someting you usually see with Bionicle MOCers. Thanks for all the comments, by the way. :P Super job here! Thanks! And if you look hard enough, you'll find other christian bio-mocers.
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May 10, 2012 |
Nice job! I like the proclamation of your faith in this. Not someting you usually see with Bionicle MOCers. Thanks for all the comments, by the way. :P Super job here! |
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May 7, 2012 |
Quoting Ezekiel the created
hey man, u still up for a rakshi moc off? Of course, I had a tough time with my camera when first we were gonna try this. But everything is working out now, so yeah. Any specific topics in mind?(besides using a rahkshii head of course)
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hey man, u still up for a rakshi moc off? |
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May 3, 2012 |
Quoting"Jacob Manahan April 30, 2012
Hey I'm doing a selfmoc wave, can Ezekiel be part of it?"
Absolutely man! Thanks! |
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May 2, 2012 |
Wow! Really like it. I love the color scheme, i've used that one myself. I also really like the bigger sword (I've forgotten the name already) Kudos, bro! |
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May 2, 2012 |
Quoting Zove The Mercenary
Wow! great job! whenever i see a rahkshi masked moc I think: "That guy/gal has style" even if its not a very good moc, but this, is a really great moc, and i'm even more pleased that you were open about your faith in this post! A+++++ Thank you very much!
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May 2, 2012 |
Wow! great job! whenever i see a rahkshi masked moc I think: "That guy/gal has style" even if its not a very good moc, but this, is a really great moc, and i'm even more pleased that you were open about your faith in this post! A+++++ |
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May 1, 2012 |
Quoting Banjax 2077
I know! everyone seems to want to look at a mask collection someone even spammed mine but....that was after it was 6th most discussed now its 2nd by the way i will post jaivonn tomarow Sweet I can't wait to see it, I also just asked Michael if we could start a squad in impact day, and he should get back to me soon.
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I know! everyone seems to want to look at a mask collection someone even spammed mine but....that was after it was 6th most discussed now its 2nd by the way i will post jaivonn tomarow |
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May 1, 2012 |
Quoting Banjax 2077
Well that works hopefully you don't kill me on my sleep:p lol Also you must be pretty underrated, cuz my mask collection has 2x more views/likes then my version of you! And I posted the mask collection afterwards! jk jk
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May 1, 2012 |
Well that works hopefully you don't kill me on my sleep:p |
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May 1, 2012 |
Quoting Banjax 2077
I don't suppose you would want to change army's in impact day because now we have to choose squads and I wouldent mind being in the same one Read my new post in impact day under character development
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I don't suppose you would want to change army's in impact day because now we have to choose squads and I wouldent mind being in the same one |
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yeah i already posted the south before i read the descriptions because i just saw you joined oh and most disscussed.... its funney cause its not even a creation |
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April 30, 2012 |
Quoting Banjax 2077
yeah I was going to join the south but Its like the east was made for banjax:p I know what you mean, I acctually saw your first comment saying that you had joined the south, and I was somewhat surprised. xD
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yeah I was going to join the south but Its like the east was made for banjax:p |
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April 30, 2012 |
Quoting Banjax 2077
Thank you for inviting me to impact day and I joined the eastern military Michael Said they were big on sniping and there colors were black and gray sooo... Yeah You are a traitor to the southern army and deserve death! I will meet you on the field of battle dog! jk I was more then happy to invite you man.
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Thank you for inviting me to impact day and I joined the eastern military Michael Said they were big on sniping and there colors were black and gray sooo... Yeah |
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April 8, 2012 |
i love your custom sword hes has a pretty nice look to, good moc dude! |
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March 10, 2012 |
Quoting Ventum The Dark Demon Aka... Nightmare
i know, but sometimes i forget to say greebles! I dont know why, i just do , lol >>>It happens to everyone, I was also quite impressed with Ventum v2!
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i know, but sometimes i forget to say greebles! I dont know why, i just do , lol |
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March 9, 2012 |
test 1234 |
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Suspicious Chicken March 8, 2012 |
Very nice, I like the swords. Great job on the actual MOC as well! |
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Suspicious Chicken March 8, 2012 |
Very nice, I like the swords. Great job on the actual MOC as well! |
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March 6, 2012 |
Quoting Dragoner Knight
nicely done and cool moc... like the color and especialy the sword (white one) it lukes very cool... Yes I like how it 'lukes' too. XD
But seriously thanks for the comment.
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March 5, 2012 |
nicely done and cool moc... like the color and especialy the sword (white one) it lukes very cool... |
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March 1, 2012 |
Quoting Marshall H
Wow! A Bionicle comparable to a happy-go-lucky Drow Elf? Too cool. Jaivonn would definitely ribbon in EXPO NM. Thank you! And it's funny that you see the resemblance so well, as I did not know about drow until after making Jaivonn. Evan more ironic is the fact that I actually highly based one of my characters on a specific drow elf afterwards.
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March 1, 2012 |
Wow! A Bionicle comparable to a happy-go-lucky Drow Elf? Too cool. Jaivonn would definitely ribbon in EXPO NM. |
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February 26, 2012 |
Quoting Ventum The Dark Demon Aka... Nightmare
Great Moc! Love the tiny details in his torso thanks for the comment! p.s. the tiny details are referred to as greebleing
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February 26, 2012 |
Great Moc! Love the tiny details in his torso |
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February 25, 2012 |
Quoting Clever Crowe
This is a VERY nicely designed MOCfig, m8. I like the domino-themed balance you've struck with your armor placements. Good shapesculpt, points for Style. Cheers! thank you very much, i am a fan of ur mocs as well.
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February 25, 2012 |
This is a VERY nicely designed MOCfig, m8. I like the domino-themed balance you've struck with your armor placements. Good shapesculpt, points for Style. Cheers! |
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Sure, or we can both send each other a link
When do u want it to start? |
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February 20, 2012 |
Quoting Ezekiel the created
Um, I guess rakshi but besides that not really. What do u have in mind? a long as theres a rahkshii head used for the head im good, should i send u a link so u know which one i have entered and vice versa or what?
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Um, I guess rakshi but besides that not really. What do u have in mind? |
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February 20, 2012 |
Quoting Ben V.
Wow! He's epic! I might make him if you want me to! sure if u would like to chibifi him or make a full size version u can, thanks for da comment!
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February 19, 2012 |
Wow! He's epic! I might make him if you want me to! |
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February 18, 2012 |
Quoting Ezekiel the created
Im ready when u are. How's next fri for the end date?
any particular rules u can think of, if not i might have something ready c: |
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February 17, 2012 |
Im ready when u are. How's next fri for the end date? |
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February 17, 2012 |
Quoting Ezekiel the created
Hey man, Do you want to have a rakshi moc-off? that would be great! when would one work for you? also have u thought of joining the 2012 MocAthalon if not u should!
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February 17, 2012 |
Hey man, Do you want to have a rakshi moc-off? |
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February 9, 2012 |
Cool MOC. Love the swords! :D |
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February 9, 2012 |
Quoting M G
A very cool, unique self moc. If I may make one suggestion however, its about the orange sword (midnight). What if you made it into an exact copy of Twilight but reversed the colors. I know that Lego has made the parts required including a black blade piece so I think it would awesome for you to do that! Overall, a very nice self moc, added you to my favorite builders!
well i have to say thanks for the advice and i considered this but the blade is supposed to glow and...well i'm gonna post my mocavercery tonight ill explain then |
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February 9, 2012 |
A very cool, unique self moc. If I may make one suggestion however, its about the orange sword (midnight). What if you made it into an exact copy of Twilight but reversed the colors. I know that Lego has made the parts required including a black blade piece so I think it would awesome for you to do that! Overall, a very nice self moc, added you to my favorite builders! |
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February 7, 2012 |
Quoting Ezekiel the created
Beast! His design's sick! I got a new favorite builder!
thank you very much |
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Beast! His design's sick! I got a new favorite builder! |
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January 22, 2012 |
Nice build, those swords look great! |
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January 11, 2012 |
Awesome! It's crazy custom! And the colors go good together and the swords are awesome! |
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January 11, 2012 |
Awesome! It's crazy custom! And the colors go good together and the swords are awesome! |
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January 10, 2012 |
Quoting Chronos Omega
Awesome! I like the custom designs, specifically the arms and legs. I actually use that same upper arm design on many of my MOCs! Overall, Jaivonn is a great creation.
yeah i know the upper arms are simple but that was from about 5 months ago so ill probably revamp him soon |
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January 10, 2012 |
Awesome! I like the custom designs, specifically the arms and legs. I actually use that same upper arm design on many of my MOCs! Overall, Jaivonn is a great creation. |
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January 10, 2012 |
Very nice self moc, The colours are the same as mine :O I like the idea of the swords. |
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November 23, 2011 |
quick thing to take notice of i will probably re-upload jaivonn altogether cuz i tried editing the bio twice and it would never save the changes i will also try to take better (and more) pics |
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November 23, 2011 |
awesome love the custom body and the rakshi head and i think the sword is amazing oh and yes i did update banjaxs legs but ssshhhhh im saving that announcment for version somtin or nother(its a diffrent # every time) but yeah thanks for noticing and commenting |
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November 21, 2011 |
Quoting Dragonmaster 1027
Wow! This is incredible! This looks like a great start to a great building career or something!
thanks, i also recently found your home page and have been checking out your mocs |
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November 21, 2011 |
That's a very nice self-MOC you have there... :3 The entire build is really nice, especially the torso and the custom swords. :) |
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November 21, 2011 |
Wow! This is incredible! This looks like a great start to a great building career or something! |
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November 19, 2011 |
Quoting Overlord Galaxus (Instant Noodles)
Nice! The forearms are amazing! The build is awesome! Nice swords too!
thanks!!! |
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November 19, 2011 |
Nice! The forearms are amazing! The build is awesome! Nice swords too! |
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November 17, 2011 |
Quoting Super Pikmin
Cool! His body, arms, and legs are great! Also I like his weapons. Good job!
thanks it means allot to have people liking my selfmoc |
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November 17, 2011 |
Cool! His body, arms, and legs are great! Also I like his weapons. Good job! |
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November 16, 2011 |
Quoting Mr. X
He does look like a knight. "None shall pass!" Haha, just a little monty python joke. A nice build!
"all right we'll call it a draw" XD he's actually an
assassin though, i tried to upload his bio but mocpages wasn't letting me =( |
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November 16, 2011 |
He does look like a knight. "None shall pass!" Haha, just a little monty python joke. A nice build! |
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November 14, 2011 |
Quoting sniperray213 ???
i do say that this moc is very good and no1 else has commented on it besides me only :)
Thanks a lot =D this is my first moc to the pages but there r many more made that i wil post soon!!!
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November 14, 2011 |
i do say that this moc is very good and no1 else has commented on it besides me only :)
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November 14, 2011 |
i do say that this moc is very good and no1 else has commented on it besides me only :)
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