The second part of my FAYHS series "A Second Attempt" has been released.Sorry it took so long though.Anyways,enjoy!
About this creation
(Star Wars Theme Song Playing)
Tom Kane narrating-A conflict just begun.Having recently discovered that a pair of evil and notorious bounty hunters have stolen a precious Jedi Holocron,Jedi Master Yoda and Mace Windu were caught up in a tight spot.Now not knowing that the Holocron itself was at the hands of a child,it appears that this lad has taken a great responsibility without the notice,perhaps the greatest one of his young life,for now...
Previously...
Back at the Hunters' place.In the jail cell.
Rim-Hehehe,let's see try to escape now runt!
Mawwe-Yeah,what he said.
Han-You're not very good at insults nor combacks,are you hammerhead?
Mawwe-Shut up kid,you're lucky Mr.Boss here won't let me blast your head off your body.
Han is left alone.
Door shuts.
Present hour...

Han's mother (through comlink)-Han,I'm ready to leave,all I need is you to board the ship son.
Han-Be right there, Mom.Just gimme a sec.
Han's mother-Baby,what are you up to anyways?You made me worry.
Han-Don't worry,Mom.It's not like I'm captured by any bounty hunters who happen to have a glowy box for any particular reason that I particularly don't want.
Han's mother-Huh?
Han-Be right there, Mom!Bye,yeah,ye I love you too Mom.
(She drops out)
Han-Sheeesh,women.
Han-Those two idiots are even bigger idiots than I had ever thought they could've been.I can't believe that they didn't notice me taking this from their hands.
He takes out a key.

Han-Now let's see if this works.
Door lock opened.
Han-Yes,it worked.

Han-Hmmm, I wonder if...
The key also opened his handcuffs loose.
Han-Yeah.It worked. Curriosity doesn't kill the Mynock after all!
Back at the main room...Where the two bounty hunters appeared to be talking.
Rim-....So yeah....
While they did so...
...Han was hiding behind them without an eye's notice.
Han(thinking)-Gotta get to that box somehow,than after a speeder to just get outta here.
Suddenly,Han jumps up and starts hitting the Hammerhead.
Mawwe Rick-Hey,get off me!
Rim Bosst-You,how did you get out?!
After having knocked down Mawwe,the young boy prepared for a strike at Rim.
Rim-Don't move, runt!
Han jumps on him as well!
Han-Gimme that!
Rim-No!!!!!It's our future payment!
Suddenly and unexpectedly,Han gives Rim a punch!
Rim-Oof!
Making him drop the Holocron.
Luckily,Han got the chance to retrieve it.
Han-Gotcha.
Then,he boards a speeder bike...
Han-Time to get outta here!
...and leaves to his mother's coordinates.
Han-Waaahoooo!
Rim-Come back here you little thief!
Outside, near a city lies a Separatist Shuttle.
Han arrives, thinking it was his mother's ship...
...Boards the ship.Which is actually the means of transporting the bounty hunters to General Grievous's Flagship itself!


The droid heard the sound of the door closed.
Pilot droid-Well,I think the bounty hunters came in.Guess it's time to get off this place.*sighs*When will I ever retire?
The shuttle now prpares to leave.
Rim-Noooo!You got the wrong...
The shuttle left...
Rim-...Passenger.
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November 24, 2011 |
Really cool I can't wait to see next part. |
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I like it |
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November 17, 2011 |
Nice one! Can'twait to see what happenes in grievouses flag ship. |
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I made it |
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November 16, 2011 |
Now it's done. |
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November 16, 2011 |
Almost done. |
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November 16, 2011 |
Interesting.Can't wait to see the finished version! |
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