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Jordan, the 2444th Member of the OoMN!
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Jordan returns, and he's better than ever before! Hope you like my take on one of the greatest Fire self mocs on the Pages! :D
About this creation
Name: Jordan
Gender:Male
Species:Matoran
Race: Ta Matoran
Element: Fire
Occupation: Serving as a Leader of the OoMN with his team Cossy and Phosphorus(who replaced Kulstof).
Title(s): The 2444th, Toa, Brother
Kanohi: Unknown
Alignment: Lawful Good
Moc Status: Assembled

After greatly wounded by the Dark Hunter, Veneno, Jordan was immediately taken care of and nursed back to health. Although he is still needing to stay in the OoMN base after his injury, he trains with his new team partner, Phosphorus, who is determined to fulfill his duty to capture or kill Kulstof. Jordan looks forward to seeing Cossy again soon, but has small lingering feelings for his friends that he feels could have helped him in his efforts against Veneno.


Raviel realized I forgot to show Jube off in this post! Here you go Raviel! :D

Front view.

Back view.

Action pose 1

Action pose 2

Kick!

Action pose 3

Comparison with his old team, Cossy and Kusltof.

Callan: G'day Jordan, Cossy. As of now I am being updated for Caleb's Birthday next week, therefore, I need you two to be responsible and take care of the rest of this page so you may benefit the viewers and make them feel visiting this page was worth it.
Cossy: Can do, Callan.
Jordan: Trust me, Cal, I got this in the bag...

5 minutes later...

Cossy: Ugh.... Jordan, why must you be such a ladies man?
Jordan: What, I can't help it I'm a chick magnet!
Callan: I'M GONNA KILL YOU FOR THIS, JORDAN!!!

Cossy: Once again, I, Cossy, the Lord of Blue Flames, have conquered lesser Toa of Fire...
Jordan: Yeah, yeah, yeah... Fun's over, where are those chicks you said were interested in me?!
Cossy: Erm... They're coming.... eventually.

Jordan: Later guys!! If you see Cossy, tell him I'm gonna get him for tricking me about those girls!!
Cossy: Do you need glasses?! I'm right behind you!

Please comment and rate if you like him!! See ya soon!

UP NEXT: Callan's Birthday Revamp!!



Comments

  November 24, 2011
Oh uh oops! :P Sorry about that I thought he did. XD Well great job! ,Shadow
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  November 24, 2011
Quoting Shadow Falcon Hmmmm.....Where is the silver? :P Other than no silver you did great! ,Shadow
He actually doesn't have that much silver. *shrugs* Thanks man! :D
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  November 24, 2011
Hmmmm.....Where is the silver? :P Other than no silver you did great! ,Shadow
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  November 23, 2011
He's buff. :D
  November 22, 2011
I dunno. :P We could wait till then to decide.
  November 22, 2011
Sorry Cal, I can't Skype right now. The only computer that's compatable is somewhat broken. :/ I'm online on FB though!
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  November 22, 2011
Quoting Legofreak2444 ~ I think that'd be awesome. :D Maybe during Christmas break?
Sounds perfect! Can't wait! When should we decide the category?! :D
  November 22, 2011
Quoting Callan Lord of Fire Ha ha, nice work! Good luck against Zac! By the way, do you think we could have a Moc Off once you finish the MIT? I think it's about time we went head to head! :D
I think that'd be awesome. :D Maybe during Christmas break?
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  November 22, 2011
a good use for Furno's helmate. .
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  November 21, 2011
ah so responsible XD could you enter my contest in toa elite
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  November 21, 2011
Pretty cool. I'm not such a fan of the body it looks a little oddly proportioned but i love the arms and legs. The blades look great and you can get some really neat poses out of him. Nice job.
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  November 20, 2011
Quoting Chopperskull Jon I don't really agree with it's extreme bulkyness but then again ,the original Jordan is bulky too. I love the Knights kingdom pieces on him as details ! I do not really like the arms but they are different so idk. The legs and body is super awesome so yeah, Congrats to that :D
Thanks a million guys, this means a LOT!!! Yeah Chopper, he sure has interesting arms. But they were better then they were before I updated them. XD
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  November 20, 2011
I don't really agree with it's extreme bulkyness but then again ,the original Jordan is bulky too. I love the Knights kingdom pieces on him as details ! I do not really like the arms but they are different so idk. The legs and body is super awesome so yeah, Congrats to that :D
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  November 20, 2011
Awesome! definitely better then the old version. :) This may be, I dare say, one of your best EVER. :O
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  November 20, 2011
Nicely done! I like his proportions, they give him a nice flow overall.
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  November 20, 2011
Nicely done! I think that this is one of your top five best Bio-MOCs to date.
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  November 20, 2011
OMG! i loved the bit at the end XD this moc is cool, Do you mind if i make a body design based on this one? anyway,i like the arms! well done!
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  November 20, 2011
First impression: Powerful! Yeah, you made him look much better than the old version! The many mata red pieces work well here, and are very good combined to the darkred rest. Very nice design of the arms, too! Overall, another excellent MoC of yours! May I ask, when is your Birthday? Can't find anything on you page...
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  November 20, 2011
Woah! Woah! That's totally rad! The design is just so HOT! A brilliant take on Jordan! Great job!
Caleb Lang
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L. Nguyen
  November 19, 2011
the spot between the shoulder and the arms could you a tire but a good MOC nonetheless
Caleb Lang
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Toa Oblivious ,Master of Earth
  November 19, 2011
". Wow
Caleb Lang
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Chaos Master
  November 19, 2011
Haha He is a ladies man, isn't he? XD Great MOC, this version of Jordan ROCKS! Good job!
Caleb Lang
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Groundquake 9911
  November 19, 2011
Good work!Jordan has got to stop kissing in the pics.
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  November 19, 2011
amazing job ....look really great
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  November 19, 2011
Woah! nice arm greebles! I've never seen Jordan look like this before! Check out my new self moc if you want to. http://mocpages.com/moc.php/296007
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  November 19, 2011
Nice revamp! I daresay this may be one of your best MOCs! The way we is bulky, yet still flexeble is awesome! I can't wait to see Callan's revamp! :D
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  November 19, 2011
Very nice! Love those arms! Great work! This is probably my favourite Jordan I've seen (One of at least :P) Anyway, great work man :D
  November 19, 2011
very cool & funny :)
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  November 19, 2011
awwwww poo u have out done my version of jordan by a long shot! btw I revamped Kydran
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  November 19, 2011
Awesome! The arms are great and I'm excited to see Callan's updates!
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  November 19, 2011
Well defined look. Good designs, I like it, neat.
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  November 19, 2011
Wow man! Great job! Love the torso! Can't wait to see Callan's revamp! =D
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  November 19, 2011
Hey callan your self MOC is up!! :D
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  November 19, 2011
Can't wait! Deus is also getting a revamp (what you uploaded was just a preview), so you can expect that in the future!
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  November 19, 2011
Brilliant! Can't wait to see Callan's upgrade! =D
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  November 19, 2011
Man, I sure am the lady's man! :D [Patent!] XD JK. Looks awesome bro! :D Love him! Sweet arms and legs. :) Thanks for making him again bro. ;) I'll be *ahem* working on my project now. ;) Thanks again, looks awesome! :D
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  November 19, 2011
INCREDIBLE! Awesome take on Jordan! He will FLIP when he sees this!
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  November 19, 2011
Wonderful take on him, it looks original but keeps alot of the same character. Fantastic arms in particular.
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  November 19, 2011
Epic!!! what more can I say?
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  November 19, 2011
EPIC!!! One of the best Jordans out there!
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  November 19, 2011
Epic take on Jordan! Did you know legofreak plans on changing Jordan's name soon? Anyways, it looks epic! Do ya wanna chat in ZBM?When are the Chibis arriving? XD Can't wait for your next moc!
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  November 19, 2011
Some interesting techniques there... The ribs appear a bit 'fat' though.
  November 19, 2011
can you please answer my question on your Pho MOC? it's pretty important!
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  November 19, 2011
now this is cool!! really nice job! :D
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  November 19, 2011
Nice work!Now all we need is Jube in there.....LOL.:p
 
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