This vignette was a rather rushed (I built it in about 20 minutes) because it's due tomorrow, so I'm not really pleased with the result. As you can see, it's Christian on his journey to the Celestial City, but I didn't build it based on any specific scene from the book - just a general one. I also tried some picture editing on this one by using Picnik. I'm missing some parts for Christian, but I don't have enough time to buy more from Bricklink. So his colors don't really match.
I'm embarrassed to say that I am not familiar with this story but it is a beautiful little vig. Regarding your winglets - they are looking extremely good, they are a little difficult to see due to the black Lego issue. The whole front looks awesome i cant wait to see it :). How have you posted that picture?