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The Dread Wars Part 1, Raphaels Lament
in the first episode, raphael looks back on his land and life. and his future.
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Raphael: its a shame, that a planet as beautiful as this one ,is under such siege.


Raphael: It was hard enough thousands of years ago when atukam was ruling, but now a darker threat has uprooted. but this time, i cant stop it head on.


Raphael: i wish i could just grasp the idea of peace, but it always seems to get lost in reality.

*raphael slowly gets up*

Raphael: peace can never come like it used to. it used to be so god damn simple back then, but now i cant even walk out into the public without being recognized and demeaned.

raphael walks over*

Raphael: ever since atukams overthrowment the world has fallen into destructive,suffocating chaos.

Raphael: my life as taken a turn for horrible.

Raphael: i want to rid of these rulers, i want to rid of them so the world can finaly be at peace for once!

raphael walks away*

Raphael: but im afraid they will never be destroyed, and this time, i dont think peace will ever come back......



Comments

 I like it 
  December 2, 2011
Very interesting. I look forward to seeing where this will go! :D
 I like it 
  December 2, 2011
Awesome! i think Raphael is becoming the best character you ever made. Brilliant brother. Can't wait for more!
HyperShadow 623
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The One Who Needs Pieces
  December 1, 2011
Holy Crap this is awesome!
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  December 1, 2011
Must...read...next...part.
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  December 1, 2011
A very nice chapter man :D Looking forward to more :D This is going to be a great comic :D
HyperShadow 623
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Chaos Master
  November 30, 2011
Very dreadful (Lives up to it's name). Can't wait to see more!
 I like it 
  November 30, 2011
Nice.
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  November 30, 2011
OH MY GAWSH READ YOUR STORY WHILE LISTENING TO THIS http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hcLpVn-bLAo&feature=related :D IT'S EPICCCCC!
 I like it 
  November 30, 2011
nice :D
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  November 30, 2011
Nice!
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  November 30, 2011
Very nice and dark. So how bout taken alook at my stuff I even made u!
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  November 30, 2011
I wish I knew who these characters are and what he's talking about... But anyway, great beginning to a story!
 
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