The next installment in my story, A Story Retold!
About this creation
Missed the other chapters?
Prologue: Here!
Chapter 1: Here!
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Now, for the story. You might want to check out chapter 1 again, it picks up right where chapter 1 left off.

Destrin: Eat sword, toa!
Vanu: Owww!!!!

Vex: Nooo!! Vanu!
Uhhhhhh…

Prepare to die, stupid toa. You have been bested.
Tempus: Crap.

Vex: Aaaaaaaah! You monster!!! DIEEEEEE!!!!!
*blam blam blam blam*
Ah! Why you little...

*KA-Pow!*
Tempus: Rule one, never turn your back on an angry toa.
Urk!

*Bam!*
Uuuuuh! (breath knocked out)

Vex: Is he dead?
No.
Gah!
Vanu: Uuuuuh.... I put a cloth on the place where he cut my arm... I say we cut his throat now.
Tempus: Now don’t make hasty decisions based off your rage, young one. Let’s first find out why he attacked us. He’s not some stupid beast, the makuta attack for reasons.
You know I’m right here. I’ll never tell!
Great. Nice going, Temp.
I knew he was there. And don’t EVER call me ‘Temp’ again. I still have some power over time, remember? I can invoke a memory so strong that he’ll say it aloud.
No I won’t! I hear what you’re trying to do, I’ll...

Shhhhhhhhh .... .... ....
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Aaah! I was sent by Master Teridax to destroy you! You cannot interfere with his plan!
Vex: Whoa! That’s cool!

NOoo! Master will not be pleased! Shame!
*boop!*
What was that?

Haha! See you later, stupids!

*poof!*
All: He’s gone!
Crud.
Now what?

Any idea where to go from here? Our only lead is Teridax, and we don’t know where he is.
How about we find the other two original toa! Maybe one of them will know what to do!
Good idea, but still, where to go now? I’m unfamiliar with today’s world. Vex?
Hrmmmm...

I know! Let’s go to Po-Ere!
Why didn’t I think of that!
Why? What’s there?

???: You have failed us, Destrin. Time to send someone a bit more... competent.
???: Heh Heh Heh...
Fourth Character Commentary: This scene was a lot more fun to shoot, and a lot more painful to edit the photos. I wish I could have a longer fight scene, but I time was an issue. I especially like the backflip shot, sorry I forgot to edit that pic. That's the fourth time I've used a little rig to hold up a character; first when Tempus was in stasis (prologue), second when Destrin was swooping (ch 1), and a third when Destrin hit the wall (this chapter). I hope everyone's liking the story so far, I'm having fun making it for sure!
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April 15, 2012 |
Make more episodes! |
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December 15, 2011 |
You are a very good writer, love my character Tempus! |
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December 9, 2011 |
Nice story so far! Cool fight scene. |
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December 8, 2011 |
"Prepare to die, $tupid toa. You have been bested." Favorite line. XD Love it bro. |
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Chaos Master December 5, 2011 |
This is some good stuff, man. Keep it up! |
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December 5, 2011 |
Awesome! |
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December 4, 2011 |
Nice Chapter.the fight was a bit small but other than that it was awesome |
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December 4, 2011 |
WOW! I can't wait to see who Teridax sends next, but I think it's that toa of Matter guy. |
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December 4, 2011 |
Really sweet stuff dude! |
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