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Blaze Squad Part 1
Part 1 of a comic series I am making, starring my Blaze squad.
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The bridge of the Republic Jedi Cruiser Arbitrator, in orbit of the planet Fondor:



Admiral Akita: (Looking at holoprojector) General, Master McBob's troops have began their attack on the Techno Union Factory.



Jedi Master Hawkins: Very good. Their attack on the Techno Union Factory will distract the Separatists from realizing our true intent...for now.





Clone Trooper: Master Hawkins, we have received the signal to begin.




ARC Trooper Lock: General, should I ready my men?


Jedi Master Hawkins: Yes, and prepare for deployment.















Meanwhile, in a secret Techno Union stronghold, an Admiral is being held prisoner...





Techno Union General: (Calmly) Well done. You refuse my bribes, reject my offers to trade information, and you still manage to be alive. Maybe I am going soft? Why won't you tell me the coordinates? Why won't you say anything at all?


Techno Union General: (continuing) Unfortunately, if you keep being uncooperative, then I might have to use my last resort...



...torture.



Techno Union General: So what do you say....eh?


Admiral: ...


Techno Union General: *shakes head sadly* Well...then I am sorry. At least I try to be civilized about this, but if you don't give me the information....



Techno Union General: ...Then you must die.



Techno Union General: Eh? What do we have here?



BOOM!!!


Techno Union General: (Ducks for cover) Aahh!!!


Master Hawkins: (calmly) Admiral, I am here to rescue you.



(Swings lightsabers) ZWWINNG!!!



ZUUUUT!!!



Admiral: My thanks, Master Jedi.


Master Hawkins: *nods* (points lightsabers towards Techno Union General) And as for you, you will be put on trial for your countless crimes against the Republic.


Techno Union General: HA! You and what army?


Master Hawkins: *smiles* This one.


(Blaze Squad enters)








Techno Union General: Gah! Guards, kill them!!!



Blaze:AHAHAHAHAHA!!! EAT LASERS!!!!



Master Hawkins slices a droid in half.



The squad fires on the 3 remaining droids.



Master Hawkins slices them all.









Some time later...



Flame: (Pointing blaster at captured Techno Union Geberal) Move it!


Techno Union General: But I'm innocent! It's all Dooku's fault! Help me!


Flame: That's for the Senate to decide.



The rest of the squad secures the rest of the facility.



ARC Trooper Lock walks up to Master Hawkins, who is staring out the broken window.



Master Hawkins: ARC Trooper, Report.



Lock: General, we have successfully taken this facility with no casualties, and captured all the Techno Union leaders in it. They will all be put on trial in front of the Senate. The rest of the Separatist leaders and officers are either retreating, in pursuit, or surrendering, sir.


Master Hawkins: Very good. I have just received a message saying that Master McBob has successfully taken the droid factory, so Separatist battle droids can no longer be made on this planet. You and your squad have done a remarkable job, ARC trooper Lock.



*beep*


Master Hawkins: (opens Holopad) Hello, General Tony. I am happy to tell you that we have successfully taken the Techno Union facility on Fondor, but you are not here to talk about rejoice, what is your message?



General Tony: That is good news, but I hope that will outweigh the bad. You see, I came here to stop the Separatist occupation of Hoth, but we came too late. Too many soldiers died just to secure a tiny base, which we now use as our headquarters...



Genreal Tony: ...but there are simply too many droids on Hoth, and my small squad is too little to fight them. We need help from you and your squad, and as many troops as possible.



Master Hawkins: I will see what I can do.


General Tony: Thank you. (signs out)



Lock: General, any orders?


Master Hawkins: Yes. Ready your squad, Lock....















Master Hawkins: ....and prepare for deployment.



END




Comments

 I like it 
  February 14, 2012
when are you gonna make part two
 I like it 
  January 7, 2012
gow did you make locks KAMA and puldren I really want to know
 I made it 
  December 25, 2011
Quoting LegoBoy 12 Merry Christmas and happy New Year Tony! :)
Thanks, and Happy X-mas & New Years to you too!
 I like it 
  December 25, 2011
Merry Christmas and happy New Year Tony! :)
 I made it 
  December 15, 2011
Quoting LegoBoy 12 Really cool Tony, but why you didn't uused a normal lightsaber? Can't wait for part 2.
I don't have one, so I had to improvise.
 I made it 
  December 15, 2011
Thanks, I used Paint. I used to have Photoshop, and that expired, but I could make better scenes with it.
 I like it 
  December 15, 2011
It's good, but you need to work on your effects. What software do you use?
 I like it 
  December 15, 2011
Really cool Tony, but why you didn't uused a normal lightsaber? Can't wait for part 2.
  December 14, 2011
Ps.Would u take a look at this,it's my latest comic.http://www.mocpages.com/moc.php/299668 Thanks.
 I like it 
  December 14, 2011
Nice job!You should add this in my SW comics group!
 
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