Element: Fire, and Phoenix Rage (Phoenix Rage is a sacred type of fire, if Destrin is angry, you'll hate being on his bad side :P)
Occupation(s): Mercenary, Toa, Assassin
Title(s): Destrin, Toa
Bio: Destrin as a Matoran, always dreamed of being a Toa, but he wanted to be a little different than the average fire Toa, but he still he wanted to be the next fire Toa. Destrin was taught how to be a mercenary as a matoran, not far away from Ga-Metru borders. Destrin was then hired for certain job in Ga-Metru, but failed when he was nearly killed by the Makuta he needed to kill. Well after the Morbuzakh vines had been done disintegrating, Destrin was out and about to kill that one Makuta. And he did so, but was about to die, Destrin walked up to the Makuta and then all the sudden a source of raw energy hit Destrin, and he knew that this was called Phoenix Rage, and he had to control his anger carefully with this. He then told his master that, and they went to Mata Nui to seek this source of energy. After the Toa Mata had served for a long time, a new Toa Team was in need. Destrin was given a Fire Toa stone by Tahu, and then he was transformed. He then soon met his team members (Galvis, Metrex, Junta, and Denos) They later on called themselves the Toa Senorax. Two of Destrin's close friends are Junta and Galvis, Destrin has noticed that Junta has a attention toward Destrin, and Denos is carelessly flirting with Galvis, they are currently helping the Toa Nuva protect the matorans and Mata Nui
And the other side!
The inside of his NEW custom legs :D
I fixed his waist.
His new Phoenix Blade :3
Destrin: Ta ta for now!
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So you want some critique, eh? Here's a full blast. The legs, torso and waist are good in this structure, but then comes the possible improvements. 1. The stars feet are out of shape on his arms and do not fit in. 2. The shoulders need covering. Get there some panels or something. To fit the shoulder armor with the torso, the chest might need to be raised a little by a stud or two. Shoulder armor also gives a nice longer appearance for the arms. 3. The headgear's kind of too big. You should try something smaller. 4. The lower arms are kind of thin horizontally. The side needs some filling, perhaps a visorak foot?
Now this is so much better. The legs are a great improvement, the old ones were way too short. I do still feel though that the chest needs to be changed, and I heartily agree with all the other comments, especially Noodles'. Headgear needs to be a lot smaller too. That's all from me.
Much better man! The new waist is nice and he is a lot cleaner now :) The only thing I still think you need to do is work on the Assassin look, I still think changing the colour scheme to black and red would aid that, along with maybe making the legs thinner along with thinning out the torso a bit. For example Dystrax is silver and black, (Red and Black would look just as good :D) and very skinny and he has the perfect assassin look! I'm sure you'll be able to do it :) Good luck with that man ;)
Ok, getting better :)The arms and legs are better now, almost perfect actually :) The waist is better (where I said it was really skinny, NOT ANYMORE :D )My only complaints is still the neck and the shoulders, but still, way better than b4. Oh and nice update on his Phoenix blade :)