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SHE IS MY NEW FEMALE CHARACTER from my book that im typing up on deviantart.com :D
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this is my new female moc that i created :D
YES AND FINALLY.
yaaaaaaaay i have finally builded my new female moc character from my book

well im suprised on how long it took me to build her. it took me almost 3 days to build her. 1st day was timed at 8:00 all the way to 3:00 in the morning(o.o). the second day was the same time(0.o again lol). and FINISHED HER TODAY

but the problem is that she is missing pieces that i need to finish her. But i will get the pieces PRONTO. and i am also updating her :)



Comments

 I made it 
  April 10, 2012
Quoting Green Tavis OK, i read your story now. I think it's not bad, but you could improve some things. I don't have an account on DA, so I think I just tell you the two most important things in my opinion right here. First: I don't like the idea of Raymond being "allmighty". It is just boring I think if he wins every challenge without problems (Yes, I know, he's the son of Mata Nui but still). But on the other hand he gets beaten by Hali throwing a rock at him and a Bohrok (Not Bohork ;) )... Second: I'd like if you would put some more detail in your description of the events. Often you just tell hat happens without details or descriptions. But I think you improved a bit on this point! - Greetings, Green Tavis - PS: When will you add the next chapter?
Thank you. and im already working on Chapter 9
  April 10, 2012
hi friend, I like this very much moc. I wish you could build as good as me.
  April 10, 2012
OK, i read your story now. I think it's not bad, but you could improve some things. I don't have an account on DA, so I think I just tell you the two most important things in my opinion right here. First: I don't like the idea of Raymond being "allmighty". It is just boring I think if he wins every challenge without problems (Yes, I know, he's the son of Mata Nui but still). But on the other hand he gets beaten by Hali throwing a rock at him and a Bohrok (Not Bohork ;) )... Second: I'd like if you would put some more detail in your description of the events. Often you just tell hat happens without details or descriptions. But I think you improved a bit on this point! - Greetings, Green Tavis - PS: When will you add the next chapter?
 I made it 
  April 10, 2012
Quoting Green Tavis OK, thanks! I'll read it as soon as i have time for it!
ok
  April 10, 2012
OK, thanks! I'll read it as soon as i have time for it!
 I made it 
  April 9, 2012
Quoting Green Tavis Hello Sniperray, Could you please post a link to that book you're writing? I'd like to read that...
Sure but Im still thinking upthe editing parts of it so it is not done yet. but im still working on it http://sniperray213.deviantart.com/gallery/?q=Golden+Warrior%3A+Toa+Raymond#/d4h1130
  April 9, 2012
Hello Sniperray, Could you please post a link to that book you're writing? I'd like to read that...
 
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