Name: Toa Chains
theme:Transformers DOTM - Iridescent
story: Chains(formally krayans) was a son of a warrior who lead a group called the hunters. Krayan was soon to be the eir of his fathers throne. When Krayan became king of hunters he lead his troops, not to aid people in wars, but to defeat the two people he hated most Mata Nui and Makuta.
Krayan went to assasinate mata nui then got captured by a toa spying on him then rapped Krayan in the strongest chains in bionicle time.
Krayan was so strong with all his power he broke open the chains picked them up and escaped.
chains were still attached to Krayan that he couldnt take off so he kept them on and nick named himself Chains.
when chains was fleaing the prison the toa trapped him in he met a follower of Makuta called trakon. with the chains still hanging off chains he whiped them on trakon head giving him deep bloody scars on his head.
chains fought many wars with the hunters until only three remained. him his brother and a robot he created. chains decided to join the toa as he hated mata nui less after he saw him fighting he was an insperation to chains...
Chains is also very intellegence he is great with robotics and can fix most broken down robots
Chains now recrutes toa.
LETS GET THIS PARTY STARTED
Lower legs GREEBLES
Upper legs MORE GREEBLES
Upper arms GREEBLE...this is getting old. Lower arm, same
Hands (with possable fingers :D Who used these hands first S:l
Front, How much is hammer. HAMMER IS FREEEEEEE (Cookies to the person who nows where thats from)
Morack: Hey! Nissan, did you hear it was Chains' owners 11th birthday
Nissan: Now hes the same age as Nathan!
Chains: PUT ME DOWN!!!
Morack and Nissan: WOAH
Chains: Do i look stupid <:(
Morack and Nissan: YOU LOOK AWESOME
Morack: But not as awesome as Morack Reborn *troll face*
Chains: WHY YOU LITTLE
Hope you enjoyed and Nathan I DIDNT FORGET ABOUT YOU XD
You have a very original shape for his body frame, I really like that! Also the mask suits him well! I do feel though lots more chains would be nice, to fit his name. Also there really aren't any greebles one him at the moment. Greebles are tiny details on a MOC, usually with system. Also I feel that this lower legs and upper arms are very cluttered and all over the place. I'd maybe make those flow a bit more. Anyway good luck with revamping him. Nice work ;) Hope this all helped ;)
HAPPY 11th BIRTHDAY!!!!! any way I love Nissan except that mask is just...eh...weird so give me a list of masks you own and I'll pick which one I think would be better. btw I really like Chains upgrades they make him look more buff and soild. Also I like how you took off all the weird colors!