Quoting Silenthunt Productions
Hmm...I'm not sure what to say to be honest. Needs work, that's all I can say. Looks disorganized (Chains) and clumpy. Sorry if that sounds rude, just making an observation is all. The first one looks ok. The head sticks out too much for my taste and the body is a little too small compared to the head. I hope this doesn't sound too negative. Just trying to help, you can ask me for mocing tips if you like, but I don't want to sound all "Better than thou" and such. Please understand I only mean to help. :)
I could always use critizism Thanks ill take your thoughts into consideration :)