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MocOff #1: CLoF vs LF2444 - Krizan and Ossum
Happy New Years everyone! As my first moc of the year, I introduce my entries into my MocOff against Legofreak 2444. I introduce Jordan's brothers: Krizan and Ossum!
About this creation

Our job was to create our own versions of two mocs made by our opponent. Although I can’t be sure whether Legofreak helped his brothers build their self mocs or not, I hoped he would have no problem with me building infected versions of them as a gift towards them and as entries for our MocOff! Anyway, hope you like them both! Let’s begin with Krizan...

Name: Krizan
Gender: Male
Species: Matoran
Race: Le Matoran(infected)
Element: Air(formerly), Acid
Occupation: Not yet revealed.
Title(s): Toa, Brother
Kanohi: Unknown
Alignment: Not to be revealed yet.
Moc Status: Assembled

Callan's story: Although he and his brother have become infected with some sort of virus, it is currently unknown whether this infection has had any effect on Krizan's sense of dignity and justice. He is currently living on Spherus Magna.

Here he is! Do you like him ChrisOtron?

Rear view! I'm happy to say that the back of his HF legs are well armored! :D

Action Pose 1

Action Pose 2

Action Pose 3

Now on to Ossum! :D

Name: Ossum
Gender: Male
Species: Matoran
Race: Fe Matoran(infected)
Element: Iron
Occupation: Not yet revealed.
Title(s): Toa, Brother, Awesome, Strong guy, Tough guy, Bag of rocks.
Kanohi: Unknown
Alignment: Not to be revealed yet.
Moc Status: Assembled.

Callan's Bio: The virus given to him has had no effect on his element as it has on his brother Krizan's, but it has yet to be determined whether it has effected his allegiance to the Toa.


Though not a lot like the original, there are some similarities that can be seen!

Rear view.

Action Pose 1

Action Pose 2

No, Ossum, don't break the camera with your boomerang! D:

Now on to comparisons!

Krizan and Ossum back to back.

In comparison with Callan and Magmagear(my tallest moc). You can see that Ossum is close.

The three brothers!

Later Krizan and Ossum!

Next moc to be posted! Hope you'll like him!

Fourth Wall Commentary:
I'm very happy with these two. It's very hard to decide which I prefer. Krizan's agile look and Ossum's powerful body make these two a perfect match. While their bios are currently unclear, these two WILL be making major appearances in a future story. Now on to the not so fun part: Sorry if you didn't want me to build these two, Luke and Chris, and I'm even more sorry if you don't like how they're infected. All will be explained in the story they'll be appearing in, and a major reason these two got brand new heads was because their original masks are being used on other self mocs. Hope you understand, and I hope most of all that you guys like them! And I hope you don't mind that I made these rather than mocs you've made alone, Legofreak, your limited number of original mocs and the want of pleasing your brothers affected my decision and I hope you have no problem with it. If you do, feel free to say so, and we'll work something out. Thanks for viewing!

Please Comment and Rate if you like them! Have a good day! :D



Comments

 I like it 
  February 16, 2012
i can't really figure out the body for krizan, do you think you can send me a pic? if you don't want to that's fine
 I like it 
  February 5, 2012
Krizan's head is amazing! I think both of them are amazing! Keep up the awesome work!
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  January 22, 2012
Great job, especially like the green one's head, very unique. Would you mind taking a look at my updated Krentak, I put a few greebles on him, and wanted to know if they looked good. Also, not meening to sound desperate or anything, but can you tell me what you think of the final update to Rex? You liked him before he was updated, I just want to know if you like him even more now. Thanks a bunch mate.
 I like it 
  January 11, 2012
good job =D
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  January 8, 2012
Nice!
  January 7, 2012
Epic! love the mask. Thanks calan
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  January 7, 2012
Ive been gone for a while, but what happened to Callan!!!!! BTW, great MOCs.
 I like it 
  January 7, 2012
I might have to take that krana thing. :)
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  January 7, 2012
Great use of the krana!
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  January 6, 2012
they are epic! I love those heads they are simple yet awesome :D BTW you should totally make a mega titan moc. and if you decide to make one and need help just call me :D and I would be glad to help. + the tire's on the hf limbs is veary effective, might just use that some time ;)
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  January 6, 2012
they are epic! I love those heads they are simple yet awesome :D BTW you should totally make a mega titan moc. and if you decide to make one and need help just call me :D and I would be glad to help. + the tire's on the hf limbs is veary effective, might just use that some time ;)
 I made it 
  January 5, 2012
Quoting LukeSC Overlord Great job! I like Ossum best. I don't mind that you made an infected version of him, except that he's hardly recognizable. And I don't know why you'd think that Jordan helped us build them.
Sorry bout that, I tried to beef up his body and swap the orang highlights for red and that totally threw off the body. And the custom head didn't help either, so again, sorry bout that. And I think you misunderstood, I didn't say I THOUGHT he helped you, I said I didn't KNOW whether he helped you or not since our category was to build something made by the other person. I meant no offense towards your building skills and had full confidence that you could've built him yourself, I just didn't know. ;)
 I made it 
  January 5, 2012
Quoting Legofreak2444 ~ Will do. I think getting more than one judge would be great. Can you ask them? Thanks. :D
Got it! I'll contact them ASAP!
 I made it 
  January 5, 2012
Quoting LukeSC Overlord Great job! I like Ossum best. I don't mind that you made an infected version of him, except that he's hardly recognizable. And I don't know why you'd think that Jordan helped us build them.
Sorry bout that, I tried to beef up his body and swap the orange highlights for red and that totally threw off the body. And the custom head didn't help either, so again, sorry bout that. And I think you misunderstood, I didn't say I THOUGHT he helped you, I said I didn't KNOW whether he helped you or not since our category was to build something made by the other person. I meant nothing towards your building skills and had full confidence that you could've built him yourself, I just didn't know. ;)
  January 5, 2012
Will do. I think getting more than one judge would be great. Can you ask them? Thanks. :D
 I like it 
  January 5, 2012
Great job! I like Ossum best. I don't mind that you made an infected version of him, except that he's hardly recognizable. And I don't know why you'd think that Jordan helped us build them.
 I made it 
  January 5, 2012
Quoting Legofreak2444 ~ Wow, these are really good. :D Man... O.O Great job, not what I was expecting, but whatever. :P I think I should take a second look at my entry. :P I think I tried to make mine look more like the your version instead of my version. XD Oh well. Let me see what I can do. I also only built one MOC sadly. :( Who knows, maybe I can whip up something in the next few days. Who's judging anyway? Oh well, nuf chatter, more MOCing. Good luck! BTW, it wasn't that easy trying to find MOCs of yours to make either. Hey, can I make an addition to your Dark Hunter team as a second part of my entry? Since, you didn't really follow the rules either. :P You wouldn't have to put him in your team if you don't want to. What do you say? :)
Ha ha, thanks, and no, I didn't exactly follow the rules. :3 But of course! Feel free to make a new member of the Rogue if you like, just know that if you can't, one of my entries can not count and we'll just go one on one. Good luck with your entry! Oh, and I think Ben's judging, do you think we should have two more like Gringat and Clockwork Tempest?
 I like it 
  January 5, 2012
Wow, these are really good. :D Man... O.O Great job, not what I was expecting, but whatever. :P I think I should take a second look at my entry. :P I think I tried to make mine look more like the your version instead of my version. XD Oh well. Let me see what I can do. I also only built one MOC sadly. :( Who knows, maybe I can whip up something in the next few days. Who's judging anyway? Oh well, nuf chatter, more MOCing. Good luck! BTW, it wasn't that easy trying to find MOCs of yours to make either. Hey, can I make an addition to your Dark Hunter team as a second part of my entry? Since, you didn't really follow the rules either. :P You wouldn't have to put him in your team if you don't want to. What do you say? :)
 I like it 
  January 4, 2012
Superb! The head designs are really nice. :)
 I like it 
  January 4, 2012
Great builds. I love the Krana head.
 I like it 
  January 4, 2012
Krizan is by far my favourite, but then I'm fond of spikier MOCs. I think he would be more complete with some kind of vicious weapon as well though - or without the shield, if he just uses his claws. Ossum looks very much a toa of Iron and I like how clunky you made him, but as you said yourself on Skype, his back does look slightly awkward.
 I like it 
  January 4, 2012
Very solid MOCs you got here! How did you attach those 2x2 1/3 round plates to the back of the HF bones? Good luck in your MOC-off!
 I like it 
  January 4, 2012
nice but I see you didn't take my advice and give one of them a very large sword. very nice still.
 I like it 
  January 4, 2012
nice,have you got more parts?
 I like it 
  January 4, 2012
Very cool designs, the first look makes them look like two very good characters! Krizan looks very agile, due to his sleek body design. The Hero Factory parts on him are looking great! The idea of putting a Krana in the "mouth" of the Scorpio-helmet is nice! Ossum looks more like the strong, but not that intelligent character, maybe because his hands are very big, his bulky design and the head make him look like that. But he has some nice parts uses, too, like the 2004-Matoran body on the back. Fantastic creations!
 I like it 
  January 4, 2012
Wow epic!! both krizan and ossum look awesome! great job!
 I like it 
  January 4, 2012
Nicely done on both of them! The clean yet full look of Krizan's HF armor compliments the greebled Bio-armor of Ossum. Excellent work!
 I like it 
  January 4, 2012
Cool MOCs, dude! I especially like Krizan's face. ANd is that customish feet I see?
 I like it 
  January 4, 2012
Sweet!
 I like it 
  January 4, 2012
Wow! Both of them are sweet! Krizan's look to Ossum's build! Good luck on your moc-off! And I have rather good news for you(and your brothers), I have make a Bricklink order... With Davix's and Callan's masks in it! Callan's mask is the old dark red with silver one, The full red one was 30 bucks! I shall post Callan, Davix and Jojo in one page, and Jojo is already made!
 I like it 
  January 4, 2012
Great start to a new year my friend! Excellent work on both of them, the tires on Krizan's legs are brilliant, and Ossom looks AMAZING! Also, it appears that Solonus has his legs now! Can't wait for more!
Callan LoF
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NoWhereMan .
  January 3, 2012
Wow, those are both great. I like Krizan better, but that's just me. Ossum's boomerang reminds me of the Hiraikotsu. Also, I can't wait to see your new Solunus.
Callan LoF
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S.E.D .
  January 3, 2012
Really like what you did with Krizan :)
 I like it 
  January 3, 2012
Like these guys, very good made heads.
 I like it 
  January 3, 2012
These two MOC's a very well done. Even though it isn't judged I love that the two of them seem like a great pair :) Anyway both MOC's have great mask designs! They also have excellent hand designs too. The customness on Ossum is brilliant and Krizan's infected feel is perfect! Critique wise I have very little with the two. However (Although this is a very small thing) Maybe you could give Krizan some wings? Not sure, I think he'll look good with or without them so :) Anyway your score, For Krizan, 8.5/10 for Ossum 8.5/10 :D
 I like it 
  January 3, 2012
Very original; I'm also having a tough time picking a favorite. Love what you did with the Krana and the HF mask!
 I made it 
  January 3, 2012
Quoting Chopperskull Jon Really strange but creative. I'm not a big fan of the green one, although it is well made. The head is really awkward, but the HF legs actually look nice on him. The bigger one is nicer. The big and filled up designs (especially the legs) are really impressive ! He has a tremendous amount of details and personality put into him. Well done on these mocs, but not your best. Anyways, 5/5 :D
Thanks for the input, Chopperskull! Although I don't quite see how Krizan's head is awkward, I've gotten a little bit of praise for it from some people. But I respect your opinion and appreciate your honest critiques. But for future reference, can you avoid saying "not your best"? I know it's probably true, but it sounds a little bit demeaning. Thanks a million guys! :D
 I like it 
  January 3, 2012
Pretty cool I like the way you put the Krana on scorpio's head
 I like it 
  January 3, 2012
Really strange but creative. I'm not a big fan of the green one, although it is well made. The head is really awkward, but the HF legs actually look nice on him. The bigger one is nicer. The big and filled up designs (especially the legs) are really impressive ! He has a tremendous amount of details and personality put into him. Well done on these mocs, but not your best. Anyways, 5/5 :D
 I like it 
  January 3, 2012
Looking good, as always!
 I like it 
  January 3, 2012
WHOA!! I love them! I like Krizan a little more than Ossum though, but that's just me. Anyway, really cool! Looks like legofreak has some competition
 I like it 
  January 3, 2012
Wow. These are amazing! I love Ossum's custom head, and his hands are sweet! Krizan is equally cool; I love the part combination used on the 'infected' mask.
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  January 3, 2012
These are spectacular! I really like Ossum's custom head and torso. Krizan however, is just way too epic. His hands are great and the head is awesome!
 I made it 
  January 3, 2012
Quoting Owl (Notorious) Wow! These are the best Infected Toa I have seen! Krizan is awesome, especially with his awesome mask. The bulky look of Ossum is a perfect match for Krizan. Like Timon and Pumba!
YES!! XD Although that would mean you're calling Ossum a warthog! ;) Thanks a million guys! :D
 I like it 
  January 3, 2012
Wow! These are the best Infected Toa I have seen! Krizan is awesome, especially with his awesome mask. The bulky look of Ossum is a perfect match for Krizan. Like Timon and Pumba!
 I like it 
  January 3, 2012
Thats Beast!
 I like it 
  January 3, 2012
Ossum is Awesome. Pun intended? I Aint Sayin'! Excellent, 5/5!
 
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