My First Moc-off entry!
About this creation

Name: Logan Maxus
Occupation: Going on various missions assigned to thim by the Hero Factory.
Weapon: Thermo-plasmatic Hand Gun
Team: Special Operations Team: Alpha (S.O.T: Alpha)




Name: Jake Mystery
Occupation: Going on various missions assigned to thim by the Hero Factory.
Weapon: Arm-mounted Atomic Ray Cannon (A.R.C.)
Team: Special Operations Team: Alpha (S.O.T: Alpha)




Name: Drew Solace
Occupation: Going on various missions assigned to thim by the Hero Factory and leading S.O.T: Alpha.
Weapon: High Powered Gamma Rifle
Team: Special Operations Team: Alpha (S.O.T: Alpha)




Solace: Command, come in. Do you read me?

Three-way Brofist!

Stormer: Hey, Rocka, Stringer, Breese, When did you guys get upgrades?

All: See Ya!

Bio for all three: Solace, Maxus, and an unknown informant team up to fight Xerian, the Portal Master. (later) The battle lasts a very long time, but they eventually overcome Xerian. Upon his death however, Xerian releases an enormous portal that sucks in the three heroes. They wake up to find themselves on a strange planet, surrounded by strange people in strange armor holding strange weapons. After they are interrogated, the Hero Factory decides they are innocent and are informed of where they are. They have no memory of where they came from and have been given new armor by the Hero Factory.(their old armor was torn apart in the journey through the portal) They now make up the Hero Factory's first Special Operations Team and live out their lives as Heroes.
I hope you liked them!
Good luck to Mudslide!
And please rate and/or comment!
P.S. Their body armor is made of Piraka heads with their spines cut off at the base of the head. I then wrapped it around a custom body design.
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July 27, 2012 |
An interesting take on HF... I love the use of the piraka spines! |
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March 29, 2012 |
Very awesome! Though I'm a little queasy by the fact that you modified the Piraka spine, it looks really awesome! |
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Hey hey hey~! Omega I can't imagine you go and make a referance to my hidden core armor! I at least show how it's hidden, and there is a actual core inside them. As for putting cores on these guys, yeah, even I don't see a way to do so, I doubt there's any open slots or holes in the back due to the torso armor you used, and you built them stickly thin and armored them quite well.
If there is a hole to put a pin in, attach either 2.0 or 4.0 cores on one and see if it looks alright. If you could figure out a way to redo the torso armor, I would suggest sticking 4.0 cores on their backs and building the armor around it, making the armor look like a team jesey.
Other than that, they are originally toa, right? I say, they are honorary team members, and therefore don't need the cores. Not bad builds. |
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Hey hey hey~! Omega I can't imagine you go and make a referance to my hidden core armor! I at least show how it's hidden, and there is a actual core inside them. As for putting cores on these guys, yeah, even I don't see a way to do so, I doubt there's any open slots or holes in the back due to the torso armor you used, and you built them stickly thin and armored them quite well.
If there is a hole to put a pin in, attach either 2.0 or 4.0 cores on one and see if it looks alright. If you could figure out a way to redo the torso armor, I would suggest sticking 4.0 cores on their backs and building the armor around it, making the armor look like a team jesey.
Other than that, they are originally toa, right? I say, they are honorary team members, and therefore don't need the cores. Not bad builds. |
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January 16, 2012 |
Wow,amazing work!I'll give you 9/10 for creativity,9/10 for build,and 3/5 for bio.That gives it up to 21 points! |
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January 15, 2012 |
Quoting Callan Lord of Fire
Well I'm not quite sure how this works, but after taking a good look at both the competitor's mocs, I found yours more opponent's a little appealing. While you have some great smooth characters, the fact that they all look the same didn't quite do it for me. Your opponents are very Bioniclish, but look pretty nice like yours did but also looked very distinct! Sorry, but good luck with your other judges!
Thanks. The concept for the voting wasn't so much the "vote for the one that's better" as much as give a score out of twenty-five. We agreed that there would be ten points for creativity, ten points for build, and five points for bio. Thanks! |
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January 15, 2012 |
Well I'm not quite sure how this works, but after taking a good look at both the competitor's mocs, I found yours more opponent's a little appealing. While you have some great smooth characters, the fact that they all look the same didn't quite do it for me. Your opponents are very Bioniclish, but look pretty nice like yours did but also looked very distinct! Sorry, but good luck with your other judges! |
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January 12, 2012 |
Fantastic work here! The lges and arms of all three are simple, but the body design is amazing! I first don't even know what piece you use on the chest, until I read it in the comments (Piraka head). They all look very sleek and agile, and the guns just match them so well! I wish you much luck in the MoC-Off, because the are just excellent! |
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Hmm. Maybe they have cores that are hidden under their armor? |
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January 7, 2012 |
You cut Lego parts?! I'm a purist, to that saddens me. However, they do look amazing. Great slim design. |
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January 7, 2012 |
Quoting Steve The Squid (back from vacation!)
I really like the slim look you have going, and using the piraka heads smooshed up on the torso looks amazing, such a great idea! The matching head also looks nice! I give 3/5 for the bio, 9.5/10 for creativity (those piraka heads cinched it!), and 8.5/10 for build, for a total of 21/25 overall! Good luck!
Thank you very much! |
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January 7, 2012 |
I really like the slim look you have going, and using the piraka heads smooshed up on the torso looks amazing, such a great idea! The matching head also looks nice! I give 3/5 for the bio, 9.5/10 for creativity (those piraka heads cinched it!), and 8.5/10 for build, for a total of 21/25 overall! Good luck! |
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January 7, 2012 |
Really awesome team. I really like how you put the piraka head on the body (even though it was cut off) and they all have cool unique weapons. Good job on all 3 ! |
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You can't win, man. They're TOO AWESOME to be Hero Factory. (The piraka's heads in torso and the 'speaker' thing... <3) |
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January 7, 2012 |
Love the rubber Skakdi mask on the gold guy there. :) |
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January 7, 2012 |
AWESOME mocs. Reminds me of ratchet gladiator (or ratchet deadlock in america) Ratchet has a bronze colour suit and two robots awesome 5/5 :) |
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January 7, 2012 |
These are pretty nice, but the fact that the two without the gold have no armour on their shins looks really bad. |
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January 7, 2012 |
Great i like every one's torso design. I am afraid :P |
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January 6, 2012 |
Quoting Chronos Omega
Oh wow, these are neat. The Piraka heads are brilliant! I think that Mudslide's have better variety, but yours have better design. His use minimal HF parts, while yours uses... none? I'm not sure if there are any bone or armor pieces. But anyway, for all I know these could be a Toa commando squad- I think they at least need Hero Cores to mark them as HF characters.
Thanks! And there are only balljoints from HF. I didn't have any old, bionicle ones. Other than that, there are none. I also tried to make them all very similar, just with slight variations like the HF 1.0 and 2.0. I also thought that the Hero Cores didn't look good on the body design. (that and I just couldn't figure out how to put it on :). Thank you very much and I appreciate the help. |
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January 6, 2012 |
Oh wow, these are neat. The Piraka heads are brilliant! I think that Mudslide's have better variety, but yours have better design. His use minimal HF parts, while yours uses... none? I'm not sure if there are any bone or armor pieces. But anyway, for all I know these could be a Toa commando squad- I think they at least need Hero Cores to mark them as HF characters. |
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January 6, 2012 |
Very Awesomesause! |
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January 6, 2012 |
Very Awesomesause! |
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January 6, 2012 |
HOLY DONUTS! Do these guys have ANY HF parts at all?! This is amazing! And the Piraka head use is BRILLIANT! |
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January 6, 2012 |
HOLY DONUTS! Do these guys have ANY HF parts at all?! This is amazing! And the Piraka head use is BRILLIANT! |
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January 6, 2012 |
really cool i love the piraka head idea |
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January 6, 2012 |
Cool the green guy is my favourite but I bet some people will say the his waist is thin. Still is a good job especially the rest |
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January 6, 2012 |
Quoting ~~ >=) Christian J (=< ~~ '
Nice! Good luck on the contest.
Thanks! |
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January 6, 2012 |
Nice! Good luck on the contest. |
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