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SMT Entry Round: Jordan 2444
...the not-so average teenager.
About this creation
Name: Jordan
Gender: Male
Species: Human
Occupation: Going to school, "Chick Magnet"
Element: Fire
Weapons: Wrist Blades, Fire Sword
Clothes: Red T-shirt and black sweatpants
Story: None

Enjoy the Moc!









Here he is!



Jordan: Hey!













Chillin'



Runnin'



Studyin'



And who could forget the Wristblades?







...Or the Fire Sword?







Comparison with Solace



Brofist!



Jordan: Bye!



Thanks for viewing!

Good luck to everyone on the contest!

Link to the contest: HERE

Creator's Notes: I was originally going to build a full-sized version, but an idea came to me while building. I accidentally put the helmet on the wrong way and realized that it looked like a human with hair. I already had the body design from a human moc that I built a while ago and I speed-built the legs and arms (which are very simple). I ended up with the Moc you see before you now. I hope you liked it!

Please rate and/or comment!



Comments

 I like it 
  January 27, 2012
My rating: 6/10 for creativity and 7/10 for build. Score: 13/20.
 I like it 
  January 27, 2012
Nice Jordan! Time for the judging. The build lands you a 6/10, while the creativity hands you a 7/10! The final score is 13/20! Good luck to you!
 I made it 
  January 26, 2012
Quoting Steve The Squid Correct me if I'm wrong, but I believe Jordan's homeschooled :)
... Wow... That would've been helpful to know... :)
  January 26, 2012
Correct me if I'm wrong, but I believe Jordan's homeschooled :)
 I like it 
  January 26, 2012
Great idea, I think you did well with it, the torso looks good. I also like the idea of 'pants'! 8/10 for creativity (a very original idea), but 6/10 for build, because it's pretty simple. (Sorry, but maybe your human idea hurt that. :/
 I like it 
  January 25, 2012
Nice entry. I will give it 7/10 for creativity and 7/10 for build. Total score = 14/20.
 I like it 
  January 25, 2012
Good entry. Creative, I don't think anyone else has ever used the mask like that before (aside from me and my tinkerings). The none custom arms are a bit of a damper but they look kinda good like that. Creativity: 7/10. Build: 6/10. Total: 13/20.
 I like it 
  January 18, 2012
It does look humanish... Cool!
Dragonmaster 1027
 I like it 
The Crazy Forgoten One
  January 16, 2012
Kewl Jordan man!
 I like it 
  January 16, 2012
i dont know why but something just isint appealing in this moc its is still a great idea i love creative new ideas but i don't know why nothing personal but however i like the legs they are a very good touch to make it more humanly i suggest next time give him some tan pieces. i really hope i have not offended you in any way
 I like it 
  January 16, 2012
Great torso design!
 I made it 
  January 15, 2012
Quoting Steve The Squid Whoa, that's a nice creative take! I don't think I've ever seen this 'teen bionicle' style, but it's interesting to say the least! I think it's funny how it came as the result of putting the mask on backwards, because at first I thought it was a fail on your part! :D
Haha, thanks!
 I like it 
  January 15, 2012
Whoa, that's a nice creative take! I don't think I've ever seen this 'teen bionicle' style, but it's interesting to say the least! I think it's funny how it came as the result of putting the mask on backwards, because at first I thought it was a fail on your part! :D
 I like it 
  January 15, 2012
Interesting. I like the torso and 'pants'. :D It looks nice, but I'm not sure I like the whole 'human Bionicles' thing.
 
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