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An Increasing Threat 08: Victory Short Lived
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Stewjon. Roughly two weeks after the events in The Legend of Harash Soru 13.

The Jedi Ordr and their allies gather on a remote beach to pay their respects to their lost leader.

Shaak Ti: "Harash Soru. He was something to all of us. A teacher, a leader, a friend. A husband. He was everything it means to be a Jedi and then some. Always able to cheer you up, make you laugh."



Shaak Ti: "For his whole life Hara has known war. The Stark Hyperspace war as a Padawan, the Clone Wars as a Jedi. And now our war, as Grand Master. Perhaps it is only fair that finally, he knows peace."



Shaak Ti: "But I for one cannot imagine anyone of us not feeling the pull of grief as we bid fairwell to our Master, our friend."



Shaak Ti: "We will never forget you, Harash SOru. You live in the Force and the Force lives in us.
We will never forget you."



In the bushes Darth Levid smiled. The funeral was almost touching. He was glad that his actions had caused so much pain. But that was only the start. Levid smiled once more and then a single word left his lips.

Darth Levid: "Attack."



From the trees and bushes suddenly their came a host of Sith Lords. Shaak Ti watched in horror as they began to attack the startled Jedi.

Shaak Ti: "Player, Deff! Get yourselves out of here!"
Commander Player: "We can fight!"
Shaak Ti: "No! Run Player, live!"



Shaak Ti watched as the Clones slowly and begrudgingly hurried away, she was pleased to see the Sith making no move to follow. She closed her eyes, took a moment to centre herself and then jumped into the fray.



The battle surged on and on but be it the grief of the Jedi or the Resolve of the Sith it soon became clear that the Jedi would lose.
One by one members of the Order fell to the floor, clutching their wounds.
No one was killed however.
Which meant Nihilus wanted them alive.



Slowly the Jedi were rounded up and forced to the floor.

Darth Sion: "On your knees, all of you!"
TAO: "Anyone moves and we run you through!"
Darth Nihilus: "Now now my companions. We need not be so, forceful. I merely wish to talk to our friends and make them an offer they cannot refuse."



Darth Nihilus: "I look at you and I can feel your pain, your anger! It gives you all the strength you need to escape us. I ask who will use it first? Who will be the bravest? The one who rises up and avenges your Master?"



Nayam Burl: "Don't listen to him! Its a trap to get us to turn to the Dark Side!"



Nihilus tilted his head to one side and regarded Nay.

Darth Nihilus: "Nayam Burl. Wife of Harash Soru. Bring her Sion."



Sion grabbed Nay and dragged her before Nihilus. Slowly Nihilus reached out and stroked her face.

Darth Nihilus: "So beautiful. Tell me Nayam Burl. Do you fear me? Do you fear what I am?"
Nayam Burl: "I only fear becoming you Nihilus. But I would never betray Hara like that!"
Darth Nihilus: "Haha! But Hara is dead! You need not fear upsetting him. I killed him myself, heard his dying screams as I drained the life from him."

Nayam spat in Nihilus' face.

Nayam Burl: "You are scum!"



Nihilus slapped Nay in the face, knocking her to the floor.

Darth Nihilus: "I am the Dark Lord Darth Nihilus! I have conquered death twice, destroyed entire planets! You and your pathetic bunch of Jedi are not worthy of my power!"

Nihilus spun on the Jedi.

Darth Nihilus: "Let this be a lesson to all who dare to cross me!"

The Sith Lord activated his lightsaber. For a moment he held it up high then he swung it down toward's Nayam's neck.

Darth Nihlus: "I am Darth Nihilus! And I do not tolerate..."



However, just before the blade made contact it shrank back into its hilt.



A lone figure appeared on the beach and spoke a single word.

Figure: "Failures?"



Comments

 I like it 
  January 18, 2012
OMG!I am guessing who the figure is,I'm probably right he or she is who I think it is.I wont say it though,because I might spoil any viewers suspense and excitement.Brilliant episode!
 I made it 
  January 17, 2012
Quoting The Essence Of Randomness . Could I possibly be in it at all. Iadsgb, a clone. I don't mind if it's not a huge part but I can't die.
Mm, I don't really have the pieces to do a clone. I'd be happy to do a Jedi or Sith though
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  January 17, 2012
Could I possibly be in it at all. Iadsgb, a clone. I don't mind if it's not a huge part but I can't die.
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  January 17, 2012
Quoting jedi master skyner please can I evenge soru I'd like a big part in this
I've already got the story Skyner. You will be included don't worry, but the story is my main focus and I have to include everyone
 I like it 
  January 17, 2012
please can I evenge soru I'd like a big part in this
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  January 17, 2012
could I prehaps duel TAO but get knoked out mabe. just a suggestion
 I like it 
  January 17, 2012
could I prehaps duel TAO but get knoked out mabe. just a suggestion
 I like it 
  January 17, 2012
could I prehaps duel TAO but get knoked out mabe. just a suggestion
 I like it 
  January 17, 2012
oh boy i love your episodes u are the master at comics
 I made it 
  January 17, 2012
Thanks everyone, I'm glad you like it :D The next one will be along soon. Can't leave you hanging for to long :P
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  January 17, 2012
Such a powerful ending! Done so well! That really does have to be one of the coolest twists yet! Amazing work :D Really looking forward to more :)
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  January 17, 2012
This is one of the most impressive series, I know! I hope that Hara comes back!! Who else would be able to stop Nihlius?
Harry 863
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wolfgang .
  January 16, 2012
nooooo nilius never fails nooooo :( anywho great job so far keep it up
 I like it 
  January 16, 2012
Harash!
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  January 16, 2012
Quoting LB. 12 I'm now 99 % sure it's Hara. It looks just like Hara from every part. Brown cape, biege arm, flesh color hand well you get the point.
..... you'll have to wait and see :P
 I made it 
  January 16, 2012
Quoting Senator Lott Dod well done, full of suspense. I can't wait to see who that figure is. Hmm this reminds me a bit of harry potter(the plot is similar). DId i run with the clones?
Yeah I guess it is, I hadn't noticed that haha. Yes you did :)
  January 16, 2012
I'm now 99 % sure it's Hara. It looks just like Hara from every part. Brown cape, biege arm, flesh color hand well you get the point.
 I like it 
  January 16, 2012
well done, full of suspense. I can't wait to see who that figure is. Hmm this reminds me a bit of harry potter(the plot is similar). DId i run with the clones?
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  January 16, 2012
yay that lloks likes hara or vos to the rescue
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  January 16, 2012
could I prehaps duel TAO but get knoked out mabe. just a suggestion
 I made it 
  January 16, 2012
Quoting Medieval Guy The story is interesting, but the actual build is essentially several figures on a barely landscaped base. Give the scene some love and this has the makings to be a fantastic MOC!
Mm I understand. But in fairness it is just a beach so not a lot to go on. My other stories usually have much more interesting backdrops :) Plus my main focus is really on the figures and the actual story :)
  January 16, 2012
The story is interesting, but the actual build is essentially several figures on a barely landscaped base. Give the scene some love and this has the makings to be a fantastic MOC!
  January 16, 2012
Oh ok. I tought they were some random clones but they where Hara's clones.
 I made it 
  January 16, 2012
Quoting LB. 12 Amazing episode. PLZ make the next one fast :). I want to know who is that guy. I want to believe it's Hara but I'm not sure about it. And then the part I don't like there is too many clones from order 66 who remained as good and clones don't run, especially clone commanders.
Mm, I did the clones remaining good as they were Hara's clones and it signifies his influence. And don't forget the clones may not necessarily be running...
 I like it 
  January 16, 2012
Amazing episode. PLZ make the next one fast :). I want to know who is that guy. I want to believe it's Hara but I'm not sure about it. And then the part I don't like there is too many clones from order 66 who remained as good and clones don't run, especially clone commanders.
 I like it 
  January 16, 2012
Who is that person, interrupting Nihilus? I want to now it! Excellent episode! Brilliant story idea!
 I like it 
  January 16, 2012
dont leave us hanging like that!(: cant wait for the next one(:
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  January 16, 2012
A great cliffhanger! This leaves me wanting more! - KP
 
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