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Phoenix Heart Jordan (SMT Entry Round)
Here is my entry to the Self MocOff Tournament I hope everyone likes it
About this creation
"I... I have changed from a legendary Toa of fire to Jordan The Phoenix Heart Warrior and I...I must live up to the name from now on i will be the greatest hero Raxus Magna has ever known"

Name: Jordan
Species: Toa
Occupation: Toa Raxus Leader
Alignment: Toa Raxus
Element: Fire
Story: Jordan was the leader of the Toa Team of Raxus Magna but after doing the bravest of deeds killing Makuta Sandrix alone he was rewarded Raxus Magna's highest honor given the Raxus Heart Spirit a rare power that grants its user a power of a great power he was given the power of the Phoenix and given the Silver Raxus Wings and the silver Raxus Phoenix Sword. Jordan has learnt to be one with his powers he has learnt how to fly quite swiftly and can use 2 times more fire than before. Jordan is a very gifted Toa as a matoran he trained hard and was very good at fighting. Jordan does not trust most people he is very skeptical of ones personality and is very confident in the decisions he makes and if he knows someone well enough he is very welcoming.

Here are the pics guys!


Front view of Jordan


Side view of Jordan


Back view of Jordan


This is my favorite pic its the epic as always ACTION POSE!


Jordan: Bye guys

Here is the link to the Self MocOff Tournament HERE

Creators Comments: Well firstly the body idea is something i wanted to do for AGES and i love it it just looks really good it armors him up well. The wings are roughly similar to Leaith's winds just a bit more simple and i love the lover legs it really looks good with the bionicle stars armor which i love SO MUCH i love the gear in the middle its a nice touch. The sword is really well done im lucky i have the bird symbol on the sword it makes it look very cool. All in all i think it turned out pretty good for a half simple half custom moc.

Alright so see you next adventure
PLUS: Callan and Cossy can you put this moc in your next moc reviews if you don't mind (:



Comments

 I made it 
  February 4, 2012
Quoting Kityraz Xenathos I actually like this version better then the V2.
really its pretty bad v2 has very cool features
 I like it 
  January 29, 2012
I actually like this version better then the V2.
  January 27, 2012
My rating: 7/10 for creativity and 5/10 for build. Score: 12/20.
 I like it 
  January 27, 2012
Looking good here! By the judging, you've got yourself a 6/10 for the build and a 6/10 for the creativity! A 12/20 for you! Good luck to you!
  January 26, 2012
That torso is too good, the wings fit well, and the lower legs rock! Neat how you used furno 3.0 :D I think the arms do fit, but are a bit lazy... And maybe he could use some silver. So, 7/10 build, and 6/10 creativity.
 I like it 
  January 25, 2012
Good entry! The wings are nice. I will give it 5/10 for build and 7/10 for creativity. Total score = 12/20.
 I like it 
  January 25, 2012
A good entry. I like the designs you threw in there. The HF arms though, don't really flow with the rest of the MOC, I know you tried to fix that. Creativity: 7/10. Build: 6/10. Total: 13/20.
 I like it 
  January 21, 2012
An excellent take on Jordan :D Love how cute you've made him :D Good luck man :)
Leaith Flex
 I like it 
S.E.D .
  January 19, 2012
Great job man! I can't seem to remember which Knights Kingdom set that sword came with. Could you tell me?
Leaith Flex
 I like it 
S.E.D .
  January 19, 2012
Great job man! I can't seem to remember which Knights Kingdom set that sword came with. Could you tell me?
 I made it 
  January 19, 2012
Quoting S.E.D . Great job man! I can't seem to remember which Knights Kingdom set that sword came with. Could you tell me?
the second jayco
 I like it 
  January 17, 2012
Very Coolness! Love the body design!
 I made it 
  January 17, 2012
Quoting Steve The Squid Awesome torso, although I'd like to see more cutomness, the HF arms look a bit lazy. Though those lower legs came out great! Perhaps a third color would have helped, probably silver or metal.
trust me i didn't want to use the arms i tried and tried for a custom designs they all turned out messy
 I made it 
  January 17, 2012
Quoting Chronos Omega Cool! The torso is great and the lower legs are simple, but look pretty nice. Also, I quote from your bio:
Quoting the bio ... a rare power that grants its user a power of a great power he was given the power ...
Power much? :P
he was given the power of the phoenix his fire powers where 2 times more powerful
 I like it 
  January 17, 2012
Cool! The torso is great and the lower legs are simple, but look pretty nice. Also, I quote from your bio:
Quoting the bio ... a rare power that grants its user a power of a great power he was given the power ...
Power much? :P
 I like it 
  January 17, 2012
Awesome torso, although I'd like to see more cutomness, the HF arms look a bit lazy. Though those lower legs came out great! Perhaps a third color would have helped, probably silver or metal.
 I like it 
  January 17, 2012
WOW!!! Cool body.
 I made it 
  January 17, 2012
Quoting Imperium . Nice bro!, Nice work, although I do think it would've looked nicer if you used Surge 2.0's head (the green one).
it was on my mind but it didn't balance out well
 I like it 
  January 17, 2012
Nice bro!, Nice work, although I do think it would've looked nicer if you used Surge 2.0's head (the green one).
 
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