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SMT Entry Round- Jordan 2444: Mahri Form
Well this is my entry to the Self-MOCoff Tournament.
About this creation
BIO:

NAME: Jordan


GENDER: Male


SPECIES: Ta-Matoran


ALIGNMENT: Toa, General of Mata Nui's army (formerly)


OCCUPATION: Toa, Warrior, Chick Magnet :P


TITLES: 2444, Jordan, Jordanian Hot-Head, General, Flame


ELEMENT: Fire


MASK POWER: Mask of Agility, Speed and Water-breathing


WEAPONS: Wrist Blades,


Cordak blaster


And Lava Axe


MOC STATUS: Dissembled


STORY: Jordan was once a Ta-Matoran from living on the island of Mata Nui.


He always dreamed of becoming a Toa and learning to kick Makuta butt.


Then one day, he found a Toa stone deep inside a volcanic crater,


and it turned him into a Toa.


Thinking the Matoran, not used to seeing Toa around those parts, would mistake him for a monster so he fled to the far side of the island, seeking the help of a Turaga who lived there. The Turaga trained him, and cared for him. Then, when he was skilled with his hands, the Turaga took him to the Toa fortress on Mata Nui. The Toa there were skeptical of his skills but they trusted the Turaga so they put him into more training.
Quickly seeing his skills were more than they had first perceived, the head Toa put him into a special training course for exceptionally gifted Toa. There he learned to fight in the art of wrist blades. He was trained to fight against all odds and to conquer all circumstances, using his wits and strength alone.
"You have been trained alone, so you can survive alone." Said the Turaga who first trained him on Mata Nui. "You don't need a team of six, you are on your own." He then died. Jordan never knew his real name.

He joined the Toa Mahri in a misson(hence is form).


Jordan: Hhmmm, I wonder where Norrak is. He normialy shows up 'round about now.


FWOOSH!


Norrak: Hey Jordan!
Jordan: 'Sup!


N: Well here ya go Legofreak (and Instant Noodles, Vored, Super Pikmin and Steve), this is My entry!
J: ......


J: Say, where'd that hottie go?

??????: You mean me?


J: How you donin'?


*Ailani steps*
(sarcasticly) A: Just fine


PUNCH!


A: Nobody. Talks. To. Me. Like. That!


N: Don't ya think you punched him to hard?
A: No
N: How am I suposed to Brofist him NOW?


(sarcasticly)A: Ta-DA!
N: Works for me!


BROFIST

54, 391st beam commentary:
The reason I made him in Mahri form was because of his feet; they look like flipers.
SMT

P.S. No offence Jordan. Please forgive me =D



Comments

 I made it 
  January 27, 2012
Thanks guys! =)
  January 27, 2012
My rating: 6/10 for creativity and 6/10 for build. Score: 12/20.
 I like it 
  January 27, 2012
Nice aqua Jordan! Judging. Build is cool! A 7/10. Creativity is really great! Fire underwater! Who would've thought of that?! 7/10 for that. You've got a 14/20! Good luck to you!
  January 26, 2012
I think you're too quick to use bricks on bionicles :/ I love the mahri form, it's well executed. Creativity 7/10, build 8/10.
 I like it 
  January 25, 2012
Good entry! I like the body, weapons and the colors. I will give you 7/10 for build and 8/10 for creativity. Total = 15/20.
 I like it 
  January 25, 2012
Great entry. I love the Mahri idea, and you executed it well. Well done overall, but the square rear-end doesn't really work in my opinion. Creativity: 9/10. Build: 7/10. Total: 16/20.
 I made it 
  January 22, 2012
Quoting Chronos Omega Great, very creative! I guess I see the Mahri inspiration, with the tubes and flippers. Maybe add an air tank on his back?
The silver Metru armour is the air tank. I guess I forgot to say that. =)
 I like it 
  January 22, 2012
Brick-butt!
  January 22, 2012
Great, very creative! I guess I see the Mahri inspiration, with the tubes and flippers. Maybe add an air tank on his back?
 I like it 
  January 22, 2012
lol i really like this one!
 I like it 
  January 22, 2012
cool dude!
 I made it 
  January 22, 2012
Thanks guys! =)
  January 22, 2012
Funny.Doesn't look that under water but still a good concept
 I like it 
  January 22, 2012
cool i like the mask idea
 
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