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The Self-MocOff Tournament Entry Round: Jordan, The Magma Snake
This is my entry for The Self-MocOff Tournament's entry round. For this round I did my own version of Jordan 2444. Also, I would like to apologize for my long absence, with the holidays and school, I was very busy, I just finished exams this past week. But with this creation, I'm going to be uploading again. A warning though, before I can show you the current versions of my MOCs, I have to show the older versions, in order to get the entirety of the MOC across, and some previous version are quite lacking, so be prepared. Anyway, on to the MOC! UPDATE: this is also my entry to the non humanoid contest.
About this creation
Name: Jordan
Other Titles: 2444 and The Magma Snake
BIO: (This is the bio for this creation, not the original) Jordan was originally a Toa during the 1st era, however, during the Last Great Toa War (Happened during the Toa Neo saga, which will be explained later) he came upon a power. While fighting in the Battle of Vakama (Vakama is the name of the volcano they were fighting on) the ground crumbled beneath him and he fell into the lower part of the volcano. There he came across the King of the Magma Snakes, who was wounded severely, and learned of the Magma Snakes plight. Wanting to help the king, Jordan fused with him in order to heal his wounds. Using the king's power, he returned to the Dimension of Neo Nui, and the Magma Snake home in the Great Volcano, where he became their king.
Now, in the 3rd era, with the door to the Dimension of Neo Nui beginning to open, it is possible that Jordan will lead the Magma Snakes into battle in order to aid the Toa Era, then again he might not; we will just have to see...
Weapons: Flame tail, sword
MOC Status: Assembled










































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Comments

  February 22, 2012
You know, I like the build, it's rare to see a naga bionicle, but concidering it's a non-humanoid contest,naga's are still somewhat humanoid for the human-like upper torso. so I would rate you a 6/10 overall.
  January 27, 2012
My rating: 9/10 for creativity and 7/10 for build. Score: 16/20.
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  January 27, 2012
Quoting Overlord Galaxus (Instant Noodles) Nice Jordan here! Judging: Build is cool, could use some work here and there. The things at the waist might be a little too wide, unless you're going for the cobra like neck. I'm taking my chances. A 6/10. Creativity is well done! A Magna Snake! that's cool. A 8/10 for that! A total of 14/20! Good luck to you!
Thanks and yeah, I was going for the Cobra head look.
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  January 27, 2012
Nice Jordan here! Judging: Build is cool, could use some work here and there. The things at the waist might be a little too wide, unless you're going for the cobra like neck. I'm taking my chances. A 6/10. Creativity is well done! A Magna Snake! that's cool. A 8/10 for that! A total of 14/20! Good luck to you!
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  January 26, 2012
love it this is amazing only tow things though one is the pic of him standing straight up being held there or is that actually the tail and yea i agree the sword could use alil more but beautiful over all
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  January 26, 2012
The end of that tail is great, as is the rest of the build! Plus it's a very creative take on Jordan! I'm not entirely sure on the black, but.... I can't think of what would be better. The colors just look a bit.... monochromatic to me. perhaps silver could've helped? I find that often a red moc goes out of control and ends up too.... red. :/ Anyway! 7/10 for creativity, and 8/10 for the build!
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  January 25, 2012
Nice entry! It looks really cool. I will give it 8/10 for build, and 8/10 for creativity. Total score = 16/20.
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  January 25, 2012
Great entry. Nice idea and the build is nice. I like his flame tail, his sword though, could use more. Creativity: 9/10. Build: 7/10. Total: 16/20.
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  January 24, 2012
Great entry He quite not humanoid and very well built my only problem is that the body looks a bit messy overall 4.5/5
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  January 23, 2012
Aaagh! So many Jordans! O_o But this one is very original and imaginative, I like the end if the tail, good job! :D
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  January 23, 2012
cool, I like how you turned jordan into a snake. Nice tail and torso design as well. Great work!!
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  January 23, 2012
Very nice tail! I see a new design for Solace's tail coming on... :)
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  January 23, 2012
woah thats awesome!
 
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