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Talonmagic, Knight of Valki Nui
Alright, so one day I looked at my self moc and decided that I needed to revamp him BADLY. So, being the mocist that I am, I did. I thought I'd post him before the first real round of the SMT. I want this to be my most popular, so help in doing so is appreciated. Anyway, here is the new and improved Talonmagic!!
About this creation
Oh, here is his bio
Name: Talonmagic
Gender: Male
Species: Le-matoran
Element: Air
Title(s): Talonmagic, Talon, brother, airhead, leader
Mask: Kanohi Ulahi, mask of mind manipulation: allows user to control, read, or place thoughts in another mind
Weapon(s): Laser shooting battle axe, twin daggers
Story: As a matoran, Talonmagic adored two things: knowledge and Toa!! Every day he was either reading a book or watching Toa spare. He dreamed of one day becoming a Toa, and ridding aqua magna of the makuta!! Because of this, Talon was often thought of as a silly bookworm daydreamer, and was often made fun of.

One day while Talon was reading a book on an irrelevant topic, he heard screams of terror outside his hut. When he went outside to see what the problem was, he saw many buildings ablaze and, in the middle of it all, a makuta of fire. His village was under attack!! Most of the matoran sentries were already on the ground dead, and since Talon didnít see a toa in site, he decided to try and defeat this immense monster with what knowledge he had. He frantically looked around for weapons, and then he saw a matoran- sized battle axe, and a lazer gun. He strapped the two together with vines, and made his first weapon ever. He thought back to a book he had once read on battle. He reviewed the strategies and terms in his mind, and then fired a lazer bolt at the makuta. The makuta barely flinched on impact, and then looked in Talonís direction. He began whooping with laughter, but then started screaming in agony when he found a matoran axe blade in his face. He then looked at Talonmagic with an evil glare, for half of his face was taken off by the axe. Then, he swung his giant club at Talon, who in turn jumped away nimbly. The two brawled for awhile, until Talon rose victorious over the mutilated makuta, who now lay on the ground in several pieces. Talon was quite beat up, and since most of his village was pillaged, he started to limp to the next village.

When he arrived at the next village, he collapsed on the medicís door unconscious, not able to go on. When the medic found him lying nearly dead in his doorway, he immediately started patching him up, and took him to the elders of the village. When Talon finally regained consciousness, he found himself surrounded by old turaga, who were conversing with each. When they saw that he was awake, they asked him where he had come from, and how he had gotten so beat up. He told them about the battle with the makuta, and how he had beaten the gigantic beast. They were appalled that a little scrawny bookworm matoran had taken down a giant makuta. Clearly he was gifted with some unnatural power, so they gave him the one toa stone that they had, which then turned the little matoran into a giant and powerful toa!!

Talonmagic was then enlisted to the toa order. After news of his battle reached the counsel, he was immediately accepted into the order. As weapons, he was given a laser shooting battle axe (upon request),and twin daggers. With these weapons and his newly found air powers, he quickly flew through the ranks of the toa, so much to where the point he became the leader of many toa teams.

After the formation of spherus magna, Talonmagic began ridding the planet of the remnants of the makuta, until the crisis of Valki nui. He was then enlisted to become the leader of the Toa valki, and elite team of toa. He now leads them with wisdom and courage against the newly formed brotherhood of makuta.


feet and lower legs. Although these lower legs look like the original, they are CUSTOM this time, and alot more posable


Upper legs. Notin' changed


Torso. Not much has changed here either, other than I added a few things at the top to fill up space, and the hose to make him look cool.


Head. WITH......


A custom face!!! Honestly, this was the most irritating part of the MOC, since I had to make it format a HF face. Anyway, it looks good, right?


Full body shot. His posture is SOOO much better thanks to those new legs.


Hoora!!


Back shot. Not my best, but no my worse either


closer look at back of torso.


Closer look at back of legs. Sorry I couldn't cover up the back of the legs better :/


Upper arm. Not changed, except I had to add a different joint to fit the new forearms


New Forearms!! They're more poseable, but I thought the other ones looked better. I had to use the balljoints in the original ones for the lower legs, dang this part shortage


better look at new forearms


Talonmagic, Knight of Valki Nui


His mighty axe!


His apprentice,Mongle


Pose with axe


Twin Dagger Time!!


Hiyah!!


Epic dagger pose, as well as showing of poseability


Close up shot, as well as my new buddy icon.


His team, so far.....


Talon and Batix


Talon and Mongle


see ya everyone!




And there's my new self moc!! Again, I want this version to be my most popular, so any help is appreciated. The mystery MOC on Mongle will be posted soon, as well as my next entry into the SMT, as soon as the next round starts. C&C is ALWAYS appreciated, so rate and comment away everybody! Thanks! Till next Time!!





Comments

 I like it 
  January 13, 2013
Man,this is amazing.Its so custom that I can't figure out how to rebuild this just by staring at the pics.....
 I like it 
  December 2, 2012
Very cool. Where is the helmet from?
 I like it 
  July 2, 2012
NICE! The whole thing is sweet, my only issue is those green hinges...but otherwise, its all pretty awesome! One question, how do you connect those HF shins onto your MOC? I recently aquired some, and i would like to put them on a MOC...how'd you do it? ~Daniel~
 I like it 
  May 25, 2012
Epic! :D
 I like it 
  May 23, 2012
wow! awesome self moc the only thing i dont like is the normal green hinges on his under arms...again nice build
 I like it 
  May 19, 2012
Just one thing real fast, heroes. Not heros. I'm a grammar spaz.
 I made it 
  May 19, 2012
Quoting Clever Crowe Wanted to hit you back and tell you I'm Epic-Folder-ing this MOC. Simply great work, and will be inspirational for others, especially for the torso tech. I have really got to give that mask a try on my own. too sweet! Cheers!
Thank you!!
  May 18, 2012
Wanted to hit you back and tell you I'm Epic-Folder-ing this MOC. Simply great work, and will be inspirational for others, especially for the torso tech. I have really got to give that mask a try on my own. too sweet! Cheers!
 I made it 
  May 17, 2012
Quoting Mal L I BUILT TALON!!!!! I was just wondering if I could have your permission to post him.
Absolutely! and thank u, I'm flattered u made him!
 I like it 
  May 17, 2012
I BUILT TALON!!!!! I was just wondering if I could have your permission to post him.
 I like it 
  May 15, 2012
Does anyone know how to get photos on their home page? Anyways, AMAZING MOC!!!!! Much better than the last one! Once I manage to make custom feet and custom lower legs for Lenox, he will be 100% custom!
 I like it 
  April 26, 2012
:)
 I made it 
  April 25, 2012
Quoting Terilis the Phantom Master Thank you Talon. I appreciate that. A lot.
Anytime!! what are friends for right?
 I like it 
  April 24, 2012
Thank you Talon. I appreciate that. A lot.
 I made it 
  April 24, 2012
Quoting saunax toa of steam Awesome! i like it all except for those mata green lego tiles on the upper arm, they just look a little out of place to me. anyway, great moc. mind checking out some of my stuff??
Thanks you, and sure thing!!
 I like it 
  April 24, 2012
Awesome! i like it all except for those mata green lego tiles on the upper arm, they just look a little out of place to me. anyway, great moc. mind checking out some of my stuff??
 I made it 
  April 24, 2012
Quoting Terilis the Phantom Master Hi Talon! You have a really great Moc here. I can relate to the parts shortage. If you need specifics, you can go to Bricklink (if you don't know that already...). Oh! Yeah, it's me yoshi119252 from LEGO.com. I got a Moc pages account because frankly, there are a lot more creations like yours here than there, and I wanted to tell people how awesome they are at this.
Yoshi!! I can't beleive it's you!! Great that you're moving here from lego universe!! I can give you a little more advice an your MOCs here than I can on lego universe, so that will be great!! I've joined a group recently that is headed by cabraghboy and a few other lego universe users, so I'll be sure to invite you!! keep on MOCing!!
  April 24, 2012
Hi Talon! You have a really great Moc here. I can relate to the parts shortage. If you need specifics, you can go to Bricklink (if you don't know that already...). Oh! Yeah, it's me yoshi119252 from LEGO.com. I got a Moc pages account because frankly, there are a lot more creations like yours here than there, and I wanted to tell people how awesome they are at this.
 I made it 
  March 21, 2012
Quoting peter lee Really good job, much better than the first one which is already really good, continue mocing!!
Thanks dude!!
 I like it 
  March 21, 2012
Really good job, much better than the first one which is already really good, continue mocing!!
 I made it 
  March 19, 2012
Quoting Ezekiel the created very cool, I love all the custom
Thanks dude!!
 I like it 
  March 19, 2012
very cool, I love all the custom
 I made it 
  March 16, 2012
Quoting Terminax Creator of Shadow armor This is an excellent MOC. The whole design of this is... fantastic!!! I do hope you try to make a custom body. ;D
Thanks! your self moc is pretty rad too!!
 I like it 
  March 15, 2012
This is an excellent MOC. The whole design of this is... fantastic!!! I do hope you try to make a custom body. ;D
 I made it 
  February 26, 2012
Quoting Clever Crowe Sweet work on the Custom face (still love that Sculpt for the Breez mask) made for a truly awesome MOC here. Great balance on the bulk the greeble added to the limbs, too. Nice work on your lore commentary as well! Cheers =)
Thanks!
 I like it 
  February 26, 2012
Sweet work on the Custom face (still love that Sculpt for the Breez mask) made for a truly awesome MOC here. Great balance on the bulk the greeble added to the limbs, too. Nice work on your lore commentary as well! Cheers =)
 I made it 
  February 25, 2012
Quoting Silenthunt Productions Great job, I find the upper legs are a bit too thick compared to the lower legs, or maybe it's the lower legs are too thin? Or maybe, just maybe, oh I don't know, they just look funny through the lens of a camera and the screen of a computer. I don't know :P. Anyways, great job overall, the leg thing is my only issue.
Thanks....Uh, I think
 I like it 
  February 22, 2012
nice! a lot better than the original, but i have to say that the head is amazing! keep up the good work!
 I like it 
  February 21, 2012
Great job, I find the upper legs are a bit too thick compared to the lower legs, or maybe it's the lower legs are too thin? Or maybe, just maybe, oh I don't know, they just look funny through the lens of a camera and the screen of a computer. I don't know :P. Anyways, great job overall, the leg thing is my only issue.
 I made it 
  February 17, 2012
Quoting Kyle Peckham Guess what? I made you a poster! http://www.mocpages.com/image_zoom.php?mocid=&id=/user_images/69966/1329180365m. Enjoy!
Yikes!! How did I not see this comment before? ANYWAY, nice work on the poster dude!! I absolutely love it! Thanks bro!!
 I made it 
  February 17, 2012
Quoting Callan Lord of Fire What a great self moc you have, Talon, good luck in this here tournament! I look forward to seeing both of our interpretations of each other duke it out for the next round! :D
Yeah, Me too!! I must say, your self MOC is extremely hard to replicate, which I guess goes to show how good it is
 I like it 
  February 17, 2012
What a great self moc you have, Talon, good luck in this here tournament! I look forward to seeing both of our interpretations of each other duke it out for the next round! :D
  February 13, 2012
 I like it 
  February 5, 2012
hey i posted your selfmoc for the SMT come check it out!
 I made it 
  January 31, 2012
Quoting Kyle Peckham Now that I look at him, my only complaint is that mata green/normal green plate. Maybe change it to a couple of lime plates and you'll be good to go! If you haven't seen it already, mind checking out my latest moc Tal? Thanks. - Kyle
yeah, I really dont like those mata green plates either. I really do need to find a replacement. Anywho, way ahead of yah, Already commented on it and everything. Thanks Pal!!
  January 31, 2012
Now that I look at him, my only complaint is that mata green/normal green plate. Maybe change it to a couple of lime plates and you'll be good to go! If you haven't seen it already, mind checking out my latest moc Tal? Thanks. - Kyle
 I made it 
  January 31, 2012
Quoting Lego Apprentice This is REALLY COOL!!! I never would thought of redesigning the head. Great Job!
Thanks dude!!
 I like it 
  January 30, 2012
This is REALLY COOL!!! I never would thought of redesigning the head. Great Job!
 I made it 
  January 29, 2012
Quoting Cody G Very impressive MOC!
Thanks Cody!!
 I made it 
  January 29, 2012
Quoting Cody G Very impressive MOC!
Thanks Cody!!
 I like it 
  January 28, 2012
Very impressive MOC!
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  January 28, 2012
Quoting WindEdge Gemini Woah! Really good! Aside from overused daggers, he looks great and I love the axe and head! Yeah making custom Glatorian style heads is really tough. Fav'd!
Thanks!
 I like it 
  January 28, 2012
Woah! Really good! Aside from overused daggers, he looks great and I love the axe and head! Yeah making custom Glatorian style heads is really tough. Fav'd!
 I made it 
  January 27, 2012
Quoting Legobob ~ Awesome. No other words for this MOC; it's big, it's custom, and it's BUFF. All good things. I'm with you on the mask thing, it looks great on him. ^^ Again, totally awesome :D Keep it up!
Thanks dude!! 2 away from most popular!!!!!
 I like it 
  January 27, 2012
Awesome. No other words for this MOC; it's big, it's custom, and it's BUFF. All good things. I'm with you on the mask thing, it looks great on him. ^^ Again, totally awesome :D Keep it up!
 I made it 
  January 25, 2012
Quoting Legofreak2444 ~ Very cool man. :D I like the new designs and the greebles are awesome. ;) I think you should turn those tanks on his forearms into cannons, they just look like cannons. :) Great job overall, I think adding a new mask would be nice, his current mask is, let's face it, kinda girly. :P No offense, it's just that it's from Natalie Breeze. He's coming along very nice. :) I also noticed recently that my Self-MOC needs a revamp desperately too. :P I'm looking into that.
Thanks!! Hmm... although a lot of you say that the mask is girly, I really don't think that it's girly. Well, maybe the mask does, but the bulky build of him kinda makes up for it. Your Self MOC needs a revamp!?! that's just insane. Your self moc was the main inspiration for mine. Thanks again!!
 I made it 
  January 25, 2012
Quoting Chains, Toa Of Prisoners Awesome, Love all the new updates and the head I really like. Keep up the good work 5/5 :)
Thanks dude!! Three away from being my most popular!!!
 I made it 
  January 25, 2012
Quoting Alexander Decloedt that looks like a very skilled-looking warrior toa to m e... nice build ... plzzz show me how you build this one!!!!!
Thanks!! I don't know how to show you!!
 I like it 
  January 25, 2012
Awesome, Love all the new updates and the head I really like. Keep up the good work 5/5 :)
 I like it 
  January 25, 2012
that looks like a very skilled-looking warrior toa to m e... nice build ... plzzz show me how you build this one!!!!!
 I like it 
  January 24, 2012
Very cool man. :D I like the new designs and the greebles are awesome. ;) I think you should turn those tanks on his forearms into cannons, they just look like cannons. :) Great job overall, I think adding a new mask would be nice, his current mask is, let's face it, kinda girly. :P No offense, it's just that it's from Natalie Breeze. He's coming along very nice. :) I also noticed recently that my Self-MOC needs a revamp desperately too. :P I'm looking into that.
 I made it 
  January 24, 2012
Quoting Ben V. AWESOME!
thanks!!
 I made it 
  January 24, 2012
Quoting Chronos Omega Dude, this is fantastic! All of him is great, especially the arms and legs.
Thanks!!
 I made it 
  January 24, 2012
Quoting Kyle Peckham Much better than V1! I might have to steal that hand attachment design, it might work better for me..... - KP
You can use it dude!! And thanks!!
 I like it 
  January 24, 2012
Dude, this is fantastic! All of him is great, especially the arms and legs.
 I like it 
  January 24, 2012
Much better than V1! I might have to steal that hand attachment design, it might work better for me..... - KP
 I made it 
  January 24, 2012
Quoting Norrak The Last Toa You're realy good! I'm going to fav you =)
Thanks!! Your self moc is pretty rad too! thanks for faving me!
 I like it 
  January 24, 2012
AWESOME!
 I like it 
  January 24, 2012
You're realy good! I'm going to fav you =)
 I made it 
  January 24, 2012
Quoting Darren .Y Woah this looks awesome .the greebled arms look great and I love the custom head. Nice job!
Thanks!
 I like it 
  January 24, 2012
Woah this looks awesome .the greebled arms look great and I love the custom head. Nice job!
 
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