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Lord of the Dragon Riders
Rise of the Mage Chapter 6
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It is nightfall in the Frosty Mountains, and the last rays of sunshine disappear behind the mountain peaks, illuminating them and highlighting their serrated contours. When the last wavering beams fade away, the night sky is transformed into a great celestial chasm from which hundreds of stars peer out. The heavens are cloudless and crystal clear and the endless expanses of space reveal their true form to a world uninhabited and gripped in coldness. Soon the starlight is displaced by a dazzling explosion of colors; northern lights. Brilliant greens and golden yellows dance across the night sky like the great banners of the gods, casting a greenish glow on the endless expanse of pine forest below.

The forest itself is asleep, unmoving, and dark. Only a small glow of embers somewhere down below seems to be fighting a futile battle with the infringing darkness. The glow comes from outside a tiny shelter; a tent made of thin fabric, strategically positioned away from the main forest route. A figure moves in the gloom outside, hunches over, spreads the skirts of the tent, briefly letting out a brilliant glow from within, and then disappears inside.




Roger: “The tea is ready ser, it’s a bit watery, but we’re running short on ingredients.

Kaloyan: “Thank you Roger. Have a seat.”

Roger: “I can’t believe what just happened ser; we could have all been killed!”

Kaloyan: “Roger, it was clear that this journey will be perilous and sacrifices would have to be made. Now I have a staff fueled by the soul of a demon, and the sword of Vlad the necromancer!”

Roger: “What is your plan ser; we can’t stay out here any longer. There are wolves about, and we have food for no more than three days.”




Kaloyan: “You worry too much Roger! We are at a crucial point in our endeavor; we must make contact with the Vampiri Clan. They will have strength in numbers, and once they pledge loyalty to me as their leader, we will begin our onslaught on the Empire!”

Roger: “I don’t know about this ser, what if it’s all a trap! What if we walk in their camp and they simply rob us of the staff and sword and feed us to a troll!?”

Kaloyan: “We are not their enemy Roger; they were defeated by the Empire decades ago and now seek a chance for revenge. That is what I will promise them!”
Roger: “And how are we going to find them ser?”

Kaloyan: “I don’t know Roger; I’m setting up a small ritual so that I can communicate with our friend in the underworld; he will direct us onward.”

Roger: “Be careful ser, you know I don’t trust demons.”

Kaloyan: “Uhh, Roger this is terrible! What’s in it?”

Roger: “Pine needles, sugar and snow ser. We have nothing else. I will go tend to the fire and leave you to your reading.”

Kaloyan: “Yes, wake me in the morning, and please do better at breakfast.”

Roger: “Yes ser.” (He exits)




Kaloyan: “Let’s get on with it… (Reading from text) “And round about I moved my rested eyes, Uprisen erect, and steadfastly I gazed, to recognize the place wherein I was. True is it, that upon the verge I found me of the abysmal valley dolorous, that gathers thunder of infinite ululations. Obscure, profound it was, and nebulous, So that by fixing on its depths my sight nothing whatever I discerned therein.”

(A familiar white light fills the room and Kaloyan collapses in his bed)




Kaloyan finds himself in a world of hazy whiteness; he realizes he is trapped in a cage.

Kaloyan: “Ah, this is getting irritating! Vlad! I know you’re here somewhere, save the theatrics and tell me what I need to know!” ”

Vlad: “Uneasy behind bars are we? I thought perhaps you’d like to see things from my perspective. I must say, I am thoroughly impressed by your success Kaloyan! I would have given anything to have a soul as powerful and ancient as ISPOLIN under my command thirty years ago…but I digress. You are about to take the most important step in your journey yet; meeting the Clan; if you hope to survive the encounter you will listen to me very, very carefully.”

Kaloyan: “I’m listening, just let me out of this thing!”




Vlad: “Patience! When you walk into the camp you will be greeted with open hostility. You are to utter the following phrase or else it’ll be your head on their spikes; “Your lord once again talks from the shadow realm, and I alone walk as his disciple.”

Kaloyan: “You must be joking! I am no messenger or disciple of yours! I will sway their will with my power alone!”

Vlad: “I admire your courage and complacent sense of self-importance, but these warriors are not swayed by words, only by actions. You will travel up the mountains from your camp for half a day until you reach the fortress of Vostok. Once they take you to their leader Nya, give her this amulet. She will explain the rest.”

Kaloyan: “And then they will swear loyalty to me?”

Vlad: “…yes. However, there is a small problem. You are a human, and they are vampire. They will inherently distrust you and your resolve and power. You will have to prove to them that you are a powerful mage! There will be a test…”
(A distinct reptilian roar shatters the silence. The beating of giant wings and then the heft of a giant body landing reverberate through the air.)




Kaloyan: “Test? What test??”

Vlad: “You have never encountered one of these up close have you? In ancient times vampiri warriors used to ride dragons into battle; show them that you can master such a beast, and they will follow you without question. Remember; the key to your survival will be using the staff; “Fight not fire with fire. Exhibit respect, not fear. Strike with calm not with anger. This is all I can tell you, the rest is up to you, and if you fail then… let’s just says it may all have been for naught. Take care now…”




Kaloyan: “Wait, what was that!? Where are you going!? I have more questions! WHAT THE!!!!”

A giant gaping reptilian mouth opens and flames explode in Kaloyan’s face. He awakens.




Roger: “Ser! Are you alright? You were having a nightmare, it’s morning”

Kaloyan: “Roger! Uh, yes… I’m alright…”

Roger: “Here you go ser; real rabbit stew. Was it another Vlad dream ser?”

Kaloyan: “Yes…But what’s important is that I know how to locate the Clan; let’s get everything packed, we’re leaving today!”

Roger: “As you say ser.”

The mage and his servant pack their camp and begin the trip up the mountain. After several hours of walking they arrive at an impressive sight; an ancient keep built into the mountain itself.




Kaloyan: “Look at it Roger! It’s magnificent; it looks like an old Tasher fortress! It’s been here a thousand years, tucked away in the throat of the mountain peaks; an incredibly remote and natural base of operations!”

Roger: “Ser, are you sure about this; it looks heavily guarded!?”

Kaloyan: “Of course Roger, I know exactly what to say to them.”

Roger: “Be careful ser!”




Kaloyan: (stepping out into the clearing) “Greetings blood-Kin! I am Kaloyan the Mage here to lead you to glorious victory!”

(In a flash the guards draw their swords and surround him)




Vampiri Guard: “I love it when the prey comes straight to you!”

Second Guard: “Hold him steady, I bet I could cleave him in half in one strike!”

Kaloyan: “Hold off now! I am on your side you bloody fools!”

Guard: “I found another one, cowering in a snow bank.”

Roger: “Ser! For goodness sake, I though you knew what to say!”

Guard: “Are you lost mage?”

Second Guard: “No matter, I’m giving it a try!”

Kaloyan: “Enough! Enough! Your lord once again talks from … the shadow realm, and I … alone walk as his disciple!”




Guard: “Did he just say what I think he said?”

Second Guard: “Damn it, get him inside now! Is this old one with you?”

Kaloyan: “Yes, he’s with me, now lay off!”

Guard: “Bring them to Nya, she’ll know what to do!”

Kaloyan and Roger are rushed into the fortress. They climb stairwells, are rushed across a sky bridge, and brought into an entrance hall. A woman clad in armor marches into the room; she looks young and beautiful; her complexion pale and her gaze razor-sharp. She approaches Kaloyan and draws her sword.




Nya: “Where did you hear that phrase mage!? Don’t make me tear you limb-from-limb! Speak now!”

Kaloyan: “You must be Nya of the Vampiri Clan. I was expecting a warmer welcome; I am Kaloyan, Grand Mage of the West and I am here to lead you to victory against Leon!”

Nya: “I don’t much give a damn about who you are; answer my question!”




Kaloyan: “I was told to give this to you. (He hands her the medallion)

Nya: “This…This belonged to Vlad! Could it really be happening?”

Kaloyan: “Could what really be happening! I am here to lead you on a glorious campaign against the Empire!”

Nya: “Yes, yes, of course you are. Give me a moment… Victor, Sergei; go back outside. I need to talk to these men.”

Roger: “Oh thank the gods, I thought they were going to kill us for sure ser! This place gives me the creeps ser! Look at the poor fellows in the cages!”

Kaloyan: “Hush Roger!”

Nya: “Kaloyan, was it? Have you talked to Vlad? Do you have his sword?”

Kaloyan: “Yes... met him in the underworld. We hatched a plan to bring down the Empire. You see I despise all they stand for, and you seek revenge! I am here to assemble an army and move on...”

Nya: “I have waited for this moment thirty years!”

Kaloyan: “Yes…as I was saying…so if you will swear allegiance to me I’m sure I can make you a high-ranking officer of some sort…AAH!”




Nya: “Listen Kaloyan! The fact that Vlad has chosen you of all others to lead his Clan and carry out his revenge is baffling to me, but I don’t swear loyalty to rambling fools! You will have to convince me and the Clan that you are indeed worthy of this honor!”

Kaloyan: “I am very aware. Perhaps you wish to see the might of my staff!”

Nya: “I do not care about your staff! I have been laboring for three decades to organize, to build alliances, and prepare a rebellion! If you are to lead and inspire leadership, all parties involved must see your display of power.”

Kaloyan: “And I am ready to show it!”




Nya: “We will see… Dmitri, come here!”

Dmitri: “Yes milady.”

Nya: “Summon Lord Bandrik to the Fortress! Tell him we may have a figure-head in our campaign. Be back before sundown!”

Dmitri: “At once milady!”

Nya: “You will be put through a trial Kaloyan; if you succeed you will have the loyalty of the Clan. If you fail; you will lose your life.”

Kaloyan: “I accept your challenge!”

Nya: “Very well; prepare and rest. Your trial begins at sundown.” (She walks out)




Roger: “By the gods ser! What have we gotten ourselves into?!”

Kaloyan: “She was beautiful Roger; such loveliness is uncanny!”

Roger: “Have you been listening milord! You will be put through a life-and-death trial!”

Kaloyan: “Have I told you that you worry too much Roger? Let’s get some real food; we still have hours till sundown.”

Roger: “Uh, yes ser…”

Meanwhile in Imperial Leon, Sir Asparuh the Knight and his companion, the Orcish sorcerer known as “Him”, have arrived at the outskirts of the town of Pliska. Unaware of the events going on around Kaloyan, the two heroes have come to investigate the troubled western province.




Asparuh: “This is the bridge at Pliska, men, we’re within a few miles of Edrin’s Tower. “

Him: “Looks like a welcoming party. I hope you packed a speech or two.”




Asparuh: “Greetings townspeople; I am Sir Asparuh, Captain of the Royal Guard and Champion of Imperial Leon, and this is the Honorable mage “Him”. We have come to investigate claims that there is trouble at the Tower of the Arcane; what can you tell us about this?”

Town Guard: “Sir Knight, I beg of you turn around now! The mage at the tower has ordered all Imperial troops to keep out, and has threatened to level the village if we do not comply! We have no quarrel with you; please don’t make us engage you!”


Asparuh: “I see… Fear not, we are here to help you, not to endanger your lives; can you tell us why Edrin has forbidden Imperial presence in Pliska?”

Town Guard: “Sir Knight, haven’t you heard?! Edrin the Wise died months ago! All was well until his damned apprentice Kaloyan took over at the tower. “

Him: “I knew it! I knew old Edrin could not be behind this!”

Asparuh: “Yes, but this is a saddening affirmation, Edrin was a good man. We have to confront this apprentice; is he at the tower now?”

Peasant: “We don’t know Sire; we have not heard anything from him in weeks. If you intend to help us you may pass through, but please speak to Elder Rosso at his farm up the road from here.”




Asparuh: “Very well, let’s see what the Elder can tell us. Men wait here.”

Riders: “Yes Sir.”

Asparuh and “Him” travel up the road and arrive at the designate house, perched on a hill overlooking a valley ripe with life and greenery.




Asparuh: “Pliska, pretty as a painting; just a regular sleepy provincial town.”

Him: “In my experience, the best kind of place for all types of shady business.”

Asparuh: “Not in Edrin’s time. Hello there lad, we’re looking for Elder Rosso; is this his farmstead?”

Boy: “Yes milord, I will go get him for you.”



Town Elder: “What in the creator’s name is this! Imperials are not allowed past the bridge; get away now before you cause us anymore trouble than we already have!”

Asparuh: “Elder Rosso, I am Sir Asparuh of Leon, and we are here to help you. Please, can we speak in private?”





Town Elder: “You’re Asparuh? The most famous soldier in all the Empire! By the Gods, if they’ve sent you maybe they haven’t abandoned us after all… Very well, come inside, quickly now before anyone sees you!”

The Elder rushes the party inside.



Town Elder: “Damn stuck-up apprentice devil! He’s had us living in fear for weeks! If I had the strength I’d ring his neck, I would! ”

Him: “Calm yourself, we need to know what’s been going on around here.”

Town Elder: “And who are you exactly? We don’t get many orcs in the west.”

Him: “Is that why this mutt is growling at me? Bugger off!”

Asparuh: “This is the honorable mage “Him”, a great friend of the Empire. Now, you were telling us about Kaloyan.”

Town Elder: “Yes, my apologies, have a seat gentlemen. It all started when “Lord Kaloyan the Mage of the West” decided he was entitled to running this region when Edrin passed. Initially we resisted this incompetent youngster’s command, but he later returned with powerful magic; summoning a golem from the Earth itself! It tore through the village, and we had to give in you see; it would have reduced Pliska to rubble. Kaloyan has been running things ever since.”




Asparuh: “This is understandable; you have no means of defending against such magic. Where is Kaloyan now?”

Town Elder: “The mage is travelling; he sent his servant into town not three weeks ago to seek out three local men to go on a journey. We have not seen them since that day, and things have been very peaceful.”



Him: “Him: “Bugger off dog! What’s he want? ”

Town Elder: “Sharro outside!”

Asparuh: “Three men, the mage and his servant? So five men dressed as townspeople, departing here not three weeks ago? It sounds like we found our culprits for the attack on Frosty Mountain! If they are not back here, they must still be in Mitgardia.”

Him: “So they’ve been running rampant through Mitgardia for a half a month now!”

Asparuh: “Is there anything else you can tell us Elder Rosso?”

Town Elder: “It just so happens a woodsman found a heap of discarded ingredients in the woods near the tower. He brought them to me in hope that I can make sense of what the Mage is planning. I will bring you the urn; take a look.”




Him: “Ground Arnica roots…pheasant beaks, a skull. It looks like the set up for a summoning ritual, and this is a fragment of a map of Erebus… “

Asparuh: “Is there anything else?”

Town Elder: “We found this golden crest after the golem attack; I thought it may be valuable…”

Him: “I don’t believe it; a seal from a black grimoier. Necromancers use them to pass on their knowledge and spells. If the apprentice acquired such a text, he will have extensive knowledge of incredibly powerful dark magic! What do you make of this symbol?”

Asparuh: “That’s Vlad the Necromancer’s personal seal!”

Him: “So Kaloyan may have ventured into the underworld, and emerged with knowledge of dark magic, from a grimoier belonging to Vlad, all a little bit before Vlad’s sword disappeared in the Mitgardia…This proves it; Vlad is the puppeteer, and Kaloyan the puppet!”

Asparuh: “And what does he hope to accomplish?”

Him: “Perhaps the undoing of the Empire, perhaps something more-sinister. This apprentice could implode our reality itself if we don’t stop him!”

Asparuh: “We must alert the Emperor at once!”




Boy: “Sir Knight, there are soldiers here looking for you.”

Asparuh: “What? Soldiers? Thank you Elder, you have been invaluable help to us; if you’ll excuse us.”

Asparuh and “Him” step outside where they find a small group of Imperial soldiers.





Asparuh: “What is all this? I was given a week to report to the war minister; explain why you’re in the west!”

Soldier: “Letter from his Imperial Majesty for you Sir Knight!”

Asparuh: “What? From the Emperor? Let me see! (Takes letter, reads out loud)
“Sir Knight, accompanying these men is the youngest of my three sons, Jason. Despite all of my efforts, he has disappointed me in every way it is feasible for a son to disappoint a father. I want him to accompany you on your endeavor so that that he may learn what it means to be righteous and a true son of Leon. –Emperor Leopold III of

Leon” Which one of you is Prince Jason?”

Jason: “That would be me Sir Knight; the disappointing son.”

Asparuh: “Prince Jason you arrive at an unsuitable time; we are in pursuit of a dangerous mage. I am afraid your apprenticeship will have to be postponed. Please return to the capital. Let’s go “Him.”





Jason: “Sir Knight, I have exhausted my chances for redemption with my father. This is my last shot at doing something noble before he sends me to a monastery like he did my middle brother! I am a trained swordsman, and an expert hunter, I can live the frugal lifestyle! You are the noblest Knight in all of Leon, if anyone can help me, you are him! ”

Asparuh: “I certainly understand that Prince, but I cannot bear to have you tag along.”

Jason: “Oh please Sir Knight, it’s either this or monastic life, and I can’t keep vows! For the love of all you believe in, please let me come along! It’s my last chance! It’s your emperor’s will! ”

Asparuh: “I see… Well, if you are to come along, you are to do as I say when I say, are we clear?”

Jason:”Perfectly!”

Asparuh: “And you are not to whine and complain. Is that clear?”

Jason: Yes, yes! Thank you Sir Knight!”

Him: “Excellent, how thoughtful for our leader to burden us with a royal brat just as we need to make haste.”





Asparuh: “Very well, welcome to your first journey. We’ll head for the Mitgardian Capital of Valholl, they are sure to have heard something of the mage or at the very least can help us find him. Jason, I hope you are ready to face real danger.”

Jason: “Don’t worry Sir Knight I’ve survived six Spring Festivals in Varocha! A dozen barmaids in Lev can vouch for my…shall we say “vigor”. That’s my type of scuffle.” (He nudges “Him”)
H
im: “I’m sure all the trolls we encounter will be charmed.”




The party crosses the bridge at the river. Midway on the bridge the golden seal begins to vibrate and shake violently.

Him: “Oh my… this is awfully clever…”

Asparuh: “What is?”





Him: “It appears our friend Kaloyan has placed a protective ward on the seal, and afterwards on the bridge here, so that nobody can take it out of the town and survive to tell the tale… how devilishly clever of him…”

Asparuh: “What are you talking about!?”

Soldier: “Sir Asparuh, something stirs in the water!”

A giant stone mass rises from the river bed, as the soldiers panic and run off of the bridge.



Him: “It’s a golem! Don’t move!”

Asparuh: “Run! Are you mad?!”




Him: “It’s a big stupid rock! It can’t see you if you’re not moving, now everybody; stand still!”

Asparuh: “Plan?”

Him: “Working on it. Cover your eyes. That’s right, turn a bit more…a bit more…IGNIS!”





(A fireball hits the golem square in the head, which explodes into hundreds of tiny pieces)

Asparuh: “By the creator, it worked! What’s so funny? Why are you laughing?”

Him: “An Earth Golem! That’s what had these peasants scared? They could have clubbed it to death!”

Asparuh: “You have a strange sense of humor my friend. Soldiers, ride to the capital; inform the war minister that the west is secure, and that Edrin the Mage is dead. Tell him we are headed north into Mitgardia in pursuit of a suspect and that we will send word on our progress from Valholl. Are you alright son?”



Jason: “That was madness!”

Him: “There’s going to be plenty more “madness” where we’re headed. Welcome to our type of scuffle.” (He nudges Jason)

Back in the Mitgardian Mountains Kaloyan is beginning his trial.”




Nya: (From the tower top) “Very well mage, show these warriors why you’re the one to lead them. It has been three decades since Vlad tamed a wild dragon. We will summon a beast, and you will subdue it or die trying. Are you ready?”

Kaloyan: “I will succeed. I’m ready to begin.”

Roger: “Be careful ser!”

Kaloyan steps out of the shadow of the fortress. Above him, a horn sounds an ancient battle call. Kaloyan stands in the center of the clearing and raises his staff. There is a familiar beating of wings and a reptilian screech. Kaloyan looks up and a magnificent dragon flies over the fortress and lands it monumental body with eagle-like poise. Its scales glistening, its teeth bared, and its claws digging into the frozen ground, the beast eyes up Kaloyan. .





Kaloyan: “Fight not fire with fire. Exhibit respect, not fear. Strike with calm not with anger.”

The dragon screeches and belches fire at Kaloyan, who screams and jumps behind a cage.




Lord Bandrik: “Get out of there you coward!”

Roger: “Ser!!!”

Kaloyan: “How am I supposed to approach that thing? It’ll eat me alive!”

Nya: “You must tame it like the dragon riders of the past! You will either convince it you’re its master, or it will kill you!”

Kaloyan: “Great! Let’s try this again! Fight not fire with fire… so how about…TEMPESTAS!”




The dragon is struck by lightning, and stops its advance; shocked by the mage’s bolt.

Kaloyan: “Exhibit respect…”

Kaloyan bows his head, and stands up to his full height facing off the beast.





Kaloyan: “Strike with calm, not with anger.”

As the dragon rears its head once again Kaloyan calmly points the staff at its throat and utters “TEMPESTAS”.

The bolt hits the dragon directly in the nostril, and it panics and shakes its head violently. It is unsure of what to do, and dares not attempt to belch fire again. Kaloyan calmly steps towards the beast and raises his staff. The dragon stiffens its musculature, lowers its enormous head, and relents to the mage. Kaloyan steps on its giant scales, climbing on its neck. An awe-struck audience files down from the tower and bows their heads in respect.




Kaloyan: “I am Kaloyan Mage of the West and I beckon thee warriors; join me in my cause to destroy the empire of Leon; who stands with me!?!”

Nya: “Unbelievable! You are the one! The Vampiri Clan pledges loyalty to Kaloyan the

Mage!”

Lord Bandrik: “Lord Bandrik of Avalonia and his men pledge to follow Kaloyan the Mage!”




Kaloyan: “Dear friends; the age of the glorious Empire are numbered. Let us bring the Lion to its knees!”

To be continued…



Comments

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  February 17, 2014
Amazing!!!Nice dragon!!!
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  July 7, 2013
Simply amazing! That dragon is beautiful; and the story just keeps getting better and better.
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  January 19, 2013
Very nice creation! The details are great! This set rivals the official LEGO sets, and in some cases, better. You have a way of awing me. Once again, great job!
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  October 19, 2012
Story if wonderful! Castle is wonderful! Dragon is wonderful! Castle is one color, but detailed in a way to be interesting.
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  May 9, 2012
I don t care much for castles usually, but, it would ruin me that lego sells this one! it s just fabulously designed! incredible work...again!
  April 6, 2012
I love the design of your castle, but your dragon is really quite awesome, one of the best I've seen. Your dragon in this build has inspired a creation of mine, specifically your technique in the snout and head. I've cited you as a source and I would appreciate your input on my creation if you have a second. http://www.mocpages.com/moc.php/317687
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  April 2, 2012
Quoting Pedro Resendes I had been postponing reading this because I wanted to make sure I was in the right mood to enjoy it. Once again, I cannot find words that express how much I love this story, and all the MOCs that go with it. You are my favorite builder. May you build and tell for many years to come Alex
Thank you, it's always nice to hear! :) I plan on building for quite a while even past this story, and beyond the castle/fantasy theme, but more on that later. ;)
  April 2, 2012
I had been postponing reading this because I wanted to make sure I was in the right mood to enjoy it. Once again, I cannot find words that express how much I love this story, and all the MOCs that go with it. You are my favorite builder. May you build and tell for many years to come Alex
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  March 11, 2012
This truly are amazing, wonderful job!
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  March 6, 2012
YAY. I can't wait! Do we get to see the full dragon?
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  March 6, 2012
Quoting Vohfur Serterun Cant wait for the next episode! Is it almost ready?
Next episode is fully built, and story is set, just need to take pictures; should be up by Friday!
  March 4, 2012
Cant wait for the next episode! Is it almost ready?
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  February 23, 2012
Quoting Mike C Excellent excellent work. I just get so wrapped up in the story, it really leaves me wanting more. The builds are amazing. The vampire castle and the dragon are so detailed they look great. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Thank you, I'm happy that you find the story enthralling; it takes a long time to come to a final version and I'm always happy that people actually take the time to read it! The next chapter is almost complete; probably could be posted by next week. Thanks guys!
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  February 23, 2012
Excellent excellent work. I just get so wrapped up in the story, it really leaves me wanting more. The builds are amazing. The vampire castle and the dragon are so detailed they look great. Can't wait for the next chapter.
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  February 15, 2012
Wow just wow! I'm more of a visual person than a story reader. So forgive me for overlooking that part but I have to say those exellent images had my eyes glued. So many fine things to look at like the inside of the walls, all the details on the minifigs and the overall veiw of this grand castle. That dragon is immensly good but I have to say his breath does look a bit puny ;-) Very well built indeed!
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  February 15, 2012
Thanks guys, the weapons and armors of the vampiri clan are Brick Warriors Items. (Check of Thrash's photostream on flickr) The dragon's head pivots to give it more expressive character and a wide range of positions, and yes it is a full dragon you will see before the series ends. :) As for why elves are not in the series, just you wait until next chapter, Hint hint...
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  February 15, 2012
Amazing work! The story is very attractive, keep up the good work!
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  February 15, 2012
Every build in this is magnificent - looking forward to the next installment!
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  February 14, 2012
sweet chapter that dragon is amazing! is the head fixed or attached with a ball joint?
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  February 13, 2012
Wow! That is art in LEGO. The dragon's eye is so simple, but that piece is perfect there. This is amazing.
  February 13, 2012
You are an amazing builder i like Aspurah's adventures! Where do you get your armor and wepons (Vampiri specificaly) and why dont you have elves a lot i just would like to know. By the way can you check my creations out i would like feedback so i can be a better builder. Thanks Josh
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  February 12, 2012
coooool!!!!!
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  February 12, 2012
Brilliant forced perspective!
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  February 12, 2012
The dragon is really awesome... Next chapter please !
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  February 12, 2012
Epic creation! I love these comics, your figures are amazing as well
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  February 12, 2012
Incredible! I love this series.
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  February 12, 2012
Masterpiece is an understatement! It seems every piece of brick laid on this set of MOCs has a purposeful meaning. Incredible range of techniques!
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  February 11, 2012
You did a great job on this!!!AWESOME!!!!!
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  February 11, 2012
I really like the way you use the arches and log pieces. Great detailing everywhere. Is the dragon complete, or did you just build the front?
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  February 11, 2012
Quoting E. B. (Currently at School Camp) You mean like ready to post?
No, no, no... ;) In the planning stages. Should be at least 3 weeks before posting. Cheers!
  February 11, 2012
You mean like ready to post?
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  February 11, 2012
Thanks a lot for the comments everyone, the next chapter is already under way. :)
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  February 11, 2012
Wow, that was an awesome story... can't wait for the continuation. The scenes are really beautiful, I especially love that castle! Keep it up!
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  February 10, 2012
dang it this means another whole month of waiting for the next one
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  February 10, 2012
the whole thing is amazing
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  February 10, 2012
Both story and creations let me speechless. Each new chapter deserves more and more its "epicness". Congrats, it's impressive!
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  February 10, 2012
Stunning! Easily one of the best story/build combinations ever put into LEGO!
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  February 10, 2012
beautiful!
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  February 10, 2012
beautiful!
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  February 10, 2012
wow... amazing work... incredible! the story and the creations are perfect! Can't wait for the next chapter! ;-P
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  February 10, 2012
WOWOWOW!!! So much details and great designs!!! And probably the most beautiful lego Dragon I've ever seen ! Regards - Jay
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  February 10, 2012
This MOCpage has it all, as expected - great pics, superb stoy. Time spent watching and reading your work is ALWAYS worth it. May your creativeness never run dry
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  February 10, 2012
Wow! This thing rocks! THe design of the Dragon is particularly interesting, but my favorite part is the fortress hands down. Impressive scale and attention to detail.
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  February 10, 2012
Simply spectacular! Your building skills are beyond incredible and your story is just as so. The castle was amazing, the bridge was brilliant and that dragon!!! WOW!!! The best dragon I've seen by far made from Lego! I can't wait for the next part! --Blast--
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  February 9, 2012
very impressive ,wish I was that creative.
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  February 8, 2012
It's a work of art!!
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  February 8, 2012
my congratulations for the castel building and also for all vignettes you did! imprssive care for all details. personally i think you are a genius!
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  February 7, 2012
Amazing, and envelope pushing, why do all you guys have to set the bar so high!
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  February 7, 2012
great!
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  February 6, 2012
Excellent. I joined Mitgard inspired by your builds! I added my soldiers to my mocpages, could you go check them out some time, I would like to hear what you have got to say about them! Cheers, Jan
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  February 6, 2012
I'm at work right now, so I have to read it later. But I can already tell you: Amazing.
A P
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  February 5, 2012
Incredible work. Totally amazing. I love the scenery. ;-)
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  February 5, 2012
This is just epic you really have a gift when it comes to making these wonderful Mocs and stories Alex.-cheers
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  February 5, 2012
You blow me away yet again... Amazing story and a even better build!
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  February 5, 2012
Dude....
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  February 5, 2012
very Impressive!
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  February 5, 2012
Oh, wow! First off, I love castles in the snow, so that was a real treat. Then I saw that dragon... the sculpting was amazing! Looked fantastic! Excellent work on the whole thing!
A P
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343 guilty spark
  February 4, 2012
this is just awesome, the castle and the guards just look fantastic great job
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  February 4, 2012
That dragon is...um...WOW! I think you may actually suffer from a disease, which I diagonse as "Just-won't-stop-posting-amazing-MOC-itis". WOW!
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  February 4, 2012
Amazing!!! I can see your writing improving with each chapter, and your talent with the legos is mind boggling. I hope you have many many more chapters
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  February 4, 2012
Mega, as always!!
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  February 4, 2012
The sheer brilliance of this epic is unbelievable. Excellent work, and if you've any other photos of that dragon, I'd love to see them!
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  February 4, 2012
You are an exceptional builder!
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  February 4, 2012
Can we have more pics of the Dragon? It's easily the best on MOCpages!
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  February 4, 2012
Just magnificent! The story line is so intriguing I feel like an addict to your stories! The builds are as fantastic as usual. But kudos to you for including the most beautiful dragon I've ever seen! Very well done :)
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  February 4, 2012
Brilliant! You, sir, are a lego god.
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  February 4, 2012
Excellent, the plot thickens!
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  February 4, 2012
Amazing! The fortress, the dragon, the completely brilliant storytelling... All around amazing!
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  February 4, 2012
Um....WOW!
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  February 4, 2012
Really, all I can muster here is... umm, WOW! Thanks for sharing! This is just... wow. ~ Chris.
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  February 4, 2012
Thank you guys, I really appreciate your great comments! :) The Armors are Brick Warrior items, I was debating whether or not to use non-official Lego accessories, but these are just a flawless quality so I deem them absolutely true to the Lego style and thus acceptable even for purists like me. The dragon is a fully built model, but needs to be held upright as I haven't been able to get it to stay balance (too front-heavy) and my hand had to be on it to position it, thus I could only show the front. I will find a way to balance it so it can be fully presented in later chapters. The bridge planks are on top of a long column of headlight bricks laid on their side. Thanks again guys!
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  February 4, 2012
Spectacular! This moc is a must see! The dragon is brilliant, and it is huge! The detail and scale of all these scenes is incredible! Plus any moc with a dragon is a good moc.
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  February 4, 2012
EPIC! Once again, I am shocked at the great builds and the gripping story! You inspire me quite alot! Where do you get the names for the spells? they fit perfectly.
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  February 4, 2012
The dragon is easily the best I've ever seen. All of the scenes are fantastic and meticulously detailed! This whole series has been something special.
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  February 4, 2012
Great builds & absorbing story! :)
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  February 4, 2012
Wow! Another great addition to the incredible story. The castle of the Vampiri clan is just beautiful. And that dragon is amazing. The head looks very accurate to the classic dragon, and I love the part usage for the eyes!
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  February 4, 2012
Another fantastic piece from your story!
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  February 4, 2012
Magnificent! The castle is masterful, it's large yet still stunningly detailed. The dragon is fantastic, and probably the best I've seen. Brilliant work!
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  February 4, 2012
I love this series and hope it lasts for a very long time. The microscale was beautifully done, as were the dragon and the mountaintop castle. I didn't realie that this took place within the Guilds of Historica until now. Interesting.
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  February 4, 2012
You never cease to amaze me, AP. When you are done with this story you should make it into a book, I would definitely buy it. I really like the forced perspective and the interior details of the buildings. As usual the landscaping and architecture were stunning. How did you do the spacing between the boards on the bridge?
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  February 4, 2012
Wow! You are amazing! The amount of detail you put into every single build is just incredible! I love the dragon, amazingly well done. 100000/5!
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  February 4, 2012
WOW VERT VERY VERY VERY COOL!!!8/5 Where did you get those helms???
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  February 4, 2012
Amazing story and builds yet again!
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  February 4, 2012
Amazing dragon! But is it fully built, because I notice you only show its head and wings. All the scenery is perfect as usual, and even the BF looks good somehow!
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  February 4, 2012
Everything about this moc is amazing! The dragon, the clan, the architecture, the story, everything! Like Mark Kelso said, most of the time I also skip the stories of mocs because its too time consuming, but here I just keep reading and hope it will go on forever. These mocs gave me inspiration to start building myself. Might even be adding some photos on my old account. Thanks for that!
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  February 4, 2012
what a treat, great work.
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  February 4, 2012
that is an awsome story and an amazing dragon you're builds never cease 2 amaze me
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  February 4, 2012
I can't tell you how few times a story on MOCpages engages me to the extent that I stick with it for the entire post. Such posts are usually just too time consuming. But, darn you, I simply couldn't stop! Beautiful descriptive text. And, while I personally found some of the terminology and conversation a bit cliche', there were moments of real believability in the dialog, which is such a rare find around here. And as for the building and presentation; just top notch! If there's a category this year in the MOCies for story-telling, you've got this builder's nomination. Great work!
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  February 4, 2012
Wonderful!
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  February 4, 2012
Another fantastic build and story. Would love to see more of the dragon - maybe in Episode 7? Top work!
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  February 4, 2012
WOAH. THIS IS EASILY THE BEST EPISODE YET!!!!! The dragon is amazing and the castles and houses are fabulous! You are the greatest builder I have ever seen!
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  February 4, 2012
Nice building
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  February 4, 2012
Really nice story and great build. More pictures of the dragon would be nice:-)
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  February 4, 2012
An excellent episode, most certainly. Its length must be twice the normal episode, but so much better for the reader! Thank you for my day!
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  February 4, 2012
Marvelous as always! Just a little disappointed that you used brickforge/brickarms/brickwarriors though. Sorry but as a purist I like seeing the little Lego TM on every brick :P. But like I said the build itself, including every detail is unbelievable and a huge inspiration! Please keep them coming! - greetings, Elderon
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  February 4, 2012
Each time that i see a new episode of this your seriesi'm really amazed. You are a great moccer my friend, your lendscape are always excellent, and this Dragon, wow! ....A great work, for a great sign..AP!
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  February 4, 2012
I liked it a lot! Really nice work!
  February 4, 2012
This is wonderfull work, absolutly fantastic, i really look up to your work and i am stunned by your creations.
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  February 4, 2012
Holy stars alive! That dragon is magnificent! Shall we ever see the whole thing?? :D So much other good stuff too, i wish there was a rating beyond excellent for me to choose...
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  February 4, 2012
Quoting Night Hawk _ Great work you must put so much time and effort into each episode. Where did you get the armour and weapons worn by the Vampiri guards?
They are Brick Warriors Parts, I highly recommend them. http://brickwarriors.com/
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  February 4, 2012
Great work you must put so much time and effort into each episode. Where did you get the armour and weapons worn by the Vampiri guards?
A P
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justin dale
  February 3, 2012
I like the bridge on the keep and the wooden one alot. Lots of cool stuff on this one.
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  February 3, 2012
Just keeps getting better and better everytime! Excellent work! Love the castle detailing!
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  February 3, 2012
Best episode by far! The dragon is the star!!!
 
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