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Island Locked II-Episode 01
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If you haven't read the first Island Locked, it's okay, you don't need to have to read this. Here it is! The first episode, over 90 pictures as promised, each taken three times to ensure the best quality possible, with special effects added to make it realistic. Please sit back (or on the edge of your seat) and watch/read. Mild gore contained.
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Episode 01




The sun blared in John's eyes as he he regained consciousness. He turned to the side and let his eyes readjust









A girl just a few feet from him lay face down in the grass; she showed no signs of being awake, or alive for the matter.









"Wake up," John said as he shook her gently at first, then a little harder.









"Thank goodness," John said as she stood up, "You had me worried there!"










A few meters away, Caleb lay in the grass, still unconscious.









His eyes fluttered open; he turned to avoid the blazing light of the sun.









He stood up and looked around, not sure what had happened.










Two men where laying in the foliage, not yet conscious.








One of them was Ross.









Amy's eyes opened, but she stayed still as she tried to gather her thoughts.










She began to stand up, after she had managed to swallow the panic.








Just feet from her was a man surrounded by blood- he was dead.









She stood up and surveyed her surroundings.










Two long scorch marks of something very large had marred the grass and dirt in front of her.









A man to her left stood, shocked, and didn't move. But Amy wasn't paying attention to that.









Her eyes where on the limp body in front of her.









Fresh blood covered the body almost from head to toe, the man was dead.









Just in behind the dead body were the only remnants of the passenger airplane that had crashed.









Amy's memory came flooding back- they had survived the most threatening times the world had faced; they had been rescued by the military and sent to Cuba for safety. The plane must have crashed, she realized.









A man helped a girl out of the water and onto the wreckage.









The pilot of the plane grabbed onto a metal bar attached to what was left of the plane.








A man lay in the sand, he had gotten lucky- he had had a softer landing than some.









A palm tree had been knocked over. A man was propped against it, his face in the sand.









Debris where everywhere, littering the beach.









Travis began to stand. His body was wracked with pain, not just from his previously acquired burns.










Mr. Beckmann lay on the ground motionless.








But soon he managed to stand. This was not his first time on the island they had crashed on. His mind went back 20 years to when he finally managed to get off the island.





Twenty years previously



Caleb smiled as the small helicopter began to land- he had finally got off of the damned island.









The blades where still moving, but slowing as they landed.









He was the first off. He stepped forward to greet the soldier.









He heard a whizzing sound that he recognized to be that of a rocket. He threw himself forward.









The helicopter exploded behind him.









Some debris had hit his head, making a large gash in it, but he still began to rise to his feet.









He gritted his teeth as he looked at the rubble. In the helicopter had been three of his friends. They where dead now.









He sank to his knees and yelled out in anger. Who had done this?









The soldier had gotten to his feet. He was smiling. He had KNOWN it was going to happen, and he had done nothing about it.









Even worse, he had enjoyed it. He channeled all of his anger, his hate, his anguish into one thing something he had only done once before, and launched the man into the air with fire, coming straight from his hands. Caleb used his power for his second but not last time.














Beckmann snapped back to reality. He picked up his gun and walked toward the rest of the people.









John lead his sister towards the rest of the people, he had remembered what had happened. The strange thing was that he didn't quite remember. He remembered getting on the plane, taking off, flying for a while, then BAM! Everything was blank from there.









A few feet in front of him, Caleb ran forward.








Ross began to stand as well.









The soldier remained unconscious.









Caleb ran up to Beckmann. He had known the man for several months but didn't even know they shared the same first name.

"We need to help these people!" he said urgently.







Meters away, the pilot had managed to pull himself onto the wreckage.









Ross walked through the foliage until he was next to the solder.









"Sorry pal, but I'm gonna have to take this from you," he said as he stole the man pistol.









Elsewhere, smoke rose from one of the plane engines that was still somewhat in tact.









The smoke began to build, attracting on of the men's attention!









"Get away from that!" said Joseph White, an ex-marine.









Just then, it exploded, sending the man nearest to it flying into the ocean, every limb in his body shattered.









Joseph had been thrown to the ground.









What was still left of the engine was in flames.









He helped the other man that had been stuck in the tree out.









"Come on," he said, leading him to the clearing.








Another soldier helped the pilot walk, since he was injured.







They avoided the body, but it was still very much present.









Two others came walking from the wreckage.









The survivors stood, confused, but alive, in the clearing.









Just then, Ross came out of the foliage with the gun.









He fired a shot. It whizzed through the air and hit a collage student in the heart.









The man was dead before he hit the ground.









"Now that you know I'm not afraid to hurt anyone," said Ross, "You should know to do as I say."









"You," he said, gesturing at Beckmann, "toss the gun over, slowly."










Beckmann did as he was told. The gun landed on the burnt mixture of dirt and grass.









"Good, now NO ONE follow me, or I WILL shoot them."









He left quickly and began his long trek to the facility he had been told to go to.









John stood up in front of all of the people. He raised his hand and spoke, "Listen!"









All eyes turned toward him.









"I know we've been through a lot, but if we're gonna survive, we need to get some things done. There may still be others out here who where on our plane. I need some volunteers to come with me to look for them."









Joseph was the first to volunteer, along with the man he had helped.











After a few other had volunteered, Caleb stepped forward, "I need some volunteers to help me clear the debris and make a camp," he said.









Beckmann and two other men volunteered.









Travis raised his hand too.









John Lead his volunteers into the unknown jungle.









He carried with him the only weapon the group had.









Meanwhile, Travis and the others began to clear the debris.










Within a few hours, there we two a nice camp fires going.






















The debris had been piled up next to the makeshift shelter.









The extra airplane chars had been put next to it as well.









Inside, the pilot and a soldier who had lost his leg rested. The only found luggage where next to them.









Soon the search party was back.









"Hey," John said,"Just the person I was looking for, sis, we have an injured one."









"His arm his bleeding, needs wrapped up."









The girl took him to the small shelter and began to treat his wounds. She was a nurse.









"How many did you find?" Caleb asked.

"Four," he answered, then paused. He spoke again,"we need to do something about that body."









The blood had dried, but the sight of it was not pleasant.









"Maybe," Caleb replied, "But first everyone need some sleep."









Soon everyone was asleep in various positions- any that they found suitable.









Amy had found a blanket.









It was almost morning when a muffled cry woke Caleb.









The man sleeping a few feet away from him shrieked as he was pulled back something or someone.











Suddenly John was being dragged backwards, he yelled out,in surprise.











Where Johns sister had been sleeping minutes before, was empty.









Suddenly Caleb was being dragged away by something. He tried to cry out, but nothing came out. He was alone.


To be continued....











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I really really want this to get on the explorers page, so please rate and comment. I would love advice to be given, or glitches to be pointed out, I need to know these things to fix them.




May God bless you




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Yeah, I realized how immature that was so I took it off. But all comments are GREATLY appreciated







Caleb R.
Tried Cascade13
  June 14, 2012
I loved the first season, especially, because it was believable and realistic. I think the addition of 'fire from the hands' will make it go downhill. I hope you pull it off, but I'm not sure that you can.
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  February 21, 2012
That was great! Nice story and pictures and stuff
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  February 13, 2012
Quoting Hayden. (Zac.) Very cool! I do like the story and look forward to reading the next ones! Also if you have the time could you please give me some feed back on this? http://www.mocpages.com/moc.php/309194
Thanks for the comment
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  February 13, 2012
Very cool! I do like the story and look forward to reading the next ones! Also if you have the time could you please give me some feed back on this? http://www.mocpages.com/moc.php/309194
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  February 11, 2012
Quoting Commander Knox Wow this is awesome! Your a great story writer.
Thanks, and the next episode is out btw
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  February 11, 2012
Wow this is awesome! Your a great story writer.
Caleb R.
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Dave '
  February 8, 2012
Sweet bro!
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  February 8, 2012
Quoting Iceman . Nice episode! You know I might need you to make me a series poster for my Apoc series I MIGHT be making. I'll let you know later on if I need it.
Sure thing
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  February 8, 2012
That was great!!! You should be a writer or something like that!!!!
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  February 8, 2012
Nice episode! You know I might need you to make me a series poster for my Apoc series I MIGHT be making. I'll let you know later on if I need it.
  February 8, 2012
I just had this crazy idea. What if the characters find themselves inside the Hunger Games, and they have to fight eachother! How awesome would that be?
Caleb R.
silent assassin
  February 7, 2012
:P
Caleb R.
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silent assassin
  February 6, 2012
waht happend with ross? he just went crazy...
Caleb R.
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silent assassin
  February 6, 2012
ahh right i skiped a lot buy the way should you be in school (yeah i cant talk) :)
Caleb R.
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silent assassin
  February 6, 2012
how did lost end?
Caleb R.
silent assassin
  February 6, 2012
oh other side of da world (god im dumb) its 11:30 over in england (or at least thats what the clock tells me anyways)
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  February 6, 2012
Quoting silent assassin oh other side of da world (god im dumb) its 11:30 over in england (or at least thats what the clock tells me anyways)
Why would you be stupid? Why would ANYONE guess I live in china? XD btw I'm half brithish :)
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  February 6, 2012
Quoting silent assassin ahh right i skiped a lot buy the way should you be in school (yeah i cant talk) :)
I live in china so it's like 7 PM here. And when you comment more then once on this, don't put the "like" thing the second time, k? Gives me unfair likes
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  February 6, 2012
Quoting silent assassin how did lost end?
Don't wanna give it away
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  February 6, 2012
Quoting silent assassin waht happend with ross? he just went crazy...
Read New Denver, my last series, and you'll know
Caleb R.
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Billy Bob
  February 5, 2012
Forcing likes isn't a TRUE way to get them, that's at least my opinion.
Caleb R.
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jordan rice
  February 5, 2012
you cant force people for like's. ok i cant talk coz i havent posted ANYTHING yet (reason being the same i have not made any stips on SG) dont care about the likes because the series is very good to read and i enjoy your posts. when i finaly get to post anything as long people read and enjoy them im happy. ya get me?
Caleb R.
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jordan rice
  February 5, 2012
besides you have what 20 odd like now so im saying that as an achievement. :D
Caleb R.
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jordan rice
  February 5, 2012
i just noticed that your fig has an uncanny and somewhat supernatual ablity to disperse fire from your hands. are you going to go futher with the power? (i meant looking into an origin and other facts or things to do with it) im very interstead for my fig also has a superhuman power.
Caleb R.
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~~ Patrick~~ .
  February 5, 2012
Please can you give your character in my CYOA a name, Thank you
Caleb R.
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~~ Patrick~~ .
  February 5, 2012
Very good episode and very detailed, I might look at more of the episodes and I will add you as a favourite.
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  February 5, 2012
Quoting Ru Corder Very nice start! Lot's of unexplained mysteries. And it just so happens that I'm watching Lost on Netflix right now :D
Good show! That and Chuck are my favorites!
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  February 5, 2012
Quoting Captain Owl ~ Awesome! Is this gonna end like Lost did? I hope not!
Lost ended so well though! Haha, but no, different story different ending
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  February 5, 2012
Quoting brook firestone Looking good! Nice work, I can tell you really put a lot into this!
Yeah, it took over an hour to post!
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  February 5, 2012
Looking good! Nice work, I can tell you really put a lot into this!
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  February 5, 2012
Thanks guys
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  February 5, 2012
Quoting Annie Corder Great first episode! This looks like it's gonna be a really awesome series. :)
Thanks!
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  February 5, 2012
Quoting Mr Viking Oh, the only thing I would change is the older Caleb's fire ability. I don't really think that it fits into the story very well, but I also don't know where the plot is going, so, just a suggestion. :)
Oh believe me it does
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  February 5, 2012
Quoting jordan rice i just noticed that your fig has an uncanny and somewhat supernatual ablity to disperse fire from your hands. are you going to go futher with the power? (i meant looking into an origin and other facts or things to do with it) im very interstead for my fig also has a superhuman power.
Just in the series, not outside it though
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  February 5, 2012
Awesome! Is this gonna end like Lost did? I hope not!
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  February 5, 2012
Very nice start! Lot's of unexplained mysteries. And it just so happens that I'm watching Lost on Netflix right now :D
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  February 5, 2012
Grim...but pretty neat!
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  February 5, 2012
Looks really cool! If you make more i will rate them and comment!
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  February 5, 2012
Great first episode! This looks like it's gonna be a really awesome series. :)
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  February 5, 2012
Oh, the only thing I would change is the older Caleb's fire ability. I don't really think that it fits into the story very well, but I also don't know where the plot is going, so, just a suggestion. :)
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  February 5, 2012
Quoting jordan rice besides you have what 20 odd like now so im saying that as an achievement. :D
Yeah true :)
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  February 5, 2012
Quoting Billy Bob Forcing likes isn't a TRUE way to get them, that's at least my opinion.
Yeah I guess you're right
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  February 5, 2012
Quoting jordan rice you cant force people for like's. ok i cant talk coz i havent posted ANYTHING yet (reason being the same i have not made any stips on SG) dont care about the likes because the series is very good to read and i enjoy your posts. when i finaly get to post anything as long people read and enjoy them im happy. ya get me?
Yeah, you're right. I think I'll take that down
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  February 5, 2012
Quoting The Timinater ! great job! I bet you're just saying it'll get cancelled if it doesn't get enough likes XD
Oh, did you mean that I wont cancel even if it doesn't get 35 likes? I'll cancel all right. If I get more than 30 but less than 35 I MIGHT not
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  February 5, 2012
Quoting ~~ Patrick~~ . Very good episode and very detailed, I might look at more of the episodes and I will add you as a favourite.
Thanks
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  February 5, 2012
Quoting ~~ Patrick~~ . Please can you give your character in my CYOA a name, Thank you
I believe I did, let me check
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  February 5, 2012
Quoting Mr Viking I advertised this in Fellowship of the Brick, I hope you don't mind. :)
Yeah, thanks
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  February 5, 2012
Quoting The Timinater ! great job! I bet you're just saying it'll get cancelled if it doesn't get enough likes XD
Yeah, I didn't try to hide that that was what I'm saying
Caleb R.
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jordan rice
  February 4, 2012
nice start to the series
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  February 4, 2012
great job! I bet you're just saying it'll get cancelled if it doesn't get enough likes XD
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  February 4, 2012
I advertised this in Fellowship of the Brick, I hope you don't mind. :)
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  February 4, 2012
Quoting Max Stud Ok,Flight 571 is about a group of survivors from a plane crash in the Andes Mountain.You can check it on Wikipedia I am it would help
Okay, cool! I will
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  February 4, 2012
Ok,Flight 571 is about a group of survivors from a plane crash in the Andes Mountain.You can check it on Wikipedia I am it would help
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  February 4, 2012
Quoting Cyborg Jedi Great work! I already Think I know whose body that is and how it has to do with Caleb. Great story line, I am looking forward for more episodes!
Heh, they'll only come out once a week though =/
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  February 4, 2012
Quoting michael ganzert can't wait for the next one!
It comes out in a week!
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  February 4, 2012
Quoting Ben Indy Looks like it's going to be a great series!
Thanks!
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  February 4, 2012
Quoting jordan rice nice start to the series
Thanks for the comment!
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  February 4, 2012
Quoting Mr Viking This was an excellent pilot. I don't have any suggestions for you though.
That's fine, thanks for watching
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  February 4, 2012
Quoting Jess G. Great series! What's happening to them... Oh, BTW *college. :) Sorry, that spelling error bugs me and I see it all the time.
Hahaha, my bad. Thanks though
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  February 4, 2012
can't wait for the next one!
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  February 4, 2012
Great work! I already Think I know whose body that is and how it has to do with Caleb. Great story line, I am looking forward for more episodes!
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  February 4, 2012
Great series! What's happening to them... Oh, BTW *college. :) Sorry, that spelling error bugs me and I see it all the time.
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  February 4, 2012
This was an excellent pilot. I don't have any suggestions for you though.
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  February 4, 2012
Looks like it's going to be a great series!
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  February 4, 2012
Quoting Josh.O Shadeslayer Was there a signup I missed?
No sign-ups for this series
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  February 4, 2012
Quoting Max Stud <<Quoting Caleb>>Yes I did.You can get some ideas from the flight number 571
wait what?
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  February 4, 2012
Was there a signup I missed?
  February 4, 2012
<<Quoting Caleb>>Yes I did.You can get some ideas from the flight number 571
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  February 4, 2012
Quoting Max Stud <<Quoting Caleb>>Yes I did
Great! So you're all caught up!
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  February 4, 2012
Quoting Josh.O Shadeslayer nice
Thanks!
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  February 4, 2012
Quoting El Barto ! Looks like you're off to a good start here! But I would suggest reworking the text in a few places to eliminate the simple descriptions of what's going on. For example, the shot with the man in the hat helping the girl out of the water. Maybe try using dialogue between the characters to accomplish the same thing. Texan: "Let's get ya outta the water there, young lady, take my hand!" Or whatever. You see where I'm going with this? It humanizes the figs and the action without simply telling what it is they're doing or seeing. Maybe you could watch the beginning of Lost to see how they go about it. I hope this is useful!
Wow, good advice there, it is much appreciated! I actually have seen all of lost =D and thanks for the comment!
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  February 4, 2012
Quoting Michael Kringe Finally! A little bit confusing, but nice job!
Thanks Michael!
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  February 4, 2012
Finally! A little bit confusing, but nice job!
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  February 4, 2012
Looks like you're off to a good start here! But I would suggest reworking the text in a few places to eliminate the simple descriptions of what's going on. For example, the shot with the man in the hat helping the girl out of the water. Maybe try using dialogue between the characters to accomplish the same thing. Texan: "Let's get ya outta the water there, young lady, take my hand!" Or whatever. You see where I'm going with this? It humanizes the figs and the action without simply telling what it is they're doing or seeing. Maybe you could watch the beginning of Lost to see how they go about it. I hope this is useful!
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  February 4, 2012
nice
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  February 4, 2012
Quoting Captain Sam Nice. Maybe I can make a peg leg or something so I'm not completely helpless? I really like this. Good start to Island Locked II.
Yeah, good suggestion. Thanks for the comment
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  February 4, 2012
Nice. Maybe I can make a peg leg or something so I'm not completely helpless? I really like this. Good start to Island Locked II.
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  February 4, 2012
Quoting Max Stud Cool!!!So Beckmann is the other Caleb???i thought that you were just using the head in convenience.
Just wait and see =D And have you read the first Island Locked? Thanks for the comment
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  February 4, 2012
Cool!!!So Beckmann is the other Caleb???i thought that you were just using the head in convenience.
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  February 4, 2012
Cool!!!So Beckmann is the other Caleb???i thought that you were just using the head in convenience.
 
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