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A Deadly Response 11: Acid Reflux
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Stewjon, shortly after the events in The Legend of Harash Soru 17.

Harash Soru: "From what I know Darth Sethron is an ancient Sith Lord. Like Nihilus and Sion he has found someway of returning from the never region of the Force. We need more information on it however, that's where you two come in."
Timmy Sterkel: "Yes Boss!... I mean Master."
Harash Soru: "I want both of you to go to Raxus Prime, there is a bounty hunter there who has supposedly had dealings with the Sith. Find him and see wht he tells you."



The two Jedi bowed and then walked away.

Timmy Sterkel: "Finally, a mission!"
Harash Soru: "Be mindful both of you! The mission may seem easy but do not lose focus."
Atlas Vomaria: "Understood Master. I'll keep us on track."



The two Jedi climbed into their fighters and blasted into the atmosphere.

Atlas Vomaria: "I feel, uneasy."
Timmy Sterkel: "Ha! I don't! Our first mission Atlas!"
Atlas Vomaria: "Just remember Master Soru's warning."



Timmy Sterkel: "Yeah yeah yeah. Force this and lack of forsight that."
Atlas Vomaria: "Timmy!"
Timmy Sterkel: "What? Like you aren't even the tiniest bit excited."
Atlas Vomaria: "We have been given a job Master Sterkel. Not a party."
Timmy Sterkel: "Fine! I forgot that you have the same sense of humour as a hungry Bantha."



The two Jedi arrived on Raxus Prime and began their search. Finding nothing of interest.

Timmy Sterkel: "Well, the bounty hunters obviously not here. Lets go."
Atlas Vomaria: "We can't leave because you are bored."
Timmy Sterkel: "Fine! I was just hoping for a bit of action, something entertaining."



The sky rumbled suddenly as a flash of thunder illuminated the murky sky.
A deep laugh filled the air.

Darth Leviathan: "Greetings, Jedi whelp. Welcome to Raxus Prime."



The two Jedi spun about, activating their lightsabers.

Timmy Sterkel: "Hey Atlas, its the welcoming party. And only four hours late!"
Atlas Vomaria: "Timmy will you please!"
Darth Leviathan: "Oh don't worry Jedi. If your friend's blade is as sharp as your wit then you have nothing to fear."



Leviathan grinned.

Darth Leviathan: "I doubt that though."

With a roar the Sith lept from the rickety watch tower.



The lightning again flashed through the sky as Leviathan and Sterkel clashed their blades together.

Atlas Vomaria: "Who are you?"
Darth Leviathan: "I am Darth Leviathan, apprentice to the reawakened Lord of the Sith, Darth Bane!"



The Jedi flipped over Leviathan, who now turned his blade on Atlas.

Timmy Sterkel: "Bane?!"
Darth Leviathan: "Yes thats right. Darth Sethron's final act was to awaken Bane and I from our sleep. He hoped we would help him. Instead we will destroy his Empire and build our own!"



Leviathan reached out and used the Force to hurl Atlas into the piles of junk.



Atlas grunted as he hit the twisted metal. Another bolt of lightning lit up the sky.

Timmy STerkel: "But how?"
Darth Leviathan: "Sethron had a machine, some potions to. I do not know how exactly. But he used it to bring back Sith to raise an army. An army that Bane and I will rule."
Atlas Vomaria: "You Sith turn on each other, its a plague thats haunted your lives. You will one day turn on Bane."



Leviathan backflipped, landing back on the watchtower.

Darth Leviathan: "Two Sith, Bane and I. That is my dream. I will never betray my Master!"



Timmy Sterkel: "Atlas, you are wounded. You cannot continue. Run my friend. Master SOru must hear this."
Atlas Vomaria: "Eugh, no. Timmy. I can fight."
Timmy Sterkel: "No Atlas. Go. Live a good life. For both of us."
Atlas Vomaria: "The Force be with you Timmy Sterkel."
Timmy Sterkel: "Mm, it had better be."



More lightning carved through the sky as Atlas hurried away.

Darth Leviathan: "A noble act Jedi. But a foolish one."
Timmy Sterkel: "Come Sith! Lets finish this!"



The two warriors jumped into the air, their blades crackling and sparking as they passed.



Timmy landed on the watchtower as yet another bolt of lightning flashed.
He reached out with the Force, and jumped.



Timmy flew over Leviathan and landed on the piece of junk he had thrown into the acid river. He took a few quick slashes at Leviathan but the SIth parried them easily.

Darth Leviathan: "Clever..."



Feeling the junk dissolving beneath him Timmy jumped into the air. However he suddenly felt an invisible hand reaching out and grabbing him tightly.



Timmy barely had time to register what was going on before he was hurled into the watch tower. The rusted metal and splintered wood collapsing on top of him.



Leviathan pulled Timmy out and held him over the acid river.

Darth Leviathan: "Any last words Jedi?"
Timmy Sterkel: "To... Die a Jedi. There is... No greater honour."



Timmy felt the iron grip that held him loosen and he dropped into the river.



Darth Leviathan watched as the acid ate away the Jedi. He then turned and headed back to his Master.



Comments

 I like it 
  February 25, 2012
Ouch!!! Getting dropped into an acid river, does not seem like a very fun way to die!
  February 10, 2012
Could you add my Zor ember to your comics? Oh and by the way could you forget about the whole zekk starlight thing? Thx
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  February 9, 2012
Sorry i just have seen your comment a moment ago! I really would like it to be in your story! Name: Sir Jayko, of the Knights Kingdom series. Spesies: Human. Homeworld: Morcia. Lightsaber: Blue. Rank: Knight, General.
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  February 9, 2012
Awesome mate :D A really great battle :D Looking forward to seeing more ;)
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  February 8, 2012
awesome harry
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  February 7, 2012
Nicely done! I like the scenes on Raxus Prime!
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  February 7, 2012
Excellent story! Amazing work!
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  February 6, 2012
Another good episode! Keep 'em comin! Also stay tuned to a series that Im doing that will premier in the next few days :D
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  February 6, 2012
Nice Episode!
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  February 6, 2012
Really u killed me in my comics there's going to be 15 seasons which includes the new republic and I'm never going to die in mine but this is yours :)
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  February 6, 2012
Aw.....brotherly love. I still do believe that Leviathan will turn on Bane once they "rule" the galaxy. I hope Hara kills Leviathan. REVENGE!!!!
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  February 6, 2012
I agree with LB. 12! Very awesome!
 I made it 
  February 6, 2012
Quoting LM 123 Wow nice job harry again cool story.How you have so many lightsabers
I buy most of them off amazon :)
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  February 6, 2012
this is sooo amazing harry! im really loving to see my character come into action :)
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  February 6, 2012
Wow nice job harry again cool story.How you have so many lightsabers
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  February 6, 2012
Epic episode Harry. I love that duel. Can't wait to see the next one.
 
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