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Raptor Squad CYOA Episode 1.
Well, the first episode has come! For some reason in all my edited pic there is a small red laser in the middle, left side of the pic. Not sure why. I also had a few name problems so I changed the ARC troopers name from "Mike" to "Pick". I'm sorry for any inconvenience Brickturrion! Some of the pics also failed, I will fix them tonight becuase I have to go to school now. Anyway.
About this creation
Somewhere in the lower hemisphere Korriban......


A battle between the Republic and the Sepratists rages.....


Pick: "Keep firing, men, we have to hold out!"


Flake: "Sir! The enemy has overrun the western defenses. I've ordered the men to pull back!"


Clone trooper: "AAAArrrggghhh!"


Pick: "He's dead... Order the men to retreat. We'll activate the distress signal and abandon the trenches! We'll pull back to the Eastern defenses."


They pull back....


Meanwhile another battle is being fought....


Sixer: "Onward, Men! For the Republic!"


Sixer: "Commander! Your here!"


Pick: "Reinforce them! We can't let this area fall!"


Soon all the droids are destroyed.....


Pick: "Spark, go help with the dead and wounded."


Sixer: "Commander, I'm glad you arrived, we didn't stand a chance!"


Sixer: "The clankers will be back soon..... We need to repair our defenses and get the wounded to safety..."


Pick: "I sent out a distress signal, the republic will reinforce us soon. We just have to hold out until then."


Meanwhile on the Republic Cruiser "Victory".....

Blister: "We received a distress call earlier today. I want you 2 to answer it."


Jolter: "Will do, sir."

Back on Korriban.....

Another battle is being fought.....


The clones fight hard.....


But some fall.....




Commando Droid: "Destroy the middle defenses."


Sixer: "Keep it coming boys!!!!"


Re-cap: "AAArrrggh!!!!"


Sixer: "Re-cap!!!!!"


Sixer: "AAAArrrrgggh!"


Pick: "Sixer!"



Here are your choices:

A: Keep on fighting, Sixer is probably dead.
B: Help Sixer, he might still be alive.
C: Retreat, your defenses have been breached.

Note: Remember each of your troopers will do what you choose.



Comments

 I like it 
  February 25, 2012
Brilliant! Nice story and the suits are amazing.
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  February 23, 2012
Awesome! I love it. I wish I was in it. Where did you get Pick's pauldron? By the way, all of the clones look really cool. -Keaton
 I made it 
  February 10, 2012
Ok, I'll get to work on episode 2!
 I like it 
  February 9, 2012
c please
E. B.
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~~ Patrick~~ .
  February 8, 2012
Great episode I pick B
 I made it 
  February 8, 2012
Quoting Zor Ember Please don't call me dumb for asking, but what does cyoa stand for and what is it?
CYOA stands for Choose Your Own Adventure. Its a comic series where people sign up as characters and, at the end of the epsiode, they are given a choice. They must decide what their individual character will do.
  February 8, 2012
i like it too bad i am not in do you want to be in this. http://www.mocpages.com/moc.php/302002
 I like it 
  February 8, 2012
Pretty cool though you stole (JK) my squad name, I have been working on decals and names for my Raptor squad lol
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  February 8, 2012
Alrighty then. This is probably going to kill me, but B, help him.
E. B.
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Dave '
  February 7, 2012
B! Never leave a man behind! BTW name my guy mike! JK Name him whateveh u want!
  February 7, 2012
Please don't call me dumb for asking, but what does cyoa stand for and what is it?
 I made it 
  February 7, 2012
Quoting Reece S. Great job! Do I get a say in what to do if I'm not in the episode?
You still have to make a choice but I probably won't kill you if you don't.
  February 7, 2012
Great job! Do I get a say in what to do if I'm not in the episode?
 I like it 
  February 7, 2012
Great episode!
 I made it 
  February 7, 2012
Quoting Dave ' B! Never leave a man behind! BTW name my guy mike! JK Name him whateveh u want!
I already have! All the hardsuit troopers already came with a name.
 I made it 
  February 7, 2012
Quoting Original Channel of MOCpages (Caleb) B! I'm in this right?
No, sorry.
 I made it 
  February 7, 2012
Thanks everyone!
 I like it 
  February 7, 2012
B, Great episode.
 I like it 
  February 7, 2012
c man those heavy troopers look great
 I like it 
  February 7, 2012
Wow that's amazing! I love their armors so much! Great buildings also! Maybe you could improve your rockwork. Try to use 1x1 and 1x2 roof tiles only. Then just fill the gaps. Hope this helps somehow :P
 I made it 
  February 7, 2012
Quoting LB. 12 LOL :D. Come to my chat.
K, I'll be there.
  February 7, 2012
LOL :D. Come to my chat.
 I made it 
  February 7, 2012
Quoting LB. 12 Great episode. I choose B. Clones rule number one is never leave a man behind.
K, I thought you might say that. =D
 I like it 
  February 7, 2012
Great episode. I choose B. Clones rule number one is never leave a man behind.
E. B.
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August .
  February 6, 2012
B. I want to be in! :) Great story, mate! =) Love the new clones. ;)
E. B.
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Vladimir R.
  February 6, 2012
Awesome story! Looking forward for more!
 I like it 
  February 6, 2012
B! I'm in this right?
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  February 6, 2012
Cool! A! BTW, thanks for reserving me a spot! :)
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  February 6, 2012
(This is Reynolds) I want B! Save Sixer!
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  February 6, 2012
D: Do the hokey-pokey! JK actually do B. A would also work.... Or mabey C.... ;P
  February 6, 2012
Great work!!!! And ya Picks my nickname anyway, so it worked out fine! I vote for B, can't leave a man behind!!
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  February 6, 2012
I choose C, they need to retreat (wait for Raptor Squad) and find shelter to hide in. They need to rest, and hope for Republic aid. - Kyle
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  February 6, 2012
LOL, didn't even know you made Raptor Squad CYOA
 
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