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Odyssey of a Jedi: Prologue
Here is my long overdue series that I have been working on for the past month! It tells of the story of my sig-fig or self moc, Jay Adkins and his journey to being a Jedi Master. The dialogue and action are below the photos so enjoy! There are many more to come so stay tuned!
About this creation
The Jedi Temple on Coruscant, about 40 years after the Battle of Yavin; Jedi Master Jay Adkins is in his personal study, staring at his old battle helmet, deep in thought.....



"It has been years since I have had an apprentice of my own…at least I can teach this one during a time of peace so she can learn how to survi--”



The sound of a doorbell cuts off his last thought.

"Come in!"



A small girl enters his office.



“Hello Master Adkins? My name is Lamita Thuuri and I was instructed by Grand Master Skywalker to report to your office.”



“Ah yes! Welcome my young apprentice, you are just in time for a very important lesson. Here, take a seat.”



Lamita sits down in the offered chair- attentively listening to what her new master has to say.



J: “Under my tutelage, you will learn many things that most masters, save for Master Skywalker, can teach you. But before we can begin, you must listen to my story. It will take a while to complete but afterward you will understand why I will be teaching you things the other students will never learn.”

L: “I will listen and try to understand to the best of my capabilities, Master.”



J: “Good, good…Now, let me tell my story… and remember, it is not the title that will make you a master of the Force but your journey there is what will make you…"



"I was born on the planet Commenor 12 years before the start of the Clone Wars. It was a planet just outside the Core Worlds and my family made a good living."



My father, Jeremy Adkins was a very charismatic man who captained a light freighter by the name of the Red Macaw. I didn't see him very often but he was a good man.



My mother stayed at home in order to raise my 9 year old brother at the time. His name is Peter.



And there's me. I only lived on Commenor for 8 years due to the harrowing visit...



...of HIM.....




Thanks for reading and please rate and comment or like! Remember this is just the prologue and there are many more to come full of adventure and action so stay tuned please!!



Comments

 I like it 
  August 10, 2012
PLEASE continue this soon as you had me hooked on every word... this is fantastic! I'm gonna fave it
 I made it 
  June 9, 2012
Quoting Harry 863 Are you going to carry this on at some point J Man?
Yes Harry, I am going to- as it says in the Folder, its just on hold. The GFW has allowed me to really work on my Star Wars building, such as different planets and places. I am also going to be taking a break from Star Wars and have a rather large Castle Moc in the works but come July I should get it going again. Thanks for your concerns tho.
 I like it 
  June 6, 2012
Are you going to carry this on at some point J Man?
J Man
 I like it 
Admiral Varkov
  March 7, 2012
Great comic! The backgrounds are great and the narrative style is very well done!
 I like it 
  February 20, 2012
Pretty sick I love the background could u check out my commander Wilffe phase 2 V2
 I made it 
  February 20, 2012
Quoting Harry 863 Awesome comic, and great opening! The presentation is great! I shall be favouriting you so I don't miss any episodes haha ;)
Thanks! And same to you! :)
 I like it 
  February 20, 2012
Awesome comic, and great opening! The presentation is great! I shall be favouriting you so I don't miss any episodes haha ;)
 
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