Species: Agori of Air and Earth
Alignment: Toa, Leader of the Toa Magna
Occupation: Defending Spherus Magna against threats, like the Blaholre (formerly) and the Makuta; Toa; Being on the Council of Toa
Elements: Air and Earth
Titles: Brother, Tarsh, Dude (by Veshtar only), Toa, Glatorian (fomerly), Leader, Master of Air and Earth, Master of the Contradicting Elements, The Collector
Mask: Kanohi Hau (Mask of Shielding), allows the wearer to block all projectile attacks (like lasers, bullets, ect. and excluding swords and other melee weapons)
Weapons: Air and Earth sword, Iron sword with toxic shooter, ancient Skrall blades (x2), Earth broadswords (x2), thornax launchers with guns (x2), Dual wrist guns (x2), Guitar/Sword, pistol, machine gun, ninja star, assault rifle, wrist blades (x2), Lightsaber
Equipment: Backpack, HUD, com, iPod
Story: Tarshduk was a unique warrior, as he was of dual elements (Earth and Air). He is a daring, brave, and smart warrior. Tarshduk was originally a Glatorian, and was very good at it; as he would try to never give up despite the odds. As a result, he was very successful in the arena. Tarshduk was naturally gifted with the ability to lead and to fight. He was also very honorable and didn't fight dirty. While not in the arena, Tarshduk enjoyed exploring Bara Magna, collecting weapons that he thought were interesting and hanging out with friends. He also studied variety of fighting styles to create his own unique style.
As with many Glatorian, Tarshduk fought in the Battle of Bara Magna to defend his village against the Rahkshi and Skakdi, and because of him and some other Glatorian, saved the village of Tesara from the invaders. After that fateful battle, he went back to being a Glatorian. One day, he was brought to a room after one of his arena battles. In the room, he met three Turaga, Firox, Whinado, and Watock. They said that Tarshduk was chosen for a very special task, gave him a stone, and left. A few weeks after this, a Matoran messenger came and told Tarshduk to follow him. Tarshduk followed the Matoran to an ancient temple where he met the other Glatorian who would also become Toa Magna (Kirax, Fikar, Strarix, Veshtar, Tarvank).
In the temple, they became Toa and the Turaga Galaxy gave them the task of defending Spherus Magna from threats. Almost instantly, he became the leader of the Toa Magna with Kirax as his right-hand man. He and Kirax would usually come up with a plan before going into battle, but if he has to, will also improvise. He and his team have accomplished many key events in their history, including: stealing the Great Kanohi Mask of the Dead back from Makuta Teridax and destroying it in the great volcano of Gradow, fighting off the Blaholre at Tajun and other key cities of Spherus Magna, destroying Bloninux, helping hunt down the surviving Makuta and Dark Hunters, and many other events that have saved Spherus Magna.
He has many friends, like his teammates, other Toa, and many Agori, Matoran, and Glatorian. After one very fateful battle where Tajun was almost conquered by Skrall under the command of unknown warlords, Tarshduk was awarded a medal of honor for his bravery and courage from the Council of Toa and has since been inducted into it. He now roams Spherus Magna with his team in search of something that threatens the safety of Spherus Magna. Along the way, he spars with some passerbys to get even stronger. He also helps Kirax to try to find a cure to his dark infection. He also serves as the peace keeper between the two brothers, Veshtar and Tarvank.
Now, onto Tarshduk and his updates!
Side View 2
Feet and Shins; not much changed here :)
Feet and Shins, Side View; changed the lime studs on his ankles to gold ones :)
Feet and Shins, Back View; changed the lime minifigure fins to black :D
Thighs and Waist; same structure, just changed the lime parts to gold or black and added some greebles :D I really like how they look :)
Thighs and Waist, Side View; Ninja Star stored here and some greebles shown :)
Thighs and Waist, Back View; changed lime studs to gold ones :)
Torso; still not custom, but will be. I added some greebles to cover up some stuff that was left after I changed how his waist articulation was connected :)
Upper Arm; completely custom! :D It looks very nice and keeps the armor on well :)
Lower Arms; completely custom! :D They are a little thin, but oh well :P He still has his com and his wrist missiles :)
Hands; changed the lime to gold or black :)
Upper Arms, Side View; here you can see how bulky they look. They are very compact and don't leave many gaps :D
Lower Arms, Side View; Like them? I do :P The wrist guns have been shortened for more poseability and to allow him to pull sneak attacks >:D
Hands, Side View; same comment as the last view of the hands :P
Back; changed the lime to black. You'll see what that wire is for later :P
Head, Back View; yes, that's hair :P
Head, Front View; the wire connects to his ear and HUD
Custom Head FTW!
The head by itself with me holding it :P
Side View of head
Back View of head
Top View of head
Yes, it can fit the Hau and the Tarduk Mask :D
The eye piece, it's glow-in-the-dark!
Kinda Crossing his Arms
Tarshduk: Like a Bo-
Me: No >:D
Wielding Ancient Skrall Swords
Tarshduk: Want a piece of me!?!
Wielding Earth Broadswords
Tarshduk: Come and get it!
Wielding his new Wrist Blades
Tarshduk: These are great! Thanks Jordan!
Me: Thank you!
Wrist Guns Ready to Fire
Tarshduk: Taste Lead!
Rockin out on his guitar (no photoshop on this btw)
Tarshduk: Davix isn't the only one!
Aiming his Assault Rifle
Tarshduk: Boom! Headshot!
Veshtar: Yeow! *thump*
Wielding his Iron Sword
Tarshduk: This thing is heavy...
Click for music:
Lightsaber! Yes, there are gold bladed lightsabers :)
Playing my 3DS
Tarshduk: Go Zekrom!
Tarshduk on my iTouch
Tarshduk: Wow! Look at Cossy!
Tarshduk listening to his iPod (yes, that's what it was)
Tarshduk: I need a hero! To save me now! I need a hero!
(Tarshduk is listening to "Hero" by Skillet)
Size comparison to Kirax
Kirax: Dang! You're tall!
Tarshduk with Fikar, Kirax, and his pet rahi
Tarshduk and his pet rahi
Tarshduk, Jordan, and Jordan Cuben (my siggys, except Jor'an, my sci-fi siggy, and Jordan Stone, my HF self-moc)
4th wall: This was a long awaited revamp by me :D It all started when I got to help in a Lego Store on Feb 17. For working there, I got to fill a grab bag with all the pieces I wanted. (I got a lot of technic and unusual parts, such as the glow-in-the-dark tile) Then on Saturday, I got to work on this guy. I started with the arms and continued from there. Then I eliminated the lime by popular demand :D Then, came the head. The head was a struggle to make. The initial design worked, but the detail was the difficult part. The hair was hard to attach correctly, but I got it after a while. Tarshduk looks great now in my opinion! I can't wait to make him fully custom!
Don't forget to comment, rate, and fave me! I want this to be my most popular moc! Please help this get 60+ likes!
Your Score: 6.5/10 Its a good MOC, but I feel like there's too much going on in it (maybe overgreebling?). I love the gun you made for him, and the custom head, but the amount of greebling makes it tough to see the whole shape of the body. Also, the photos after the lightsaber one seem, well, a bit random. They just draw out the MOC more than necessary.
Ther are some fine techniques used and some nifty ideas, but at the end of a day if I still remember it, I will remember it like this: "a bionicle MOC, not sure what it looked like though." Do something new, or we will all forget you. Make something new, or at least something that has not been done many times. Like "rahi" or whatever the non-humanoid bionicle are called.
It is hard to illustrate the details of a MOC that uses so much black. But you did it quite well in this posting. At first, the details remain obscured, but later in the presentation, you supply ample close up shots of every (every single) inch of the MOC. so really, there are no questions left unanswered. You did let some blurry photos slip in and that is never a good idea. Over all, a good presentation. Attack!
Awesome, Love it! Colour scheme 3/5 Is sometimes all over the place but in some places, it works
Uniqueness 5/5 Haven't seen anything like this (In a good way!) Story 4.5/5. Some plot holes but still is good. Extra I don't really like the random pieces all over the place sometimes. Overall 4/5 EPIC
Very creative moc. One thing though color scheme is very confusing. Creativity 4/5 colors make it hard to tell how the body is built. Great build but torso could be better. Presentation 5/5 complete bio on the page and in detail. Photography 5/5 great work on showing details. Weapons 5/5 very versatile weapon collection love all the weapons dude. Over all score 5/5
Custom 4/5(80%) Design 5/5 color 3/5 Bio 5/5 Back Story 5/5 pose-able:4/5 and Creatity:5/5 Total:31/35 Final Ranking:Imperfect Ulitma
okay the main flaw is there is too many colors,gold,silver,black,green and even white
Nice job Jordan! I love the fact that the lime green is gone, it just works with the color scheme. Only major complaint is the simplicity/lack or rear armor on the back of his lower legs. Maybe some custom pieces, or more armor would REALLY help the look. I'm going to post a new Galvis soon, so be on the look out for it! Nice work! - Kyle
You have definitely make a large improvement since the last version :D Everything looks great, however I do think that his legs don't seem to be in proportion with his body, try and focus less on greebles with him. Anyway other then that, nice work man :D
Wow! This guy is great! I really like the custom head and how versatile it is with masks. Another great thing is that he has no lime green. But I still find him difficult to look at due to all of the things that are going on on his body, what with grebes and all.
By the way, you're almost never on Bionicle RPG, and neither are any of the other admins or mods, so could you make someone who's active an admin?
Ah, this is much better! Although his arms are still supergreebled, his chest isn't so big that it makes him look so top heavy! Perfect! Only complaint is that the torso is slightly too thin, just a tad bit armor around would perfect the look! Otherwise, excellent! :D
Okay, foryou guys who think he is over-greebled, I don't think he is. I personally would prefer to have a filled in moc, than to have a not greebled moc with holes in it :) I do greebles to fill in gaps and holes in a moc and a little detail... Please, don't complain :(
Thank you so much guys! I need to change one pic later, but I haven't had time... Thanks for all the good comments and constructive criticism. That was one of the reasons I did this revamp. I hope to make this my most popular moc. I totally agree Legofreak and Cody :)
Very nice update! I loved how you removed the lime and the spreading of gold. The hair is awesome and kinda reminds me of Predator. He has a very nice ensemble of weapons, and the better photography was also a key part to this MOC. I tip my hat to you sir!
Love the new updates. Nice job on removing the lime and spreading the gold. One thing though, I think you should fill in the back of his legs, he'd be dead with a slice to the back of his shin. Anyways, good work here. Can't wait for more. ;D