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Consumed By Fire: Chapter 1

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Finaly! Chapter 1 is done! Written, Photographed and Designed by myself. Photo editing Done by Myself and Chronos Omega. Enjoy! =)

About this creation

Who am I, you ask? Well...

Private Mike Stinger

Front line Infrentry.

These two are my comanding officers. Who's the enemy? The scum of the universe.

My adventures for this story started one day on mission...

BBZZZTTTTTT! FROOOSSSHHK!
M: WHOOOAAAAA!!!

WHHAAAAAAAOOOAAAAA!
FROOOOOSSSSSHHHK!

*THUD* M: Whoa! What was that?

M: Oh, Sh...

BANG!!!!!

Hours later...

M: Where the heck am I?

M: More importantly, how did I get here?

M: Wow! This place pretty big!

A few minuits after exploring later...

M: A door!

M: *grunt* *grunt*

M: Now how are you suposed to open this thing?

*C R E E E K*
M: Well that worked.

(door goes BANG!)
M:.......

M: This place is weird. And what's with all these helmets?

M: Yeh, werid. What an intriguing mask.

M: I wonder what it feels like?

M: What the...? AH! AHH!! AHHH!!!

M: *pant* *pant* What was that? I gotta get out of here!

M: Thank Makuro! I found the door!

M: Hmmm, now how do I open it? Ah yes!

M: OPEN!!

M: ......

M: Come...

...On!

M: Well that worked.

M: What th...?

?????: STEP NO FURTHER!
M: !??! Who...?

Mask of Light: I am the Mask of Light.
M: Where-
MoL: You are in a sacred place of healing.

MoL: Kneel.
(he kneels)

*crrraack*

*clang*
M: ???

*clang clang*

CRACK!

M: Ha ah! Whoa.

MoL: Kneel.

M: ! ? ? !

MoL: You may want to cover your eyes...

FLASH
M: Ah! That's bright!

Hours latter...

M: Hmmm... Wha th?

Owww...My head!

M: WHOA! What the heck?

M: I,...I've changed!

M: Now this is cool!

A little later...

M: ? That weird mask has gone!?

THUD!
M: *oof!*

Karron: Die Toa! (creates fireball)
(REALY sorry about the blury picture)

WHOOSH!

SLICE!
K: Ahhg!

K: Come at me Toa!
M: Who are you?

K: I am Karron! Makuta!
M: AHGGGG!!!

M: Now what's happening? Ahhhgggg!!
BUMP!

WAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

K: My mask! ! ! !

K: This one will have to do.

K: Now to be gone.

K: We shall meet again Toa!

A few seconds later...

I...

Am...

Norrak,

The Last Toa.

That's who I am.

I'm glad that's over with! More coming soon...

MOC on
~ Norrak =)

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jmmy avila

April 12, 2012

kool moc dude. nice intro,

Chronos Omega

March 19, 2012

Ah, so you're a Whovian. ;) So wait, Karron killed him, and then he regenerated? Cool idea, and I suppose it could allow for lots of variation between forms.

I made it

Norrak The Last Toa

March 9, 2012

Quoting Demontile the Demon god of Darkness and ? Now i UNDERSTAND PERFECTLY WHAT HAPPENED.So first off Norrak(a hero) went into this temple and touched this mask which took all his Shadow out of him and made the shadow into a evil being whom has his name Karron(Norrak backwards) and the mask of Light made him into a Toa (looks like Pure)(which in a way means that the mask thought that Norrak never was meant to be a Hero but a Bionicle).the masks were destroyed and stuff and thats it.

Correct! =)

I like it

Demontile the Demon god of Darkness and ?

March 9, 2012

Now i UNDERSTAND PERFECTLY WHAT HAPPENED.So first off Norrak(a hero) went into this temple and touched this mask which took all his Shadow out of him and made the shadow into a evil being whom has his name Karron(Norrak backwards) and the mask of Light made him into a Toa (looks like Pure)(which in a way means that the mask thought that Norrak never was meant to be a Hero but a Bionicle).the masks were destroyed and stuff and thats it.

I made it

Norrak The Last Toa

March 7, 2012

Quoting Mudslide Master of metru nui Very nice stroy i can't wait till chapter 2

Thanks =)

Quoting Jacobi Guardian of Water Wow. The best. Back story. I've ever seen. Keep it up! do you think I can Cameo as a matoran? If you have my new huna?

Thanks man! I don't have your Huna, sorry.=)

Quoting sorajel the sabertooth monochrome not bad im liking it so far and also try to use different words not just one second etc. try to use meanwhile or so

Ok =)

Quoting Demontile the Demon god of Darkness and ? I LOVE IT.so he found a temple and stuff

Pretty much, yeah. =)

Quoting Chronos Omega Very nice work, interesting to see that Norrak was originally a Hero. What's with the first Toa stage though? I haven't seen that before.

He was like a regenerating Time Lord(yes, I'm a fan of Doctor Who), So he wasn't quite done when he fought with Karron.=)

Quoting Wertman 8 WHOA DUDE! that's some epic piece of photography. But Norrak was a Hero Factory Dude?! 0.0 Can't wait for more!

Thanks. I didn't think the photography was that good. =)

Quoting Shockster Studios rock on dude. cani be in it more?

You too! I don't know, maybe...

Quoting Legofreak2444 ~ Two upgrades in five minutes, ALL RIGHT! Haha. Nice work, I think I'll be following this story. ;)

That's good to hear! =)

Quoting Ezekiel the created Sweet. I love the mask of light "set up"!

Thank you! =)