Balance of the Force Chapter 6: The Threat of Darkness

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Immediately following Chapter 5. As Republic Forces continue to liberate the jungle planet of New Cov from Separatist forces Karlo wanders away from the main force deep into the jungle...

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(Karlo continued his trek through the jungle of New Cov walking aimlessly but pressing on as if he had to)

Karlo-What am I doing? I should be back with the troops fighting!

(yet he continued on the same)

(He stopped at a clearing in the woods. The grass near the clearing had withered as if dead and there were strange stone obelisks standing guard around it. Save the sound of the waterfall and wildlife in the distance it was completely silent)

Karlo-What is this place?

(He walked further and heard a noise)

Karlo-Who's there?

*silence*

(He heard another rustling and activated his blade)

Karlo-Come out and face me you coward!

(He spun around to the sound of a chuckling he sees Janax Narr flanked by a pair of Jalka'Ri assassins)

Janax Narr-Hello boy, Where's your master!

(*deeper in the jungle* Master Ban-Kazi and his troops finish off a group of battle droids)

Commander Deverts-Area secure sir!

Ban-Good work men, continue on we've almost reached the Separatist command center and forced them off this rock! Commander continue on this path and make a perimeter around the base await my orders before attacking.

Deverts-Right away sir!

(Alinta and her troops arrive)

Ban-Alinta there you are! We're preparing for our final assault. Wait, where's the boy?

Alina-I was hoping he was here with you we were separated in the jungle somewhere.

(Karlo's ARF troopers run in)

Captain Bolt-You too, where's your commanding officer?

ARF-Trooper, haven't seen him since the jungle sir we-

Ban-Shhh!

Alinta-I sense it too.

Ban-The sith.

(*Back in the jungle*)

Janax-So boy you fell for my little trap did you? O'm not surprised mind tricks are very hard to resist especially when in a place such as this-A temple to a long dead sith lord.

Karlo-Cut to the chase Janax I'm not surrendering!

Janax-I thought you'd say that. It's been far too long since I've killed a Jedi!

(Their blades flash to life)

Janax-Kill him!

(Karlo strikes hard at Janax as the Jalka'Ri brings his blade to Karlo's neck)

(Karlo quickly jumps precariously atop an obelisk as the Jalka'Ri follow him)

(Both Jalka'Ri balance on their columns surrounding Karlo)

(Karlo makes a split second decision and jumps right on the Jalka'Ri heading for the treetops)

(Both Jalka'Ri pursue him)

(Karlo lands atop the waterfall and blocks the Jalka'Ri attack)

(Alinta and Ban Kazi arrive)

Alinta-Look, up there!

(Janax leaps in their path)

Janax-Where do you think you're going?

Ban-Alinta you handle her, I'll deal with the Jalka'Ri!

(Janax slashes at Ban but misses as he charges toward the Jalka'Ri)

Janax-Hmm, look at that old woman! Isn't it strange only Ban Kazi seems to be able to defeat my Jalka'Ri, 1,000 year old sith assassins?

Alinta-Old woman! You're older than me! And it's just a coincidence Ban has defeated them twice now!

Janax-Or is it? You Jedi are so foolish to trust a former Sith! Only by the Dark Side is he powerful enough!

Alinta-I'll never join you!

Janax-That wasn't my point...

(The last Jalka'Ri had fought Karlo to the ground)

Jalka'Ri-Prepare to die Jedi!

Ban-Over here!

(The Jalka'Ri turns and is impaled by Ban-Kazi's blade)

Karlo-Thank's for saving me...again Master Kazi.

Ban-Just don't make a habit of it boy.

(The Jedi surround Janax)

Janax-Well look at this enemies and traitors all around. You Jedi should know something about Master Kazi here...

Karlo-We don't believe any of your lies Sith!

Janax-Oh, but it's only the truth that Ban here can only defeat the Jalka'Ri because of his Sith training but I've already said too much...see you next time through Ban!

(She laughs as she leaps away blowing the Jedi back)

Janax-Remember, once a Sith, always a Sith!

Alinta-Was it true what she said about you being Sith?

Ban-Yes, Alinta it was. I renounced the Dark Side long ago I'll tell you more once we've gotten off this rock. I think you both deserve an explanation....

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Harry 863

March 10, 2012

Ah very nice work Varkov. Ban's a really interesting character, looking forward to finding out what happens to him

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J Man

March 8, 2012

Awesome story line and minifigs! I also really like your landscaping and rock work, I would maybe get a sky blue poster board instead of using black to make things a little brighter...? Just a thought but still good work!

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