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Mission 1: An Unsuspecting Target (Verda squad at the end)
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{Closed network astablished} ch ch ch Kad's Log entry start Recording. Ch Ch ch so,we got are orders to start clearing the hanger. Antin is new to the game so sentra had to teach him a thing about the buzz droids i wonder what the Kaminoins are teaching them. Verd was ready to lock and load with his chain gun,but Ensowan wanted a good sniping place but you really can not do that in a crusier with white armor. we got down there and saw two bomb troopers dead one impaled with his gun the other with a stun stick. one droid was new but not a good droid he had very low armored. a good droid would be a dead one.
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Antin
A shiny that is a little stuborn.
weapons:Dc-15s
equipment:auto-turret
hobbies:talking
Friends/Girlfriend:None

Kad (My Sig-Fig)
A funny leader serious when wants to be.
weapons:dual DC-15s side arm blaster
equipment: Stolen commando droid sword.
hobbies:cleaning his sword,guns,and classified stuff
Friends/Girlfriend:A female human Jedi named Carleigh

Ensowan
A quiet sniper that has a very good shot
weapons:modified DC-17m with sniper attachment
equipment:n/a
hobbies:eating uj cake
Friends/Girlfriend:won't say

Verd
A very funny gunner that loves to shoot his chaingun.
weapons:Z-6 rotary cannon
equipment:n/a
hobbies:Reving his chain gun
Friends/Girlfriend:Says a Twe'lek almost went out with him

Sentra
A Very good marksman traind for stealth
weapons:DC-17m with sniper attachment
equipment:Jetpack
hobbies:Scoping in his rifle
Friends/Girlfriend:won't say


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Comments

 I made it 
  April 6, 2012
Quoting Ben The Lego Builder This is a good start to comic MOCs, but I have several suggestions. Firstly, you really need to improve the vig with more detail, colour matching and walls. Just adding some figures to some plates doesn't make a MOC. Secondly, you need to have some explanation as to what is happening in the pictures- this MOC doesn't really make sense. Shortening this MOC and having some clearer pictures would also help. Good luck, and keep on MOCing!
thx for the advice
  April 6, 2012
This is a good start to comic MOCs, but I have several suggestions. Firstly, you really need to improve the vig with more detail, colour matching and walls. Just adding some figures to some plates doesn't make a MOC. Secondly, you need to have some explanation as to what is happening in the pictures- this MOC doesn't really make sense. Shortening this MOC and having some clearer pictures would also help. Good luck, and keep on MOCing!
  March 20, 2012
not too bad, i dant think over 100 pics are needed though, and next time try some walls. they can add a lot of personality to a moc. and could you please look at my 225th squad: http://www.mocpages.com/moc.php/314728
 I made it 
  March 19, 2012
Yeah i agree and i do need to work on the buzz but i am not really having money fly to me:)
 I like it 
  March 17, 2012
Pretty cool but its a LIITLE bit too cramed in there also the buzz droid could use some improvement but this is really cool overeall!Esspecially the custom clone squad!
 I like it 
  March 17, 2012
epic
 I made it 
  March 16, 2012
Thanks Harry is that your name
 I like it 
  March 16, 2012
Nice work Ben
 
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