Haha I love you put "That's how small my collection is" is small letters hahaha XD for some reason I found that extremely amusing. Nice MOC, looks kinda like a Lego set (Which, for me, is not a problem at all).
I know many people might not like it but it shows effort in many ways. Legobob took a lot of risks and I admire that. It still needs work but here is my overall score out of 50.
Admiration: 10/10 (awesome idea).
Use of unique blocks: 10/10 (some of those blocks I have never seen before).
Overall: 41/50 Above average keep up the good work.