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"WE COULDN'T FIND ANYTHING UNTIL WE CAME ACROSS A STRANGE CAVE ENTERENCE. THERE ARE STRANGE NOISES COMING FROM INSIDE IT. WAIT....WHATS THAT!...........WE SEEM TO HAVE COME INTO CONTACT WITH A NEW ENEMY.....ITS GEONOSIANS.....BUT DIFFERENT......(RUSTY)SIR THEY...THEY...WON'T DIE!(ONESHOT)KEEP YOUR FIRING! WE NEED TO FIND THE SURVIVORS!!!
The landscaping is not very special, probably because of long straight lines. If you want to make it look natural, the longest straight line should be 4 studs long, never only one stud wide and when you make a turn, don't just change dierection, go one studs forward and one to the side, then again and maybe one more time, except, for instance, one forward and two to the side now, to give it a nice rounded effect.
You let your presentation slip a little here. Your pictures are pretty dim, and the last one is very blurry. Take the time to get your photos right. It makes a huge difference in the look of your MOC. Attack!