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Bystro Nogi
Bystro: "You can't outrun justice!"
About this creation
Category: Speed
Color: Tan
Hero Factory: Gear Up

I decided to redo him, what do you guys think of him now?



Full Back



Full Front



Twin Buzz-Blades



Kick



Vehicle Mode (I guess you could call it that)



He uses this mode the blaze after villains whether on open terrain or the confinements of cities.



Another shot of it.



Full shot of his vehicle mode.



Just another shot.

Name: Bystro Nogi
Specialty: Speed
Weapon: Twin Buzz-Blades
Bio: A very young Hero, he was selected for his help in the break out (he captured a few of the villains as they were trying to escaped). He's been given speed enhancements so he can go after Speedometer (a speed demon, see what I did there, lol). He's now off to find him, and bring him to justice.

4th Wall: Why tan you ask, I ask you, why not? Tell me what you guys think. I decide to redo him because I felt the other form was not what I wanted. Wish me luck!



Comments

 I made it 
  June 20, 2012
Quoting Chronos Omega Hey, I didn't know you were 18. That means you're technically an AFOL. :)
Indeed I am, I feel so old. OWW my back. :P
  June 18, 2012
Hey, I didn't know you were 18. That means you're technically an AFOL. :)
 I like it 
  April 29, 2012
@ Chronos, before it looked better, it had this jump jet speed pack, and I imagined it running across the desert super fast. This one is more..meh.
 I like it 
  April 24, 2012
Ok now complexity; 3 color scheme; 4.5 category; 5 it was a big improvement from the first time you entered, so good job.
  April 20, 2012
Colors get a 4.5, category gets a solid 5, and the build gets 3.5 points. Good work!
 I made it 
  April 2, 2012
Quoting Darren .Y Its a very awesome design and like what was said before me keep the legs! It looks awesome as is. As for the mask i think you should add in a secondary colour scheme, just enough so the colour dosnt dominate overall and add a mask that goes with that colour. Ive done it on my moc and experimenting with colour shemes are always fun. Hope I have helped you out with that part. Its still an awesome moc! :D
Well, problem is that's literally the only mask/helmet I have that would fit (both the design and the color scheme) so I can't really do anything about the head, but thanks for the input.
  April 2, 2012
While I agree with what RP said, I am confused by his comment that it embodies a "desert Hero" perfectly. This was in the speed category, just so ya know, RP.
 I like it 
  April 2, 2012
Its a very awesome design and like what was said before me keep the legs! It looks awesome as is. As for the mask i think you should add in a secondary colour scheme, just enough so the colour dosnt dominate overall and add a mask that goes with that colour. Ive done it on my moc and experimenting with colour shemes are always fun. Hope I have helped you out with that part. Its still an awesome moc! :D
 I like it 
  April 1, 2012
Nice job, good luck in the contest!
 I like it 
  March 31, 2012
Well I think he's awesome!
 I made it 
  March 30, 2012
Quoting Rahkshi Party Oy! Heh, could use a few modifications, but the legs are fine, like a lightning fast raptor. Who cares if it doesn't look humanoid enough? The contest was to think up of new exciting designs and this captures a desert hero perfectly, add a little detail and I am sure that you will have a nice contender here! ----Rahkshi Paar'tan
Thanks man!
 I like it 
  March 30, 2012
Oy! Heh, could use a few modifications, but the legs are fine, like a lightning fast raptor. Who cares if it doesn't look humanoid enough? The contest was to think up of new exciting designs and this captures a desert hero perfectly, add a little detail and I am sure that you will have a nice contender here! ----Rahkshi Paar'tan
 I made it 
  March 28, 2012
Quoting Chronos Omega Awesome work! We're still working out how the judging will go, so I'll come back later for that. :)
lol, I'll probably update him by then rofl.
 I made it 
  March 28, 2012
Quoting Dragonax lord of all things black and creepy AWESOME MOC! And you just knocked me out of the contest :P
ROFL!!!
 I made it 
  March 28, 2012
Quoting Toa M. It's a nice MOC, but I think you should have taken a little more time to improve it. the contest ends on April 15th, so you had quite a lot of time to make it as good as possible. I can see a few things that could be improved, particularly the limbs and lower torso, there are also a few colours that could be corrected. Hopefully I helped :) .
I might take this out and put up an updated version.
 I made it 
  March 28, 2012
Quoting Ro Garcia Ok, congrats on being the frist MOCist to submit a creation. An boy is this wicked looking! There's a good amount of bulk to him, you used a good amount of tan parts, so no problem there, and even thou I hate seeing system tires on a bionicle or HF creation, this looks well done. I mean I love it, I really do. Here's the bad part thou, he has ever characteristic look of a villian. He's angular, sharp points nearly everywhere, and he's got legs like an animal. I hate telling you this man, but every bit of his look screams villian to me. So here are my pointers for you. First, he needs a different face, that one no matter how you arrange it is gonna give teh impression of villian. There is a Turaga from Po-Koro who's got a tan mask, but if you can't get it, find a less sharp pointed mask and work it's color into the scheme of your creation. Second, redo the legs a bit to get rid of the animal looking legs. The more human looking, the more convining that it's a hero. You can have normal looking legs and still be fast. If anything if you can work it somehow into him, give him exhaust pipes coming outta his back to explain his fast movement. Honestly that's all I can think of to help. It's still early, so you have plenty of time. If not, oh well, stick a sick looking MOC!
Thanks for all the help, I think I will try to redesign the legs and maybe the arms, the head, I'm not sure what I can do about that, I'll see if I can try something though, thanks for all the feedback.
 I like it 
  March 28, 2012
AWESOME MOC! And you just knocked me out of the contest :P
 I like it 
  March 28, 2012
Awesome work! We're still working out how the judging will go, so I'll come back later for that. :)
 I like it 
  March 28, 2012
Ok, congrats on being the frist MOCist to submit a creation. An boy is this wicked looking! There's a good amount of bulk to him, you used a good amount of tan parts, so no problem there, and even thou I hate seeing system tires on a bionicle or HF creation, this looks well done. I mean I love it, I really do. Here's the bad part thou, he has ever characteristic look of a villian. He's angular, sharp points nearly everywhere, and he's got legs like an animal. I hate telling you this man, but every bit of his look screams villian to me. So here are my pointers for you. First, he needs a different face, that one no matter how you arrange it is gonna give teh impression of villian. There is a Turaga from Po-Koro who's got a tan mask, but if you can't get it, find a less sharp pointed mask and work it's color into the scheme of your creation. Second, redo the legs a bit to get rid of the animal looking legs. The more human looking, the more convining that it's a hero. You can have normal looking legs and still be fast. If anything if you can work it somehow into him, give him exhaust pipes coming outta his back to explain his fast movement. Honestly that's all I can think of to help. It's still early, so you have plenty of time. If not, oh well, stick a sick looking MOC!
  March 28, 2012
It's a nice MOC, but I think you should have taken a little more time to improve it. the contest ends on April 15th, so you had quite a lot of time to make it as good as possible. I can see a few things that could be improved, particularly the limbs and lower torso, there are also a few colours that could be corrected. Hopefully I helped :) .
 I made it 
  March 27, 2012
Quoting Deimos MOF He's good. I always wanted to have a tan moc but i only got the tan from the vorox...=(
Yep, the Vorox set had a ton of tan.
 I like it 
  March 27, 2012
He's good. I always wanted to have a tan moc but i only got the tan from the vorox...=(
 
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