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THE JUDGE TEST
so this is the test to see which 2 people i'll chose to be Judges of UBBC.All who want to be one have to Review these mocs
About this creation

These three are Troy X,Storm and Demonon





























so review all you can and be organised.see ya



Comments

 I made it 
  March 30, 2012
Quoting Silenthunt Productions Ok, here we go. Troy X, he's, quite simple I must say. I do like the idea of the face look, but so much more could be done. If it is purposefully meant to be this way, simple, then I'd suggest adding armor at least to keep the simple look but cover it up. Overall, I'd give it a 2/5 simply for lack of originality in most of the design, HOWEVER, the mask is a start, I'd suggest working on that. On to Storm, like the overall look, yet there are some areas that need work. The bright yellow really throws me off on the lower arms and chest and how the gold doesn't all match up bothers me as well. Also there doesn't seem to be an actual color scheme in this moc. It seems you ran out of pieces on this one. I'd suggest, to keep this from happening, decide on a color scheme (Like maybe gold and silver or such) and stick with it throughout the whole moc. This moc has hints of customization which help the look very nicely, for example the body design, although relatively simple it still looks good. The arm designs also have potential but some more work to hit the spot (color would help here). The lower legs I also like, but again the color (matched to the rest of the moc) throws me off. Overall it gets a 3/5. Now on to Demonon. Overall it looks fantastic, but there are some areas that still need work. I'll just get this out of the way, please change that green foot :P. The head design (although I can't see most of it) is also nice, matches the whole "custom look" the whole moc has. The left arms is nice, but the hand design needs to be smaller, I'm guessing you did this to get that demon look, but a smaller hand with claws would look better here, love the tubes though. On the the right arm. I like the aspect of the custom potential, but I think the forearm is too big and the hand is too big as well, but I am liking the overall look of it. The chest design is amazing, but could be better. Here's how, add more armor too it, and make the shoulders a little wider to match the thickness of the arms. Put armor to cover the chest and the lower torso and it should look perfect. The legs I like, nothing to gripe about there. Overall, great moc, there are just a few things here and there that need work, 4/5. Oh, and more pictures would be nice :P.
well you have to be best reviewer yet.you are a Judge unless someone else got something better(this is Perfect almost.
 I like it 
  March 30, 2012
Ok, here we go. Troy X, he's, quite simple I must say. I do like the idea of the face look, but so much more could be done. If it is purposefully meant to be this way, simple, then I'd suggest adding armor at least to keep the simple look but cover it up. Overall, I'd give it a 2/5 simply for lack of originality in most of the design, HOWEVER, the mask is a start, I'd suggest working on that. On to Storm, like the overall look, yet there are some areas that need work. The bright yellow really throws me off on the lower arms and chest and how the gold doesn't all match up bothers me as well. Also there doesn't seem to be an actual color scheme in this moc. It seems you ran out of pieces on this one. I'd suggest, to keep this from happening, decide on a color scheme (Like maybe gold and silver or such) and stick with it throughout the whole moc. This moc has hints of customization which help the look very nicely, for example the body design, although relatively simple it still looks good. The arm designs also have potential but some more work to hit the spot (color would help here). The lower legs I also like, but again the color (matched to the rest of the moc) throws me off. Overall it gets a 3/5. Now on to Demonon. Overall it looks fantastic, but there are some areas that still need work. I'll just get this out of the way, please change that green foot :P. The head design (although I can't see most of it) is also nice, matches the whole "custom look" the whole moc has. The left arms is nice, but the hand design needs to be smaller, I'm guessing you did this to get that demon look, but a smaller hand with claws would look better here, love the tubes though. On the the right arm. I like the aspect of the custom potential, but I think the forearm is too big and the hand is too big as well, but I am liking the overall look of it. The chest design is amazing, but could be better. Here's how, add more armor too it, and make the shoulders a little wider to match the thickness of the arms. Put armor to cover the chest and the lower torso and it should look perfect. The legs I like, nothing to gripe about there. Overall, great moc, there are just a few things here and there that need work, 4/5. Oh, and more pictures would be nice :P.
 I like it 
  March 30, 2012
Thanks :)
 I like it 
  March 30, 2012
ha ha ha yea your right excellent point!
Demontile the Chaos god of Darkness and ?
Tivo Scabs
  March 29, 2012
Now, I'm going to start with what I like. Storm's torso is very well done, Demonon has great asymmetry, and Troy X has a small, henchman-esque feel to him. My gripes include a few BIG flaws, and some small nitpicks. Demonon's torso is a bit too thin and long compared to his legs, and he appears to be a giant compared to the rest of your MOCs, which throws the idea of proper interaction almost out the window, it lands near the waste bin next to the window. Also, he looks like a self-MOC that has been "forced" into a custom torso and head. It just looks like you worked too hard on him, and the custom head looks very awkward. But Demonon has a nice charm to his aesthetic, has some great engineering, and has a tasteful Y-axis piece on his chest. Troy X is just simple, which is great for a troop builder, but not for an individual character. He looks awkward, but can easily be improved wile keeping the skeletal aesthetic. Storm is an interesting case. He has a phenomenal torso, but weird arms. I really don't like his lower arms, they could be thickly greebled and look great. I like his legs, but the mismatched colors are distracting. As a whole, these MOCs are okay, the high point being Demonon, and the obvious low being Troy X. All right, but I'm not sure if you intentionally put these as a group of bad MOCs and great MOCs as the test, or if it was random, but I gave my honest, unbiased opinion.
  March 29, 2012
Yaeh, kinda stupid question. Dark Blue? Or changing the feet design? You can make them custom...
  March 29, 2012
Alright, I'll keep it short. Troy X: 0/5. Poor design, extremely simple. Nothing more to say. (Yes, I do realize that he is intentionally stupid.) Storm: 3/5. Looks good, but the colors are asymmetrical, as is some of the design. I know that this is often intentional, but in this case it seems that it is just poor designing. Demonon: 4/5. Really nice MOC, certainly better than the other two. However, that green foot and a few minor miscolors etc. really bug me. Good job otherwise.
 I made it 
  March 29, 2012
Quoting Chronos Omega Alright, I'll keep it short. Troy X: 0/5. Poor design, extremely simple. Nothing more to say. (Yes, I do realize that he is intentionally badly made.) Storm: 3/5. Looks good, but the colors are asymmetrical, as is some of the design. I know that this is often intentional, but in this case it seems that it is just poor designing. Demonon: 4/5. Really nice MOC, certainly better than the other two. However, that green foot and a few minor miscolors etc. really bug me. Good job otherwise.
well this review could be better.like the flaws and more explaining
 I made it 
  March 29, 2012
Quoting Tivo Scabs Now, I'm going to start with what I like. Storm's torso is very well done, Demonon has great asymmetry, and Troy X has a small, henchman-esque feel to him. My gripes include a few BIG flaws, and some small nitpicks. Demonon's torso is a bit too thin and long compared to his legs, and he appears to be a giant compared to the rest of your MOCs, which throws the idea of proper interaction almost out the window, it lands near the waste bin next to the window. Also, he looks like a self-MOC that has been "forced" into a custom torso and head. It just looks like you worked too hard on him, and the custom head looks very awkward. But Demonon has a nice charm to his aesthetic, has some great engineering, and has a tasteful Y-axis piece on his chest. Troy X is just simple, which is great for a troop builder, but not for an individual character. He looks awkward, but can easily be improved wile keeping the skeletal aesthetic. Storm is an interesting case. He has a phenomenal torso, but weird arms. I really don't like his lower arms, they could be thickly greebled and look great. I like his legs, but the mismatched colors are distracting. As a whole, these MOCs are okay, the high point being Demonon, and the obvious low being Troy X. All right, but I'm not sure if you intentionally put these as a group of bad MOCs and great MOCs as the test, or if it was random, but I gave my honest, unbiased opinion.
well i am impressed.you even gave a who is the best and the worst(yes i made Tx the worst and Demonon as the best)good job
  March 29, 2012
Alright, I'll keep it short. Troy X: 0/5. Poor design, extremely simple. Nothing more to say. (Yes, I do realize that he is intentionally badly made.) Storm: 3/5. Looks good, but the colors are asymmetrical, as is some of the design. I know that this is often intentional, but in this case it seems that it is just poor designing. Demonon: 4/5. Really nice MOC, certainly better than the other two. However, that green foot and a few minor miscolors etc. really bug me. Good job otherwise.
 I made it 
  March 29, 2012
Quoting Chains, Toa Of Prisoners Troy X yet simple, is a good MOC. I like the mask thing you made for him. I don't think he needs armor because I think that would take away from the character. I give Troy X a 5/5 Now on to Storm. He has his ups and downs. First off all, my favorite part, His torso is AWESOME! It's perfectly made. I also like his lower legs the armor there is impressive. My complaints with this character is the colours. On his legs I would really suggest you change the colours to a black (I think that would be more fitting) Also the Gold is all different. I think you should keep all the gold the one colour. The upper arm looks a bit cluttered so I give Storm a 3.5/5 Now to the biggest, baddest and strongest from the three DEMONON!!! The legs are SOO BADA*S love it. I'm also a big fan of the left arm I admire it for looking bulky and just the right size. I don't like the right arm because it looks a bit long, I also don't like the way the body's so thin. As another person said i dont like the green foot and you should replace it with another colour (I suggest swapping it for a less important characters foot) But other than that Demonon is a 4/5 Hope this helps and good luck to everyone else (this took so long to type)
well so far you and Jmmy Avila are my choice unless someone beats you 2.
 I made it 
  March 29, 2012
Quoting jmmy avila ok first off i have noticed that some of your pics need to be rotated to an upright position like demonions full body pic. i like the build on his legs but suggest that he shoulf have more body armor and his foot should be a matching color, theres room for improvement 4/5. storm is a very creative creation but i would like him in a more uniform color along with some more armor 3/5. as for troy all i can really say is that if you where aiming for him to be a skeleton then you got the part but it doesnt seem like much effort was made so i would reluctanly have to say 2/5 because you tried. your over all score i would have to say is 3/5. im not trying to offend but these are the details i would look for if i where to be a judge.
:) GREAT JOB.but you missed 1 thing. Customization.
 I made it 
  March 29, 2012
Quoting Wertman 8 Replying to what you asked on the group, It's not that i don't want to be in the contest, I just wanted to help you if you were short of Judges. But it seems your not, and I would rather spend time working on my entry rather compeating to be judge. I can't wait for it to start :D
okay
  March 29, 2012
Troy X yet simple, is a good MOC. I like the mask thing you made for him. I don't think he needs armor because I think that would take away from the character. I give Troy X a 5/5 Now on to Storm. He has his ups and downs. First off all, my favorite part, His torso is AWESOME! It's perfectly made. I also like his lower legs the armor there is impressive. My complaints with this character is the colours. On his legs I would really suggest you change the colours to a black (I think that would be more fitting) Also the Gold is all different. I think you should keep all the gold the one colour. The upper arm looks a bit cluttered so I give Storm a 3.5/5 Now to the biggest, baddest and strongest from the three DEMONON!!! The legs are SOO BADA*S love it. I'm also a big fan of the left arm I admire it for looking bulky and just the right size. I don't like the right arm because it looks a bit long, I also don't like the way the body's so thin. As another person said i dont like the green foot and you should replace it with another colour (I suggest swapping it for a less important characters foot) But other than that Demonon is a 4/5 Hope this helps and good luck to everyone else (this took so long to type)
  March 29, 2012
ok first off i have noticed that some of your pics need to be rotated to an upright position like demonions full body pic. i like the build on his legs but suggest that he shoulf have more body armor and his foot should be a matching color, theres room for improvement 4/5. storm is a very creative creation but i would like him in a more uniform color along with some more armor 3/5. as for troy all i can really say is that if you where aiming for him to be a skeleton then you got the part but it doesnt seem like much effort was made so i would reluctanly have to say 2/5 because you tried. your over all score i would have to say is 3/5. im not trying to offend but these are the details i would look for if i where to be a judge.
 I like it 
  March 29, 2012
Replying to what you asked on the group, It's not that i don't want to be in the contest, I just wanted to help you if you were short of Judges. But it seems your not, and I would rather spend time working on my entry rather compeating to be judge. I can't wait for it to start :D
 I made it 
  March 29, 2012
Quoting L.A. Miranda In that piece, green and black were the more used. Don't you have them in black? It would be more suitable, I think.
:/ no.if i did i would of used it.green is totally outta this color
 I like it 
  March 29, 2012
In that piece, green and black were the more used. Don't you have them in black? It would be more suitable, I think.
 I made it 
  March 29, 2012
Quoting L.A. Miranda If you want to be a Judge for the Ultimate Bionicle Build Competition, you have to analyze and review this three MOCs. The two people that do it better than other will be judge. By the way, I want to ask... Why Demonon has a green foot?
good observation.i can't find a new silver foot
  March 29, 2012
If you want to be a Judge for the Ultimate Bionicle Build Competition, you have to analyze and review this three MOCs. The two people that do it better than other will be judge. By the way, I want to ask... Why Demonon has a green foot?
 I made it 
  March 29, 2012
Quoting sniperray213 Ultimate Sniper im confused about this....
are you going to be a Judge for the Ultimate Bionicle Build Competition.if not then don't worry about it.
  March 29, 2012
im confused about this....
 
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