Nice village! :) Maybe you should add huts, or have a plaza in the center.

I really like your revamp of the good guy '05. The designs are interesting, and I think that it's amazing how pose able you have made him while retaining his original appearance. Also, I followed you advice on toa revenance. He now has custom lower legs. If you can, please provide constructive criticism. http://mocpages.com/moc.php/320022

This is brilliant! I hope you will make more of those nameless characters into excellent MOCs!

Thanks for the comment, it's good to see you back :)! And yeah, the simplicity is just the legs and arms, I'm still not that good to do good-looking designs there (apart from that I don't have enough connectors :S). But of course I'm trying :P

Though I'm normally not a big fan of simple MOC's in comics, the great torso design he has, and just how poseable he is, is great! Lovely work man :) Come to think of it though, he could be a lot more simple couldn't he :P Who am I kidding :P

Very nice and are you going to compete in the contest. The 1st round create a starting creature or makuta

Ooh... suspense :D

Would be possible. But I'm already working on a how-to for Vastaras old body design for sniperray, so it will take some time. You signed up very late and most of the story was already planned. But you will appear... but your self-MoC isn't one of the villagers. Also, please remember, this chapter with the simple builds is only the first of three big ones! @All: Some of the characters who are in can't be seen here, like Jacobi or Argin.

Great!!! But wasn't I going to be in your story?

Could u make a how to on that body? I would love it so much if you did.

Thanks to everyone for the comments! Now to the questions. @Tavis: I don't think I'll make more of them in the next time, because I still have to build many creations for the story. @Archangel: It's Vored, not Deus. And sorry, but no, thats not Archangel in there (who do you thought he would be?). And who is Solons? @Jacobi: Where is a saloon? I must say, I haven't created one. But when you imagine one is there, then I've done a good job building the set, didn't I? @Gringat: The idea is fantastic... I'll look if it's possible with his back design. @RazorClaw: It wasn't that bad. Actually, only the box I used to take them outside has sand on it now :)

Brilliant idea! Looks great.

Pretty cool! Nice torso! You can probably create a private group and add me in it. But I'll finish Legofreak's ManHunt first if you don't mind :)

Their feet will get dirtied in the sand and now you had to wash them :(

I see me!!! Thanks again for putting me in the story! The Moc looks pretty awesome, and I like the concept on which you based it off of. Great job and I'm very excited for the first chapter of the story.

Can't wait for the story. :D

I was unsure of this creation's epicness when I saw the thumbnail, but when I saw who it was built by I was reassured. Your story looks great! I have never seen someone put that much time into setting! Love the moc, love your stuff. Can't wait for the story!

Very nice work! I would have liked to see some backstory. Excellent set for your story, too!

Everything seems to be Artificial these days :P

Excellent recreation, even down to the missing left hand and the ripcrd for a sword. Putting a rhotuka spinner somewhere on his body would be cool though - maybe one that flicks up from his back like in the movies?

Is That saloon or a coffee hut i spy? In my story line, Jacobi's a coffee hut assistant. I like how you made the walls for the village. any who, Charlak looks great

Not bad! I like the body design. :D

i see cossy, legofreak,deus or thats you , gringat, snipe, i think archangel, and i think thats call an, plus solons. great village!

Great idea and great design i like the little villange too

He is very nice. I have tried my hand at recreating those sets as well, but it didn't come out very well. I applaud your ability to recreate them.

Amazing Matoran! I LOVE that set design! Hope I can pull something like that off for my story...

Wow, loving this moc! And that preview looks excellent! :D

Nice one I love the body!!! the arms and legs need work... Great job!!!

I like this MoC. Expecially the idea of "upgrading" those good guys! Will you build the others as well or just this one?