Yoda stood in deep meditation. As he stood, Jedi Master Rom H'sdinn approached him.
Yoda- A new jedi, I believe I have found.
Rom- Who? Where?
Yoda- A child named Ian on Corellia. Find him we must.
At the Doskey residence. A tapping came from the door.
Mother- Come in.
Rom- I am Jedi Master Rom H'sdinn, And we believe your son is force sensitive. We must train him at the Jedi temple.
Mother- Alright, but you must promise he will be taken care of.
With a sigh, the mother handed her only son over to the Jedi.
Rom walked away carrying the baby.
Rom- I sense a great future for you. You will be powerful.
Great episode. The build is very nice, I especially like the bed. The only thing that could be improved is the room, it seems kind of empty to me. But add some random items like chairs and it looks much better. Keep MOCing!
These pics are much better! Lots of light, and pretty good (but not perfect) focus. It really changed the whole presentaion! Keep at it. Your photography is your weak spot right now. This is a great improvement. Attack!